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Posted: 13 years ago
Di mujhse naraaz ho

sorry na
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Posted: 13 years ago
Happy KriYaansh Friendz…

So I m back aftr a week hopefully….

Recap: Maharaja narrates d 1 year back incident to sam & d story goes in flash back….
Kriya & Rr meet @ airport, Rajvansh family is being attackd by goons, Kria tries to save Rr but cudn't, queen & smriti have also been shot by bullets.

Chapter-39
Now d bullets of goons were finished up , so dey fought wid dier own body. 1 of d goon aimed @ maharaja 4m behind kria cud c it , she gatherd strength & tried to defend him, but d goon pushed her away vry very harshly she fell down & rolled down d stairs & finally ended up wid hr head striking hardly against d floor.
Now d goons targeted d king & were about 2 shoot him when dey were being interrupted by d Indian police force(which as usual arrived late).
ACP: Mr. Raajvansh ab aapko chinta karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai, humari force ab aapke sath hai.
King broke down, he fell on his knees looked all around & found dat his world has been ended within few hours. He lost his senses , he cudn't respond to d immediate environment, was speechless, thoughtless unable to understand anything….
Den ambulance arrived, Maharaja got a lil back 2 his senses, he thot dat may be sum1 cud be cured, may be sum1 will remain alive.. he hurriedly with d help of compounders who descended 4m d ambulance placed the 4 bodies in ambulance.
*City Hospital*
Dey were brought to hospitals, doctors came with hurry 2wards dem, dey saw d injured bodies ,touched dier nerves & inspected dier heart-beat & declared dat Rr is dead & other 3 have sum chances of remaining alive.
Dr:In tino patients ko immediate operation ki zaroorat hai..
Ar: Dr toh aap jaldi kijiye , apko job hi treatment karna hai wo kijiye , jitna expense hoga hum den eke liye tayyar hai bus inmein se jinki bhi jaan bach sakti hai plzz unhe bacha lijiye.
Dr: ok Mr.Raajvansh we'll try our best!
The 3 patients were taken to different operation theatre.D best surgeons of Mumbai have been called 4 d surgery.
The red light @ 3 OT (operation theatre) was glown up.
Mahraja sat on d chair outside, he was physically & mentally broken, he was unable to understand how should he respond, wheather he shud cry 4 d loss of her only daughter, or get worried & tensed 4 d operations going on or should himself gather strength to face all these.. He was under such mental dielema dat his brain stopped working..
Another Dr. : Mr. Raajvansh aap bhi apna treatment karva lijiye aapko bhi kaafi chot aayi hai.
Ar: Haa..
He was taken to a room 4 his treatment.
2 hours later .
D red light of 1st room was off.
Mahraja quikly ran to d entry of dat OT,Drs team stepped out.
Ar: Dr. wo bacchi kaisi hai..
Dr. She 's f out of danger now, par unke sar par bahut chot aayi hai lagta hai kisi ne uske sar par rod se war kiya hai , aur wo..
Ar: Aur sidhiyo se niche girne par bh uske sar par chot aayi thi..
Dr. : Oh! I c dats y her brain recived serious injury..well I can't say anything now , wo abhi behosh hai kal ab situation kaisi hai wo toh unke hosh ane par hi pata chalega..
Ar: Ok Dr.
After few minutes of waiting 2nd red light was turned off.
Mahraja wid lot of hope ran to d OT.
Ar: Doc.. Doctr.. meri ..meri.. wi.. wife kaisi hai ab.
Dr.: We r sorry Mr. Raajvansh but ur wife has just few minutes remaining in her life… D bleeding was so high dat we cudn't save ur wife.. U can meet her 4 d last tym..
Dr. leaves. Maharaja helplessly enters d OT, d queen lied on death-bed.
Maharaja nearing to d queen trying to control his tears, went & sat on d stool next to her bed, wrapped her ryt hand under his both hands & try to smile but tears took d place of smile on his face.
Queen: Mahraja aap nahi roenge hume pata hai, Jaipur ke Mharaja Arya Singh Raajvansh jaise veer raja rote hue achhe nahi lagte.. Aur hum aapse ur kaha ja rahe hai, hum toh apke sath humesha rahenge, kyunki hum toh aapki parchhai hai na…
King nods.
Queen: Maharaja b apko Rr ke pitaaji aur ma dono ka farz akele he nibhana hai, hum bas aapse yahi kehna chahte hai ki aap zindagi bahr khush raheyiga aur humari raajkumaari ko itna pyaar dijiyega ki unhe humari kabhi yaad hi na aye..
King was taken aback hearing d word raajkumari .
Queen: Kya hua , mahraj Rr theek toh hai na..
Ar:Ha..nahi..
Queen: Ma..Mahra..Maharaaj kya hua(taking d last few breaths of her life) humari beti the.. theek toh hai.. na..
Ar: *slf talk* hum maharani ko unke akhri samay mein ye bata kar aur dukh nahi de sakta ki unki jaan unki bachhi Rr pehle hi..(he took deep breath) pehle hi ja..
Queen: Mahraaj R.. Rr.. kai.. kaisi hai..
Ar:Rr theek hai unhe kuch hi der mein hosh ajayega.
Queen picked up d breclet 4m d side table where her jwellery was placed as during operations all d jewells r removed 4m body.
He handed over d RR embedded breclet( d same breclet guyz which rey by mistake gave 2 scratches) to king.
Queen: Ye humari beti ko de digiyega.. ismein humari mamta aur unke liye dher sara ashir… ashirwaad hai…
Her fingers lost sensation & d breclet fell on king's hands.
Her body ceased ,king closed her eyez..& sat dier motionless..
King sat deir simply sat dier no words, no tears & no emotions..
After a while a ward-boy called him & took him to 3rd OT.
Dr.: hum inki bhi jaan nahi bacha sakte.. bullet pierced her straight away, & d poison has spread in her entire body…
Ar: Hmm…
Dr.: Patient shayad aapse kuch kehna chahti hai.
Mahraja walks inside d OT.
Smriti too on death-bed.
Smr: Mujhe nahi pata aap log kaun hai, aur meri beti kriya ne q aap logo ke liye apni zindagi dau par laga di.
Par shayad meri kria hai hi aisi khud se jada dusro ki khushiyo ke bare mein sonchti hai…
aapse bas yahi kehna chahti hun ki neri beti ko kisi orphanage mein dal dijiyega jab tak wo khud apna dhyaan rakhne ke kabil nahi ho jati,kyunki mere siva is duniya kria ka aur koi nahi hai..
Ar: Aapko lagta hai ki jais bacchi na apni jaan par khel kar humari beti ki jaan bachane ki akhri tak koshish ki , humari jaan bachayi hum use kisi orphanage mein dal denge. Nahi hum itne bure nahi hai.. aaj se aapki kria humari beti hai… wo humare sath humare mahal mein rahegi , hum uska utna hi dhyaan rakhenge jitna aap uska rakhti thi, use kisi cheez ki kabhi koi kami hone nahi denge sirf 1 ma kabhi nahi de payenge.
Smr: Aapne meri sabse badi chinta dur kar di, mujhe khud ke jane ka gam nahi hai, fikra ahi to sirf kria ki , meri beti bahut masoom ahi, wo is duniya ko nahi samajhti sirf sabki khushiyon ke bare sonchti hai, meri kria ka dhyaan rakiyega aapko mujh par bahut bada upkaar hoga…
Ar: humne kaha na aaj se kria humari beti hai..
Smriti remebrs d way she seprated kria 4m hr dil,dosti dance & feels a lil bit guilty 4 what she had done.
Smr:Ye kria ko de dijiyega jab wo hosh mein ajaye.
Ar:ji hum de denge..
Her breath bcums short & fast ,nurse puts oxygen mask in her mouth quickly she takes fast breaths 4 sum tym & den takes d last breath of her life….
# 1 day later#
*ICU*
Dr. :Ab apko kaisa lag raha hai…
Gal: I m feeling better. (pointing to king)Aap kaun hai?
Ar: Beta hum(cut off by dr.)
Dr.: Aapko nahi pata ye kaun hai
Gal:Nahi..
Dr.:Aapko ye yaad hai ki aap kaun hai?
Gal: Mai..Mai ..Mai kaun hun?? Who m i?
Dr.:Mr. Raajvansh aap plz bahar jaiye hue patient ke kuch test karne hai..
King leaves.
After sumtym dr cums out of ICU.
Dr.: Jiska dart ha wahi hua..
Ar: Kya hua dr.?
Dr.: humne kisi tarah patient ki jaan toh bacha li par unki memory nahi bacha paye, sar par gehri chot lagne ki wajah se she has lost her memory & now she remebrs nothing of her previous life,she's jst like a blank page…
Ar said nothing in response.
Dr.: Mr. Raajvansh par aapko 1 baat ka khaas dhyaan rakhna hoga,patient ki condition bahut sensitive hai, she cannot bear up any big shock , herbrain has already been badly injured, so apart 4m rest she needs extra care, love & happiness all around to recover up.
Ar: Ok dr. I'll take care of it.
Dr.: Abhi humne unhe injection de diya hai so she's sleeping now, u can meet her by evening but remember narrate her d deadly incident which took place wid ur family in as possible gentle way.
Ar: ok.
Dr. leaves
King sits on d chair & keeps on thinking what to say to kria when she regains consciousness.
After long thought in d evening king finally enters kria's room,she's still asleep.
King looks @ her cute , innocent face & smiles, he takes out d breclet which queen gave her 1 day b4 & encircles it around kria's wrist & presses her palm soothing her.
she wakes up.
Gal: Aap aap mere..
Ar: Hum aapke pitaaji hai aur aap humari beti Princess Ramaira Raajvansh hai….
#flash-back ends#

Ar:Aur is tarah humne kria ko Rr ki pehchaan dene ka decision liya..
Sam: Aur fir aapne uski sare photographs lekar , use apni family mein Rr ki jagah place kar di, brth certificate to school & clg certificates everywhere she replaced Rr.
Ar: I know kunwar aapko bahut bura laga hoga jab humne aapki Rr ki har 1 cheez kria ko de di par hum kya karte hum nahi chahte the ki kria ko kabhi bhi pata chale ya fir thoda bhi shaq ho ki wo Rr nahi hai…
Sam: I can understand uncle , jo princi ne aapke liye kiya uske baad apka decision bilkul sahi tha..
Ar: Kunwar kabhi-2 hume lagta hai ki kahi humne galat toh nahi kiya na kria se uski pehchaan chupakar, ho sakta hai unki pichhli zindagi se jude kuch logo ko aaj bhi unki zaroorat ho…
Sam: No uncle u r not wrong anywhere, agr us critical situation mein aap princi ko ye batate ki unki mom ki death ho chuki hai aur ab wo is duniya mein akeli hai toh kya ye wo bear-up kar paati.. nahi, use sahi toh yehi tha jo aapne kiya.. aur aaj dekhiye princi apne is naye life mein kitni khush hai aur hum sabke khushi ka karan bhi hai…
Ar:sach kaha aapne, aur waise bhi unki ma ne kaha tha unka ab is duniya mein koi bhi nahi… aura b toh nayi Rr humari jaan hai, humare jeene ka kewal 1 karan, humari zindagi ka sirf 1 hi maksad hai apni Rr ko duniya ki sari khushiya dena, my cute angel , my daughter Rr.
Sam:Rr, humare liye toh uncle sirf 1 hi Rr thi humari Rr, hum sab kuch kar sakte hai uncle par apni Rr ki jagah kisi ko nahi de sakte…
Ar: I know beta u can't do dat.. & dats y u gave new name to new Rr & dats "princi" u only started calling her princi & now all her close friendz call her by dis name.
Now lets go back to d party…



Kissing d above photo on d wall he covered it wid a cloth piece & said " Happy B'day princess"….
Dey turn back , reyam quickly hide themselves by bending down.
Suddenly a servant comes .
Sr: maharaja raajkumaari ji behosh ho gayi hai.
Ar: Kya??
All of dem run quickly to Rr's room.
To be continued….
So I m done wid 2days part I know it was boring a bit, but to proceed d story ahead I had to write it…
So hopefully I'll try my best to update soon…
By dat tym Happy kriyaansh to all of u…

p.s. title giving responsibility :

chapter-38(last chapter)-Konpal

chapter-39(dis chapter)-Anki
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Heyaa di

Yippie me first to comment

Finally aapka update mil gaya

Aapko pata hai ki main iska kitna wait kar rahi thi

Ab jaake mila mujhe

Di batao na aap kab on aate ho?

mujhe toh pata bhi nahi chalta ki aap kab aate ho aur kab jaate ho



Not fair *pout*

ok ye baatein baad mein pehle aapka comment

warna mujhe bahut daant padegi

Happy Kriyaansh di

Ye line kitni miss kari maine

Why did kriya tried to defense Rr's dad

Unhe bachhane ke chakkar mein khud itni badi chot lag gayi use

But kya karein. humaari kriya hai hi aisi

Dusron ke baad apne baare mein sochti hai

Ab aayi ye indian police force

All useless..! Always late huh!

Ye log kabhi bhi time pe nahi aa sakte

And what is this ACP saying to Mr. Rajvansh..!

Aapko chinta karne ki zarurat nahi hai!

WTH

Uski beti mar gayi hai aur uski wife ko bhi serious injury aayi hai and he is saying that wo chinta na kare

useless!

Ramaira mar gayi...



Dats a sad news di



Kya haal ho gaya Rr ke dad ka



Unko toh samajh hi nahi aa raha ki wo kya karein



Thank god kriya is fine

but she lost her memo

nahi aisa nahi ho sakta

di gandi baat hai

Kitna rulaaogi aap humein

main ab aur kuch nahi kahungi flashback ke baare mein

glad its all out

Real ramaira is really beautiful

BUT not more than kriya

oh gosh last mein ye kya hua?

kriya behosh ho gayi..!

how???

nooo hope she is fine

will be waiting for ur update


P.s. maine aapko gandi aadat daal di hai na lambe comments ki...! sorry thode tym ke liye somewhat smaller than my first 2 comments on this thread... coz my exams are going on

Luv you di



(Sissy waala)

Chalo ab mereko jaana hai

bye
Edited by abhiyakreya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Born2Dance

Hey Di...

Kaise ho???

Hwz life???

Mast na...???

After all its IIT...

Missing u n ur updates a lot...!!!

Hav fun n do update soon...

- Luv mish


i m fine my dear...

yaa life's gud after all its IIT..
jst schedule is rili very hectic as u know na IIT's put how much burden over students..

3 idiots me toh sabne dekha hi hai...

but apart 4m stress of studies there's lot more thing 2 enjoy here... so i m having fun , jst have sum prblm of tym managent there4 i m unable to update soon & i havent startd studies yet
once i begin my studies properly i'll update also wid less tym gap...

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abhiyakreya

Di mujhse naraaz ho


sorry na


oye sorry q bol rahi hai..
mai tujse bilkul naraaz nahi hun..
bhala mai apni cute si sis se naraaz ho sakti hun...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: hARSHA_Neeti



i m fine my dear...

yaa life's gud after all its IIT..
jst schedule is rili very hectic as u know na IIT's put how much burden over students..

3 idiots me toh sabne dekha hi hai...

but apart 4m stress of studies there's lot more thing 2 enjoy here... so i m having fun , jst have sum prblm of tym managent there4 i m unable to update soon & i havent startd studies yet
once i begin my studies properly i'll update also wid less tym gap...


We no Di n we understand...

I no about d burden...

Bt I no ki usse zyada aap kitni MASTI kar rahe honge...

N time management ka aap mujhse nahi poocho to btr hein...

Hehe...

No wonder u so busy...

But please take care of urself..

I heard aapki ragging bhi hui...

Kuch zyada toh nai hui na???
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: hARSHA_Neeti


oye sorry q bol rahi hai..
mai tujse bilkul naraaz nahi hun..
bhala mai apni cute si sis se naraaz ho sakti hun...


thanx 😃

mujhe laga naraaz ho

di last part ka title

Truth revealed

isse acha main nahi soch sakti 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesomee update 👏 👏

Luvdd ittt veryy much 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update
Thanks for the pm
Hope Kriya is alright
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks for the pm and awesome update :D

Nikki <3

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