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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: soni4eva

Awsum update
Aww arman saved ridz n he confessed
Plzz cont soon x


THx
illl ud soon
happy u enjoyed it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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im nearly done
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DMG, AR PYAR FOREVER

PART 11

Hey guys this is part 11. Its gna b AR maariage soon. Hope u like it n please please comment
Armaan pulls riddhima into a hug

Ridzi pulls away

Ridzi: Armaan stop.. Papa dehkraha hai aur tum ne papa ke saamna mujhe propose kiya.
Ammy: Yup. U kno riddhima,ek kahawat hain "pyar kiya to darna kiya"

Shanky goes up to AR

Shanky: im happy for u riddhima. Mujhe pata ta armaan aisa kuch karenga.
Ridzi: Papa aap ko pata ta
Shanky: haan. Iss ne mujhse permission li ti.
Ridzi: Really
Shanky: Haan ab riddhima mera hospital se phone aaya hain. To tum log masro karlo.

Ammy: ab to tum bohot jald Mrs Riddhima Armaan Malik ban ni vali ho.
Ridzi: What do u mean bohot jald. Ab to sirf propose kiya hain
Ammy: maine to sasurji se baat bi karli ek hafte ke andar hamare shaadi ho jayengi.
Ridzi: ooohh. Aise baat hain
Ammy: Haan. Ab challo mera saath..
Ridzi: kaha???
Ammy: Romance,kar ne.


Ammy takes ridzi to the balconey.
Ammy: Ab yaha humhe koi disturb nahi karengaa
Ridzi;Oh really
Ammy holds riddhimas hand
Ammy: Yaad hain jab mene tumse kaha ta ke tumhe mere liya kuch kar na hoga.
Ridzi: Haan to kya
Amy: mujhe methai chahye
Ridzi: yeh lon. Itni si baatn ofcourse
Ammy: Really tum mujhe methai doongi
Ridzi: haan isme puch ne ki kya baat hain. Ofcourse armaan
Ammy: ohk.

He closes his eyes and waits for a kiss.
When he opens his eyes ridzi is not there.


Ammy: Ab riddhima kaha challigayi.
Ridzi: im back. Ye lon
Ammy: yeh kya hain
Ridzi: methai aur kiya

She gives armaan a plate full of methai.

Ammy: Basket... Main yeh methai ki baat nahi kar raha ta. Mein to vo special vali methai ki baare main baat kar raha ta... Jo sirf tum mujhe de sakti ho.
Ridzi: Oh vo vali methai.

Ammy puts his hand around ridzi's waist.
Ammy: ohhh yea.
He goes in for a kiss but anji interuppts

Anji: guys tum log phirse
Ammy: kya yaar. Mujhe methai milne wali ti. Aur tum agaye.
Anji: dont worry. Bohot jald to tum dono ki shaadi ho ne wali hain
Ammy: I know. Uss din ka to interzaar kar raha hu.
Anji:Abhi ke liye yahi karna ab ridzi ko hamare saath bhi anne dena. Ab tum dono neecha challo tum sab se kuch kehna hain.
Ammy: Ok hitler ki chamchi
Anji: Kya kaha
Ammy: kuch nahi saali ji
Ridzi: armaan... Stop na...


Downstairs of party...
Muski: ok guys ab kal ridzi ki sangeet hain. Matlab no disturbances. Ok boys.
Atul: dont worry hum nahi ayyengai.
Ammy upset: ok...
Anji: armaan dont even try hum sab girls ridzi ke saath hoga.
Ammy: ok chamchee... I mean anji...
Anji: hmmmn
They all start to leave so when no one is looking ammy kisses ridzi on the cheek.
Ammy:Bye basket.


Next day... Sangeet night
Ammy rings ridxi" hey basket. Kaise ho?
Ridzi: Main to thik ho. Sangeet ke liye tayaare kar rahee hu.
Ammy: Ohhh really. Well u see aaj mere bachellor party hain to bohot masti to larke bhi karengai.
Ridzi: Masti... Armaan... Kaise masti
Ammy: vaise u kno girls n all dat
Ridzi: what armaan. Tum iss ke baare main soch na bhi mat.
Ammy: OYYE HOYYE. Basket itna ghusa mat ho. Mai to sirf mazak kar raha ta.
Ridzi: Haan. Tumhe to sirf mazak hi soch ta hain. Anyway mujhe tayaar hona hai.
Ammy: pehle mujhe I LOVE U bholo.
Ridzi: Nahi armaan mujhe tayaar hona hain
Ammy: please please tumhara fiance tumse kuch maang raha hain.
Ridzi: Thik hain. I Love... Bye armaan

She puts the phone down

Anji: Ridz kiska phone ta lover boy ( Armaan) ka
Ridzi: nahi di..vo
Anji: now dont lie to me ridzi. Challo tayaar ho jawon.
Ridzi goes to get ready.

She comes out wearing a lovely salwar



Everyone looks at her as she comes out.
Muski: wow yaar kitni.mast dikh rahi hain tu.
Anji: ya ridz
Nikki: exactly.
Muski: guys. Mujhe nahi lagta larke vali sangeet ko destroy kar ne nahi aayengain.
Anji: your ryt muski. As usual they will
Nikkki: humhe hi kuch kar na parenga. Par kya
Ridzi: kuch nahi hoga guys
Anji: idea. Ek kaam karte hain. Kyun naa hum bohot saare larke ko bhula lain . Phir jab larke valai denkhangain tab.. U kno.

Soo...anji,muski aur nikki bohot saare larko ko invite kar te hain sangeet main including adi ridzi ka bhai.


Meanwhile malik house...
Ammy: Guys main bohot bored ho raha hu.
Rahul: I kno man
Atul: kuch maza nahi aaraha.
Ammy: ek kaam karte hain. Larkiyon ki sangeet main challe jaate hain.
Rahul: what u mad
Ammy: Dadoo. Dekho main basket se mil pawoonga, tum musko se aur champ anji se. What say?
Rahul: good idea
Atul: Haan bhai challo.


At gupta house...
Anji: guys sab ready hain na. Adi bhai aap nikki ke saath dance ki jai naa.
Ridzi: di. Kya yeh sab kuch zaroori hain kya.
Muski: haan ofcourse. Ab challo, tum larko main se paanch shirt uttaro na.
Boys: kya
Anji: haan dekho. U have to act lyk strippers to jab larke valai aayengai na to vo kitna shock ho jayengai.
Ridzi: Di this is not neccessary. Ban kije yeh sab
Anji: dekhi ridzii. Jus imagine ke vo hamare bina kya kar rahee hogai. Kya pata. Haine nikki


But nikki is too busy lost in adi's eyes...

Ridzi: Shayid aap thik keh rahee hain. Hum bhi masti kar sakte hain...
Anji: now thts lyk my sister. Ab karan whoever u r. Yaha pe awoon. Aur ridzi ke saath dance karna ok.
Ridzi: di music on.mujhe car ki awaaz aaye.
Muski: haan. Haan challo. Guys dance stripppers just strip, not fully.

The guys ring the bell...
The servant opens it.

Ammy: hi. Vo larkiyan kaha pe milengai
Servant: vo vaha pain hain.. Sangeet main
Rahul: k thx.
Atul: come on guys.


They go inside the room where ammy sees riddhima dancing wiv someone else.
They hide

Ammy: yaar itnai saare larke yaha pain
Atul: haan, mujhe laga ta ke yeh ladies sangeet hain. Par yaha to more men hain than ladies.
Ammy: dekho naa. Vo larka riddhima ke saath kaisa dance kar raha hain.
Rahul: aur vo strippers ko bohot ghoor se dekhrahain hain
Ammy: haan... Riddhima bhi.. Guys lets go.in

The boys go in

Ammy: stop the music...
Everyone stops dancing except adi n nikki.
Rahul: oh hello nikki.music band ho gaya hain.
Ammy: yaha pain kya ho raha hain
Ridzi: armaan, dancing

Ammy: oh dancing. Ay u. Riddhima ko chorr. Itnai kareeb se nach nai ki koi.zaroorat nahi hain. Samjhai.
Atul: haan. Aur vo log kaun hain.
Ridzi: atul vo male strippers hain
Ammy: KYA???
Ridzi: vo male strippers hain.sunai nahi dehta.
Ammy: chi chi chi riddhima. Sharam nahi aati yeh kehne main
Anji: iss main sharmani kya baat hain hum bus unai dekhrahai tai.
Muski: haan. So what
Rahul: so what. Tumhe to main baad main dekhongaa.
Ammy: aaayy. All u boys out.now. Shirt bhi lai jawoo na


The girls start laughing
Ammy: ab haas kyun rahe ho
Ridzi: vo armaan. Hum tum log pe prank.lar rahe tai. Do u actually think hum aisa karte.
Ammy: phew.

Everyone starts talkin again

Ammy takes riddhimas hand, takea her to the side.and hugs her.




Ridzi: kya hua. Hug kyun diya.
Ammy: bas maan kiya. Can u belive hamare shaadi kal ho rahi hain.
Ridzi: haan.i kno. Aur main jaanti hu. Ke tum iske kitne intezaar kar rahee tai.




Ridzi: ab ghar jawoon. Na bohot late ho gaya hai.
Ammy: ok baba. Love u. Bye. Come on guyS.

They all.go 😊

Promo:
Kaise jayenge ar ki shaad
Shaadi finally aaya to hain par ky sab kuch thik rahe ga.
Find out karne ke liye. Pls read.😃


Hey guys. Was it a good part. Finally ar ki shaadi ho rahee hain. Thx guys for your comments
Guys next part shadi ki hain so pls read it will b more interesting.😆
Ill ud part 12 very soon.
Please comment and press like.😛

Love u lots :-)
Sammara
xxx
Edited by Sammaraxx - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
Awesome part.
I juist loved it.
the prank of girls was quite amazing.
Waiting eagerly for AR's marriage.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
Giirls bhe na! Poor arman! And yeah mithai ki plate ka kya hua? Mujhay milay ge woh? Lol. Lmao, rofl
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
Hey dear
Love the update
enjoyed a lot
Girls toh just the best
Do try to continue soon
Thanks for the PM
Take care

Lots of Love
Geet
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
nice update..
dear have a request while you pm us plz give us the link of the same page where you update..it saves time..first open your pm then your ff first apge and then the pag e you update..took time which i dont have now a days loll'

so plz when this time yu pm give the page link whee you update pllzzz

thankx ,dont mind
love
mariaL)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: crazy4KASH_AR

Awesome part.
I juist loved it.
the prank of girls was quite amazing.
Waiting eagerly for AR's marriage.


Hey thx...
Maariage is coming soon
xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: krazykiller

Giirls bhe na! Poor arman! And yeah mithai ki plate ka kya hua? Mujhay milay ge woh? Lol. Lmao, rofl


Happy u enjoyed it...
haha..
lol
ill ud soon xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: sweetdesire

Hey dear

Love the update
enjoyed a lot
Girls toh just the best
Do try to continue soon
Thanks for the PM
Take care

Lots of Love
Geet



Haan...
Girls toh...
lol...
ill ud soon
thx geet for commenting xxx😉

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