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Posted: 13 years ago
its awesm yar, plz continue it dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
its awesm yar, plz continue it
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sorry yaar... Mai do din se ol nahi thi.. Bt i guess maine like n cmmnt kiya tha... Anyways ur ff is awesome.. So plz do cont...:)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Swayamonly

Sorry yaar... Mai do din se ol nahi thi.. Bt i guess maine like n cmmnt kiya tha... Anyways ur ff is awesome.. So plz do cont...:)



hey...please ab ye sorry-sorry bht jyada ho gaya hai...so just leave it...and yes tumne comment kiya tha...so please no more sorry's...i'll be back with a long update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hello guys first of all I am really sorry for being impatient and acting impulsive……
Here's next update……I hope you guys like it……the only demand is please leave your valuable comments……
Part 3
Kr: why …..Why it always happens to me…. Why…..ab she will definitely try to meet me …..and again the questionnaire session will start….kab…kyun….kaise….aur uske in questions ka mere pass koi answer nahi hoga…..kyunki jo hua wo meri majboori bhi thi …aur meri marzi bhi…..(he had a sleepless night.. thinking what he's gonna do to avoid her….)
Next morning

Sharon got up early……quickly Sharon comes out of washroom wearing a Calvin Klein black dress……

Left out the house only to find answers of her questions……..
On the other hand Karan also got up only to find possible ways to avoid Sharon……he called Nita to know their (Sharon ,Nita) plans for the day…….
but…but….but…before he could talk her……doorbell rings……
TING-TONG……TING-TONG …….
Krn: hey Joe who's it???(yaar ab London me ramu kaka to nahi milenge na!!!)
Joe: junior…… a cute pretty girl is asking for you…… (Joe to the girl) you please sit here……he's coming…… (joe went to bring coffee and snacks)
While she's making her way to living room……Karan also reaches there uttering something……
Krn: (to himself) yaar ye nita ke no. ko kya ho gaya……why the hell it's out of reach……. (The girl still standing with back facing towards him……checking out the photo frames with Karan's photographs….) umm…..hello…… miss…… (he could feel the presence, the fragrance...it was so identical for him….. he closed hiseyes…….and as if life switched the fast rewind button…. ….all the moment with Sharon swapped before his eyes…the only thing come out of his mouth was her name with all the love, affection, care and concern he have for her)……SHARON !!! ...ummm…tum ho?? ??(Yes guy's humara majnu boy apni Sharon ko kaise nahi pehchanega)
Her eyes lighten up with joy when she heard him calling her name with the same love, affection, care and concern in his voice….. Sharon turned around……
Sh: so you can still sense me……tumhe ab bhi mere aane ki khabar kisi friend,kisi sms ya fir kisi status update se nahi milti…..right???(He remembers their convo in locker room, after RDX's party……)….sharon realizes what she just spoke immediately recovering……. I mean tumhe kaise pata ki…..main hu???? (Coming back to earth with the sudden change in sharon's voice)
Krn: (Karan understood that She has doubt on him….and as far he knows her….she's not gonna let it go without finding the truth….fumbles )nahi….wo……main……wo….just that ….umm……Nita…..yes….Nita told me that you….(before he could complete…..cuts in between by his mother "Shree"….)
Shr: (Screaming loudly………) gouda…..guddu……oh god kya karu me is ladke ka…….joe have you seen karan ???...where's he???...is he in the gym????...for god's sake answer me……
Joe: mam……please calm down first……otherwise your BP will go high……
Shr: Joe can you please answer my questions……or I'll fire you out.
Joe: Sorry mam……junior is in living room with….umm…with a cute pretty girl.
Shr: with a girl….LADKI!!!!(Typical maa)….ajj se pehle to kabhi kisi ladki k bare me nahi bataya…..aaj directly ghar me entry……(Karan share everything with his mom….)
Shree enters in living room….Karan take a sigh of relief…..
Krn: (to himself) bach gaye beta…… (To shree) maa you're great…..I love you…
Shr: Love you too son…but wait you're not ready…..when will you learn guddu…..you suppose to be with Veer in the meeting aren't you……Bhagwaan jaane kab seekhoge????
Krn: holy cow!!!...how can I forget???
Sh: it looks you're habitual in forgetting things…. (Had an unknown pain in her voice) ...Um…..I….mean you forgot yesterdays plan also.
Krn: (felt the pain in her voice) no… it's not like that…. (Before he could complete Shree comes in between….)
Shr: you're right princess……jabse India se aaya hai strange behave kar raha hai……by the way whats you name angel???
Sh: oh! Sorry…umm…hello aunty I am sha….
Krn: SHARON…SHARON RAIPRAKASH….. (Giggles)
Both Shree and Sharon Shared a confuse look over him….
Shr: (to Sharon) To Beta haven't seen you around…. (Before she completes again got answer from Karan instead Sharon)
Krn: Naturally mom she's in new here…..by the way she is Nita's cousin…… (Again got a strange look from the ladies)…. Think I should go and get ready
Shr: That's better….by the way son doesn't come between ladies talk……both the ladies looked at him, nudged each other and smirked
Krn: yes got it maa….lagta hai bohat kuch sikhna baaki hai….
Meanwhile Shree and Sharon Having a pleasant talk……on the other hand Karan panics….if Sharon ask shree anything about swayum,…..Karan takes his bath and get ready as quickly as he can….comes running down to living room….and was hell shock to see both the ladies were having fun together….they were talking, laughing, hi-fying….as if both of them knows each other from the core……Karan stood rooted there smiling and admiring both the ladies…..he doesn't want to ruin the moment so he decide to have breakfast himself…..after having breakfast he return to living room only to find ladies in same condition…….he leans towards the door and stood there having a broad smile on his face...
This time shree caught him smiling at Sharon….. She comes near him and whispered…….
Shr: she is very pretty ….. you like her right….Mujhe Pasand hai!!!
Krn: uhmm…..yes I like her….(gain his senses) What???? No………nothing likes that…….
Promo: Karan and Sharon in car……….shree tells veer about Sharon,Veer Panics……..Sharon Asking Nita about karan.
That's it guys……I really don't know how it turn into…….please leave your valuable comments they are really encouraging…….and like energy booster…….so it's my kind request pls comment whether you liked it, any complaint, criticism, Appreciation or anything….you're most welcome……I am waiting guys….
-Himani(Luvsd3)

Edited by Luvsd3 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago


Me first 😃

Ohk now coming to the update...it was B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L 😊

I loved the part where Karan (swayam I suppose) comes into the living room n then whatever goes inside both of their minds n the little convo they had, specially what sharon said to him was really intense n painful...n it clearly showed the pain that she has been going through without him being around 😭

I strongly feel that whatever be the reason for swayam leaving sharon alone, one thing is for sure that he did it for, maybe somehow him not being around her would have been good for her (thats what swayam must have thought bt we all know that it can never be good for her)

Well coming to the other very important character u introduced, which is karan/swayam's mom...she seems to be very cool n fun loving person 😊 bt I wonder if she is karan/swayam's mom then how come she doesn't know anything about SWAYAM or SHARON 😕 bt on the other hand, in the precap we see that veer panics hearing about sharon...ohk now what does that supposed to mean?? N moreover y is he panicking?? 😕

Oh god this story is getting really mysterious n interesting...n I have no clue whatsoever that whats gonna happen next or what may have happened in the past 😕

So himani...u gotta be updating soon coz otherwise this mystery would kill me for sure 😲
Edited by sreya19roy - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Isme to mystery khatam hone ka naam hi nahi le rahi hai. More character and moe intriguing this FF is getting. Fabulous update. Loved it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update..swayam/karan is really mysterious..his character is intruguing..i really want to know what is his 'big secret' now!!and who is veer???please update soon..a lot of questions are revolving around my mind and they can only be answered when you update!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
mystery tho aur complicated ho rahi hai... questions n questions are arisibg... answer them soon by updating soon ;)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: idiot_box

nice update..swayam/karan is really mysterious..his character is intruguing..i really want to know what is his 'big secret' now!!and who is veer???please update soon..a lot of questions are revolving around my mind and they can only be answered when you update!!



please Check cs...veer...veerendra malhotra...karans dad
Btw thanks for liking...

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