FF: WHAT LIES WITHIN... CHAPTER 8 PG 23

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LilaUK

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Posted: 13 years ago

#161

Look forward to more... The concept is great but the chapter needed a bit more.

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bewakoofLadki

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Posted: 13 years ago

#162

wen vl arnav n khushi both cum to knw...shes not who they wer thinking is

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seeta naipaul

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Posted: 13 years ago

#163

thanks for the PM

awesome update

I hope she burns everything before Arnav gets home.

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lovespell

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Posted: 13 years ago

#164

WOW!Nice. I read all the part and I have to say it is very different from any other story. loved it instantly. The struggle to fit into sameera shroff's shoes is worth reading and Khushi is trying to redeem sameera's mistakes. Very beautiful story and would love to read it more often but I understand the hurdles along the way. So hey! take your time! and satisfy our needs as well😉

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Ishmeeta Shyameeta Jhoboo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: dorindakate
So glad I found the update...

Please Khushi/Sameera...tell Arnav about Shyam's call...burning the letters is NOT enough...

Be honest with Arnav if you really hope for a relationship with him...

Just love the story...

Great.. Thanks for reading on and for commenting!

As for Sameera, let's just put it that way: She's thoroughly confused so, she's still hesitant into confessing heads on about Shyam's call... Maybe Arnav might misinterpret her intentions, so she only wants to be on a safe side!

N of course... Thanks for loving it and appreciating it😉

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Ishmeeta Shyameeta Jhoboo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: vidya.sanjay
Lovely update.
Will Shyam again enter Sameera's life?
How will she react and how will Arnav take it?just guessing😛
Thanks for the PM dear :)

Thanks😊

Well, truth be told, Shyam's entry in Shantivan (in the show) is really getting on my nerves, so I'm having second thoughts on whether to bring him here or not😆

Don't worry, I'll PM you further updates😉

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Ishmeeta Shyameeta Jhoboo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: mollycoddle
simply brilliant..loved it.
sorry my like button isnt working

Yeah, I know there was this problem with the Like Button, but you read it, commented and liked it... That's a lot for me... Thanks😊

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Ishmeeta Shyameeta Jhoboo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: casker
Nice update.😊

Thank you dear😊

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Ishmeeta Shyameeta Jhoboo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#169

Originally posted by: tinsel
Lovely update

Thanks a lot my dear reader😉

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Posted: 13 years ago

#170

Originally posted by: LilaUK
Look forward to more... The concept is great but the chapter needed a bit more.

Well I know that the pace is in slow motion, but that was the general idea from the beginning.. I'm gonna take it slow, so that I can be in a position to bring forward the back-story, where Khushi Gupta realises she's not Sameera Shroff...

But thanks for the comments, helps to improve... a lot at that😊