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sruthirishi thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago

OOOPSS...sorry!! i know i'm really late..
jus quite busy these dayz😆

amazingly well written AS USUAL👏
these are for BOTH 7& 8 together!!

gr8 to know kushal was HAPPY with abhi-muskkan( i guessed,he had probs with them)
kushal is really proud of everything that arnav does..hope dis continues😉

i liked it ven dadi said" What's going on with Chote?"
OMG! hez still trying to tell a 'SORRY'...itz his EGGOOO to b blamed!!!
poor kushi being terified with his anger...& d way it makes her recollect her past ,says that sumthing very bad must hav happened!!
kushi's inner feeling ven he touched her was beautifully written!

finally raja's entry spoiled d flow of feelings😉

aww..diary part was jus tooo gud!! i loved it😊
"Anyways! I don't think you should have shouted at him that bad Raja. "🤣

aman & kushi's frendship is amazing...hez so caring!!
first time in d history,it was sumon else other than arnav to" CATCH KUSHI VEN SHE FELL DOWN"😉 anywayz i'm loving dis frenship bonding...

ven kushi bumped in to kushal,i was like OMG!NOOO... but to my surprise he left quitely!!
something is fishy😛wish he doesn't hurt that poor soul later...

" Avoid remember Khushi...Avoid" 🤣how can that happen??
"I'm sorry for the other night where I shouted at you... I'm sorry for not giving you a chance... I didn't mean it to look the way it did."finally d most expected is said😛

but d most unexpected was "I know...I know what it's like losing both your parents too." never ever thought he'll talk to her abt parents in his first attempt!
so poor boy has never got his father's love...

letter thr' raja was least expected... so itz time for raja & arnav to b frenz now😉
"As if he owns the place."🤣
kushi is such a sweet heart here...loved it here-
Hope you forgive me, like I have forgiven you. Start anew?

gr8 going!!
unfolding of character's characterization is jus awesome...

god bless.



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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank you for sharing this beautiful story. It's amazingly written along with the concept. Totally love Khushi's and Arnav's characters. Loving the plot of the story as well.
Keep writing :)

-Farwii.
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Posted: 13 years ago
sorry for being late. But now a days i am juggling between studies, colg and work. Being hectic. Still trying to be regular
Amazing update. I am so glad arnav apologised with lil difficulty. Khushi is such an innocent soul. I truely adore her here. I am so eager to know the past of everyone and how it is related to one another. Last part was really cute!
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Posted: 13 years ago
I really liked the easy camaraderie between Aman and Khushi :)
Kushal is a confusing character. I can't decide whether that's good or bad!
Arnav and Khushi scene just made me melt!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sruthirishi


OOOPSS...sorry!! i know i'm really late..
jus quite busy these dayz😆

amazingly well written AS USUAL👏
these are for BOTH 7& 8 together!!

gr8 to know kushal was HAPPY with abhi-muskkan( i guessed,he had probs with them)
kushal is really proud of everything that arnav does..hope dis continues😉 We shall see.

i liked it ven dadi said" What's going on with Chote?"
OMG! hez still trying to tell a 'SORRY'...itz his EGGOOO to b blamed!!!
poor kushi being terified with his anger...& d way it makes her recollect her past ,says that sumthing very bad must hav happened!!
kushi's inner feeling ven he touched her was beautifully written! Thank you so much for liking. yes arnav has issues.😆

finally raja's entry spoiled d flow of feelings😉

aww..diary part was jus tooo gud!! i loved it😊
"Anyways! I don't think you should have shouted at him that bad Raja. "🤣

aman & kushi's frendship is amazing...hez so caring!!
first time in d history,it was sumon else other than arnav to" CATCH KUSHI VEN SHE FELL DOWN"😉 anywayz i'm loving dis frenship bonding... thanks. I like aman too😆

ven kushi bumped in to kushal,i was like OMG!NOOO... but to my surprise he left quitely!!
something is fishy😛wish he doesn't hurt that poor soul later... fishy indeed.

" Avoid remember Khushi...Avoid" 🤣how can that happen??
"I'm sorry for the other night where I shouted at you... I'm sorry for not giving you a chance... I didn't mean it to look the way it did."finally d most expected is said😛 yep!

but d most unexpected was "I know...I know what it's like losing both your parents too." never ever thought he'll talk to her abt parents in his first attempt!
so poor boy has never got his father's love...
letter thr' raja was least expected... so itz time for raja & arnav to b frenz now😉
"As if he owns the place."🤣
kushi is such a sweet heart here...loved it here-
Hope you forgive me, like I have forgiven you. Start anew?

gr8 going!!
unfolding of character's characterization is jus awesome... thanks alot.

god bless.




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Posted: 13 years ago


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Posted: 13 years ago
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will edit later..gtg to school...

*edited*

awsuuum chapter dear...loved it very much...so arnav does not want to get married but will khushi change his mind...loved it very much dear n thnx 4da pm...
Edited by kitzdoll - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Another great chapter from you. The story is getting interesting day by day. Why do i have the feeling that devyani will ultimately think and consider khushi to be the wife of arnav. And kushal is a very interesting character. Thanks for the pm. Update soon
Edited by arushi05 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
i love d bond tat kushi n raja hv...kushi has a person to whom she can actually be free to tell n express her feelings to him...evn though its an ff i personally feel very happy 4 her...not many ppl hv a person wid whm they cn share all their feelings...😃
wats wid lavanya n arnav?? they do seem to b a bit serious abt their relation...
wonder whom dadi will choose...
its wonderful to c arnav n kushi smilin at eachoter tellin hi n stuff...
awsum update...
tanx 4 d pm...
update soon
Edited by kamalapushpa - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
The update was great! Loved the flashback! Wonder who will Dadi choose?

Update soon!:-)
Edited by Jameelah52 - 13 years ago

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