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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
its awesome u should surely continue with os...update the next part soon and pls. pm me when u do so..!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
Awesumm concept kriti 👏
luvd it
promo seems intersting ek woh dance promo jaisa
guess kriya is cumin backk woowwie 😃
vp ki band bajaying 😆
updte soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Himaniahir

Amazing promo


Continue

Pm me


Originally posted by: kaba3003

Awesome promo:-):-)

I think its kriya:-):-)

Continue soon:-):-)


thanks
will cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: arsha66607

its awesome u should surely continue with os...update the next part soon and pls. pm me when u do so..!!!


thanks
will update soon
for pm plz add kritzd3pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: cookie_arsha

Awesumm concept kriti 👏

luvd it
promo seems intersting ek woh dance promo jaisa
guess kriya is cumin backk woowwie 😃
vp ki band bajaying 😆
updte soon


hey cookie
thanks for the comment...
I am waiting for ur comment for hours not only yours...I am also waiting for k and aroma's commet...but dont know where r they...

will update soon


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Posted: 13 years ago
#36

Hey guyz

I'm here with an update

Before starting...I want to tell u that...In current situation...

swaron,viha...and taarey are couples...ya you heared it right...taarey are couples...

after that seductive sorry sorry cheap is the best word...after that cheap dance of Taarey...and so called cheesy fight b/w some boys and rey...(jiska reason mujhe nhi pata hai)...rey proposed taani..(ab colg ka cool dude hai repo ka sawal hai koi gf toh rakhni banti hai boss)..and she's like on cloud nine...

ok now here's the update



Chapter 1


All louins are sitting on the ground of bb court...they are on hunger strike...from more than 25 hrs...but colg authorities didn't change their decision...VP brain washed their mind by saying that...they not concentrate on their studies coz of dance and their grades also getting low...

and here he come

VP :aap logo ka ye strike karne se koi fayeda nhi hoga...hum log apna decision nhi badlenge...isliye acha yahi hoga...aap log apni zid chod de aur apne apne ghar jaaye...

Rey:Ghar toh hum jayenge sir...lekin jab...jab aap log apna decision change karenge...

Sha :yes sir...dance humara passion hai...humari lyf hai...aaplog humse humari lyf nhi cheen sakte...

VP :toh aap logo ko dance karne se mana kon kar rha hai aapko jitna dance karna hai kariye...lekin is colg k bahar...is colg main koi dance nhi hoga...

Vo :IS COLG MAIN DANCE HOGA...

(all look towards the owner of the voice...and they shocked after seeing her after 7 months...rey face become white after seeing her he whisperd kriya which is only heared by swayam who stand next to him...all are happy...but all are sad at the same tym... vishakha and neha are the only two..who are only happy after seeing their bff after months...)(taani ne sirf kriya k baare main suna hai use kabhi dekha nhi hai...)

she didn't look towards them not only for once and walked towards the VP with so much attitude and grace...and its new for Louins...the always saw her insimple wears...and now she's simple...but richness and attitude clearly visible on her face...and from her clothes...she wearing tight fitted blue jeans,black boots with high heels...and t shirt...

Ta :(in mind)wao inka chalneka andaz...haye...hey krishna ji mujhe bhi inki tarah banaya hota...itni high heels main bhi wo kitne ache se aur style se chal rhi hai...main toh flats main bhi gir jaati hoon...hey krishnaji ye jo bhi hai...plz mujhe bhi inki tarah bana dijiye na...fir rey toh puri tarah mere pe lattoo ho jayenge...aur mere ird gird ghumenge haaye...

Kriya :is colg main dance hoga...

VP :and who are you to tell me tha ki is colg main kya hoga kya nhi...

Kriya :"K"

VP : k...(all confused)

Kriya :yes K...ALL INDIA COLLEGE STUDENT LEADER..."K"..(guyz aisa koi leader nhi hota sab meri imagination hai)..aur yahn k log mujhe KRIYA GHAI k naam se jaante hai...

Taani :(in mimd)toh ye hai kriya...no doubt rey inko itna kyk kyo karte the...sab kuch toh hai inpe jo mujhmain nhi hai...achi dancer hai...achi ags thi...aur atudent leader bhi...achi dikhti bhi...sharukh khan inpe lattu ho jayega...toh rey kya cheez hai...

VP :Oh Miss K...aap humare colg aa rhi thi...pehle inform kardiya hota...main aapko lene kisi ko bhej deta...

Kriya :Mr. Malhotra...mujhe buttering karne ki koi zaroorat nhi hai...Nisha...

(she called the girl who behind her)...

Nis :yes k

Kriya :file

(she handover the file to kriya)(kriya took out one paper...)

Kriya :ye rhe papers jismain likha hai...is colg main kabhi dance banned nhi hoga...

VP saw the paper then smriks...kriya is confused with the smrik...

Kriya :what...???

VP :Miss K ismain sirf aapke signatures hai...na ismain world education minister k hai...na hi head of ICP(Indian colleges principal) k hai...

Vo :nhi hai...toh main abhi kar deti hoon...


Precap :who is head of ICP...guess guess...



hmmm confused na...waise yahi haal saare louins ka bhi ho rha hai...par dont worry next update main saari confussion clear ho jayegi...aur main soch rhi hoon...ise 3 chaptersmain hi finishkar doon...

are bhaithe kya ho...

LIKE tab click karo...aur COMMENT karo...khali mat bhaitho...

chalo main chaling ab

bye

kriti <3


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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
sorry kriti i think im late in commenting

sorry today was my FA so i didnt even check my pms since afternoon.

kkk coming to the concept

Dance banned in ST. LOUIS

oh gosh dis VP is truely mad!

guess dat someone coming back is kriya!

well update soon kriti

and once again sorry for late comment
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
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unres

Yippie first one to comment!!!!

Sorry for unresing it late dear

kkk update pe aati hun 😆

Lousians on hunger strike!!! 😲

and that too from more then 25 hrs!!

This VP!!

man toh karta hai ise bomb se uda dun!

aise

And W*F 😡

Taarey couple 🤢

Wow Kriya's entry was nice 👏

Arey waah! taani ko bhi kriya jaisa ban na hai!

not possible taani. bhul jaao!

vp trying to butter kriya! rofl! 🤣

ab ye ICP kaun hai?

maybe either RDX or Karan malik 🤔
Edited by abhiyakreya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
Nice update kriti
Maybe Nicloe is the ICP
I'm sure it's a girl
Edited by Himaniahir - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40

kriti the update super awesome...

haw!!!!!
Taani-rey a couple... ewww... I feel like puking...


this VP... is getting on my nerves...😡😡

but someone's there to teach him a lesson😉
ah!!! thats our Kria.. K...

I wish I could look at the reactions of different ppl there... like VP... and Louisans...

and I really wanna know whose this ICP...

hope someone interesting😉

Edited by shenz_kriyaansh - 13 years ago

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