Pyaar tune kya kiya.. Kriyaansh os..pt 5 updated.. - Page 9

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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
waiting 4 the next part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
Hey ...
Plzz update soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
dat was awesm update both parts were awesm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
sharon's pov was awesome...loved the update...now i seriosuly wanna see rey repenting over wht crap he said for kria...as for kria-angel make her so strong...


umm.one suggestion for this one.if u want to...like all other stories dont let kria accept rey so soon...let her throw some attitude now ...bring them back to the baatcutter-linecutter mode with their lovely fights to the chabilal-ramaira mode...that wud be more entertaining...just a thought.if u cud encorporate it...neways update soon.coz i wanna know how it takes a turn...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
jesus christ!
cnt c kriya soo depressed n sad! pl taani & rey ko alag karke KR ko milado!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
sorry fr da late comment
read bth da parts jst now
awesum updte
it was soo overwhelming nd emotional one
i was havin tears in my eyes 😭
m still crying wit all the stuff goin on in D3😭
u potrayed in sharon's POV
dat was awesum
luvd sharon in this OS
shit rey proposed taani😲
nd WTH kriya tried to suicide 4 TIMES????
den rey hw culd he say dose words bout kriya
sharon was rite
wat hppnd at the last
jaldi updte karo na angel
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
Amazing post angel.
Hope they come to know about kria soon.
Thanks for pm.

Plz update soon.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
Thank u all for ur precious comments...and sorry for making all of u cry ... hope u like this part too... i thought it'll b an OS but its going like SS lolzzz... chalo go on read 3rd part...

plzzz ignore typos...
PART 3..

Sharon watched her from the glass wall of the room ...

Just then she had the call of Swayam..

Swayam: Sharon humein tumse milna hai we r waiting for u in BB court ...

Sharon: but main...

Swayam: we r waiting for u ...

Sharon : ok i m ... i m coming...

Sharon went to the BB court ... where all were present ... Luking her Swayam and Rey stud up... now all were staring her with questioning faces ...

Sharon: What guys tum logon ne mujhe yahan kyun bulaya hai ...

Rey: yeh tum hum se puch rahe ho , din ko collage main tum achanak kahin challi gayi aur wo ... wo .. wo Kria k baare main ... i mean tum kuch kehna chahti thi...

Sharon: Why do u care Rey ... tumhe to uske baare main baat nhee karni thi na...

Swayam: sirf Rey nhee hum b jaana chahte hain k tum kya kehna chahti thi...

Vicky: haan Sharon plzz batao humein ...

Sharon:Lool guys mujhe kuch kaam hai so i m going ...

She started walking out when Rey came in front of her and stoped her holding her arms...

Rey: Sharon main jaana chahta hoon... u cant go like this..

Sharon: Rey let me go...

Rey: nhee Sharon God dammit tell me...

Sharon: Rey mujhe jaane do ...

Rey(shouted): Batao Sharon mujhe jaane hai...

hearing this she jerked his hand pushed him and started moving back with tears flowing through her cheeks shouting...

Sharon: (still crying and shouting) Kya jaana chahte ho tum log haan kya ...

Saying this she is constantly moving backward touched the wall and sat by it ...she was crying ...

Rey was very shocked to see her friend like this , now he knew there was surely something big she was hiding but wat ... Swayam went Sharon sat by her she hugged him , he comforted him and
made her stand up ...

Sharon: tum sab jaana chahte ho na k main ajj kahan gayi thi ,to chalo mere saath ...

All went with her in Rey's car , Sharon was driving and she stopped by a hospital...Every 1 were really worried and scared ...she parked the car ..

Rey was really feared , he was not understand why he is having the feeling that some1 very special is in danger ...he was sensing her , he was feeling her presence ...

Sharon came out of the car and every1 follwed her without uttering a single word... every 1 was really scared ... Neha holding Vicky's arm ... with every single step Rey's heart beat was beating faster ...

They reached near Kria's room where Her dad was standing... He saw them went to Sharon and kept her hand to Sharon's shoulder ...Sharon blinked her eyes...and he left from there...Sharon turened to face them...

Sharon: tum sab jaana chahte the na k main ajj kahan gayi thi ... main hospital aayi thi ...kisi se milne...

Swayam: kis se??????(with fear in his voice)

Sharon holds the curtain and moved them away from the glass wall of the room ...

Sharon: is se milne...

Every 1 luked in and were hell shocked to see Kria lying on the bed with oxygen mask and cannula on her hand with a drip and her wrist was bandanged with her bloos oozing out and making the bandage red...

All had tears in eyes ... no one was in the condition to speak... Rey went near the glass wall and touched it like he was touching her ..He was shattered to see her like this , yes he was with some 1 else but she was his first true love...
he was smashed to see those tubes around her body ... he was dieing from inside to see that bandage around her wrist ...


Swayam , he was in a stage of trauma , he was seeing her best friend one who made him what he is today one who cant live without dance is just lying on a hospital bed quietly...

Sharon:main tum sab ko sab kuch bataun g but guys plzzz abhi yahan se chalo ... its hospital...

All heard this and started walking off but Rey was still in the same position his hands were on the glass walls of room and he was just staring her...

Swayam: Rey chal...

But he was not listening to any1 he was just staring his ''Baatcutter '' ...Swayam holds hid arm and pulled him but his eyes were still stuck on her ..Swayam was pulling him and pulled out of the hospital...


All went to the basket ball court..every1 sat with tears in their eyes...

Neha: par use hua kya?????

Sharon: Sucide...

all luked at her with shocked expression .

Swayam: Sucide...???????

Sharon: haan its the fifth time she attempted sucide, u know guys wo zinda to hai but not more than a dead body , use lagta hai k sab galat uski wajah se hua hai , use lagta hai k hum sab us se nafrat karte hain ,use lagta hai k maa ki death uski wajah se hui hai...

Simmi: Maa????????

Sharon: haan main aur Kria twin sisters hain aur mujhe yeh maa that means smiriti aunty k accident wale din pata chala..., unhone mujhe bataya (narrated the whole story ) usne humein dhoka nhee diya , usne apne doston ko dhoka nhee(she started crying tears started flowing through her cheeks.. she luks at Rey) Rey usne tumhain dhoka nhee diya tumhein cheat nhee kiya balke
usne to khud ko kho kar hum sab ko life di hai...(saying this she sat by her knees)

All went silent for sometime ... actually they didn't knew wat to speak or wat to talk or how to react ...Just then rey stud up and started walking out...when Swayam stopped him ...

Swayam: Rey ... Rey ruk ... kahan ja raha hai...

Swayam went in front of him stopped him ...

Rey: nhee Swayam mujhe jaane de...(forcing Swayam to leave him)

Swayam: par tu ja kahan raha hai?????

Rey: Swayam mujhe jaane de..(he cried out and Swayam hugged him ) wo aisa kese karsakti hai , wo humain chor k jaana chahti hai , mujhe chor k jaana chahti hai..( he broke out and sat by his knees and Swayam too sat ..still hugging him) mene kya kardiya Swayam , mne use kho diya , mene apni Baatcutter ko hamesha k liye kho diya , mene use nhee samjha Swayam...(He starts slapping himself)
main buht bura hoon , main boht bura hoon Swayam...mene us par bharosa nhee kiya , mene uska dil tora...(Swayam stopped him held his hands and hugged him tightly)

Swayam: (crying) sirf tune nheee humne b use galat samjha ...( Sharon stud up and went to them and hugged both of them)

Sharon: use hamari zaroorat hai , use bachalo , meri behan ko bachalo...use hamare saath ki zaroorat hai , hamare pyaar ki zaroorat hai...

Listening this all of them came to them and hugged them ..

Vish: hum apni Kria ko waapas layen g...hun use phirse wesa karden g...

Vicky: haan hum apni A.G.S ko dobara wese hee dekhen g...

Neha: Kria ko wesa banna hoga hamare liye...


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For pmz add Angel56...

Tab tak k liye its Angel signing off ... Alveeda...




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Posted: 13 years ago
#89
res
unres

i loved the update and finally they know Kria is not at fault...

thanks for the pm😊
Edited by shenz_kriyaansh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
awesome update
I'm crying after reading this part
very well written
keep it up
and plz update soon

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