Master Class...part 20 updated (on Arnav-Khushi)

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ragaya

@ragaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#991

lovely! glad to be back to the master class after some romance.really considerate of Arnav as a mentor to put Khushi in touch with possible financiers.And in a way,typical ASR to put her in a spot to check how she would react, what her ethics are.By the way,missed the devil and angel commenting on Arnav's shoulder as he did this-you missed exploring that angle.And looks like you are on a roll/in a flow-lots of typos and grammatical mistakes but story is progressing at a good pace:)

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ASADsweetZOYA

@ASADsweetZOYA

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#992

👏good one dear

thnx 4 the pm😳

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Aparna Mohan

@zoyadarkrose

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#993

Wow,I love Maneet too. .😃
Amazing update
Poor Khushi,she so wanted about jalebi junction but was confused about her loyalty to Arnav. .i liked the ending,it sounds promising,eh? 😉

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naina

@warriorprincess

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#994

Originally posted by: ragaya
lovely! glad to be back to the master class after some romance.really considerate of Arnav as a mentor to put Khushi in touch with possible financiers.And in a way,typical ASR to put her in a spot to check how she would react, what her ethics are.By the way,missed the devil and angel commenting on Arnav's shoulder as he did this-you missed exploring that angle.And looks like you are on a roll/in a flow-lots of typos and grammatical mistakes but story is progressing at a good pace:)

The angel n the devil are currently on long service leave. It's now purely arnav and khushi. I dont think Arnav needs the angel devil to tell him what he wants. He knows.

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Mallika

@malkasub

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#995

keep going... youre on a roll. 👏 cant wait for the next update.

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S003

@S003

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#996

Loved Loved Loved the guest appearance of maan and geet... loved it even more when Maan recognized the under current... so where is part 20?

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bluetaj

@bluetaj

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#997

Lovely. I like this Arnav, who is keen on giving khushi space even though he "wants" her.

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PhoenixRadar

@PhoenixRadar

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#998

Naina!!! Meri Myna!!!🤗

Dil khush kar diya re, Naina!!! Aapne humaara dil toh le hi liya apni iss khoobsurat kahaani se!!!❤️

Thankoo for the PM, Love!!

The start of the up-i-date was making me go dhak-dhak already!! *playing Dhak dhak karne laga song* *dancing*🤪 *realising* 😳 Oops! Sorry!! *giggle*😉 Can't really show my dance moves when you're so eagerly waiting for my comment!! 😉

*listening to One In A Million* This song is the closest to my heart and I really think that this song goes with the current track in your story!! Awww... The two were just adorable here!!

The second I read Maan and Geet, I was literally jumping from the floor to ceiling!!!! In fact, I just broke a leg of my chair!! 😆 Hahahah... What?? Don't look at me as if I've gone bonkers, okay!!! Sheesh! It definitely didn't happen, but yes my stomach was somersaulting, of course, Babeh!!!

Aye Haaye!! Veer! What a lovely name! In fact, I love them too!! A lovely pair they made!! 😳

And on the last line, 'He wanted to kiss her again.', I went swirling around my house!!! 😍

I love you for updating it again so early!! Am sure the next part will be a rocker like this one!👍🏼

Oh, and oh! And the line where he wished to take a deep breath after seeing Khushi in that attire, just was hilarious!!!🤣 Lord, even before I could complete reading that sentence, I had predicted the rest of it and couldn't help but fall of the chair laughing after reading fully!!🤣

*sigh* You made me dream again, mah chica!!😍

And yes, it's not that I don't love you if you don't update! 😆

I love you, mah chica, even if you don't!!!!🤗

Annie

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Edited by PhoenixRadar - 12 years ago