ARSHI FF : Devil in Disguise (05/09)

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trivedishraddha

@ShraddRajyaguru

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#311

Originally posted by: asumasan

I m impressed ... yes dear 👍🏼

well,thank you,i do watch some hollywood stuff,some English serial and some teenage English love stories!
Am not that dumb too! 😛
but you know,all the way i though that all this you writing is so deep and meaningful,not once i thought that these May be lyrics of any song!
But still its difficult to write even if you have some beautiful lines in hand,hats off to your writing. . .
Very good. . .
👏 👏 👏
keep it up!
😊

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trivedishraddha

@ShraddRajyaguru

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#312

Wow,completed with all 8 in one go . . .
Chapter 8th ending can't have been better. . .
I loved this-
Their love does not begin the way we seem to think it does...
Love is a battle, love is a war; love is growing up... Love is Kushi and Arnav !

Its too good yar . . .
Your write very well,and now. . .
Am waiting for more,so plz do pm me when you update!
😊
Thanks for the last pms. . .😳

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asumaa

@asumasan

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#313

Originally posted by: trivedishraddha
Wow,completed with all 8 in one go . . .
Chapter 8th ending can't have been better. . .
I loved this-
Their love does not begin the way we seem to think it does...
Love is a battle, love is a war; love is growing up... Love is Kushi and Arnav !

Its too good yar . . .
Your write very well,and now. . .
Am waiting for more,so plz do pm me when you update!
😊
Thanks for the last pms. . .😳

Waw i feel honored that u like my work ... Once u have time check " marriage made in hell " love ya girl

Edited by asumasan - 13 years ago

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MyPrinceBarun

@MyPrinceBarun

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#314

love is battle love is war love is growing up..love is Arnav and Khushi...AMAZING..LOVED IT...THESE LINES MADE IT MORE BEAUTIFUL...

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MKyara

@MKyara

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Posted: 13 years ago

#315

loved ur ending piece...waiting ofr how they finally fall in love :D

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Simran Sandhu

@desijatti

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#316

awesome!! it was really good i loved it!!!!! please update the next part soon.

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#317

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coalfax

@coalfax

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#318

wow.. both khushi and arnav are game

\Thanks for Pm

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kriti_atharv

@kriti_atharv

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#319

oh my god!!!!i am in shock after reading this...

another great story from you dear...wow dear simply awsuuum...i mean they are attracted to each other from the first meeting but arnav being arnav denies everything and tries to mold things the way he wants too see it...he got khushi in a ontract just to prove her a gold digger...that is such freaking low behaviour from him...he sometimes disgusts me...poor khushi has to suffer everytime for something he does not do...and now they are living under the same roof...i have a feeling things are going to get pretty explosive...loved it very much dear n thnx 4da pm...