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Melony Jane Tryphosa Saripalli

@Mel-JTsaripalli

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#651

Good. Im still w8ng 4 the entry make it the beginning of chap 4. Aww ! Shyam wants a girl who wil love him. Then why arranged?

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fareeha

@pinkpearlz

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#652

In the last part i didnt Shyam at all. This one though, he doesnt seem bad.

I was pissed off at her dad, and payal too. What the!!! if you are sorry then why force her? Seriously? Why do peoplr think marriage will be solution to incorrigible spoilt brats? I mean if they didnt listen to their own family, how will suddenly be obedient to others?

I seem to be ranting right?

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Swetal

@Arshi2gthr4evr

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#653

Loved it Aliya! But why the hell did Khushi marry Shyam?! When is Arnav gonna come in the story?? Or is he even part of it? IDK:( Anyways thank u so much for the PM...u know I love reading your stories;)

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mysticmanthri

@mysticmanthri

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#654

frankly i didn't feel like reading this ff since i came to know abt khush n shyams marriage...but it was ur style of writing n bringing out the story in a fashionable way was what made me to come back...

this update is interesting n happy to see shyam a descent guy thank god no more drama over that...cant wait to see what unfolds next its like reading namastey London with a diff spice...