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beccky

@beccky

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Posted: 13 years ago

#231

NAYIKAAA 🤗 🤗 🤗

OH MY GOD.. So many updates in a week.. I'm surely blessed... 😆

So many chapters to read after that cute chapter wherein Khushi wants to wish Arnav one last time..😳 and wants to be the last person to wish.. aww that chapter was tooo cute..!!! I was smiling like hell after I read it... as if somebdy said that to me.. 😕 😆

and Finally Dhruv have entered... He looks like Arnav.. hmmm...😛 and He called Khushi babe 😆 and Arnav felt uncomfortable...😳 "Unbelievable" haha.. 😉

neway the point is he apologized to Dhruv and Dhruv knew he was trying to impress her.. hehe..

he is quite a guy..!! 😛

Ohkay.. so whts gng on with Payal and Akash.. She wants to marry him.. Akash has prposed wow... 😃 🥳

Khushi was dreaming bout them... 😍 ☺️ even she wants to get married to Arnav but...

So I'm looking forward to their date again... 😃 hmmm dunno what will they plan.. and how they will jointly try to manaofy mammiji... 😆 like Arnav dealt with her in serial or something different already excited.. 😕 😛

Oh Do continue soon.. hope to see these many updates again next weekend... 😃

I just cant tell u how awsm u made my weekend by giving so many updates this week... haha... 😳

Chao cya next weekend again.. TC !!! 🤗

and thanks for the PMs!!! 😊

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desisweetheart9

@desisweetheart9

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Posted: 13 years ago

#232

Thanks for the PM. Loved the update. Interesting.

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livy

@livy

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#233

that was really good. looking forward to the next chapter.

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-doe-eyes-

@-doe-eyes-

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+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#234

:D FINALLY caught up :P And I'm so loving the way the story is moving right now...it's just so natural, it might as well be happening right in front of me, the plot and the characters are that believeable :)

I'm really intrigued about Dhruv...I was laughing so hard when he called Khushi a babe :P And he's a bit more insightful than a lot of people we got to see in the show, isn't he? He figured out so easily that Arnav 'has the hots' for Khushi :P Smart boy- a miniature ASR?

Aaand I was wondering about Payash angle in your story and lo and behold, they wanna get married!! I'm so excited to read the coming updates- because like you said, giving Payal and Akash's relationship a name would push Khushi to question the point of her own undefined relationship with Arnav- and hopefully it'll give Arnav the impetus to figure out for himself that what he feels for Khushi is called 'love'...I mean I was literally shaking my head at him when he burst out at Khushi coz of Dhruv- confused about what he feels and what he should do about it...typical Arnav. Honestly your Arnav and Khushi are so realistic- I can relate them to the characters initially etched out when the show started, and I love that. Fingers crossed for what'll happen in the next update :D -Awesome updates :)

And I'm so sorry I was so late in replying! :( I promise I'll be more regular from now on

Edited by -doe-eyes- - 13 years ago

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nayikaPM

@nayikaPM

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Posted: 13 years ago

#235

Sorry that my next update is so long in coming guys! I did wrote something but it was horrible so I got rid of it all.

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Preeti

@preetihere

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Posted: 13 years ago

#236

Originally posted by: nayikaPM
Sorry that my next update is so long in coming guys! I did wrote something but it was horrible so I got rid of it all.

after u rewrite what u want to , send what u think was "horrible" also, we'll see 😃 acha hi hoga!

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lazyleaves

@lazyleaves

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#237

I can't get enough of this FF. I love Dhruv :)

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DISHA

@shinaa

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#238

Yup a talk is all they need.how long can they stay like this otherwise.thanks for the pm and sorry for the late comment

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Jasleen

@Jasleen

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#239

Awesome job! I just caught up with the last two chapters. Lol I loved how Dhruv called Khushi a babe😆 Oh things are getting interesting, Khushi's thinking of marriage! Continue soon!