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Part 5.
do hear this and then read ...
Charity Function Night...
Back stage...
Sharon: Guys r u ready ...
Neha: haan Sharon all ready ..
Rey : par Kria kahan hai ...
Sharon: wo main use leke aai hun ..wo auditorium main bethi hai ...
Swayam: Tani ur ready na ..
Tani: haan bhai ...
Nil: guys chalo hamari performance ka time hogaya hai ...
P.S: Sharon was playing as Kria's character in the performance ... and Neha was playing Smiriti character ...and rest were same ...they have been showing the whole incident
how Kria came to Mumbai and then wat happened to her ...
Announcement: so first time Weakling and Dazling are gonna perfoem together so plzz welcome them...
They went to the stage ...Kria was sitting in the first row... but was just sitting neither reacting nor responding...
Performance started with Sharon talking to neha (as kria was talking to her mother when they were back to Mumbai ) ...then neha (smiriti) went for some office work ...and Sharon(Kria)
came to restaurant ...where she saw Rey with Tani ...and she came out of restaurant...
Kria was watching all this ...unknowingly some reactions were going through her body ..Yes she was reacting ...unknowingly tears came off her eyes...
Sharon(Kria) called neha(smiriti) while she was crossing the road ...and a fast moving vehicle hitted Neha(smiriti)...
Just then every 1 heard a loud shout... Sharon turned towards audience and saw Kria ..yes it was Kria's shout ... She was standing with her hand in the air like she dont want it to happen ...
but before Sharon and others cud reach upto her ..She fainted ...
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Sharon's Home...
Sharon : Doc..doctor wo wo theek to hai na ...?????
Rey: haan doctor wo achanak ...wo theek hai na...
Every1 was worried...
Doctor: calm down ...sharon ...wo theek hai ...shock ki wajah se she fainted but now she is stable but abhi injection ki wajah se wo neend main hai ...
Swayam: Thank God... thank u doctor... but ab wo react karegi ya nhe???
Doctor: Swayam yeh to uske hosh main aane k baad pata chale ga ... ok Sharon main chalta hun koi b prob ho do call me...
Sharon noded...
Sharon went near Kria's bed sat by it and caresed her hairs... after some time she stud up and said...
Sharon: guys ab Kria theek hai tum log wese b poori raat nhee soye is performance ki tayari ki wajah se ...so plzz go home ..sleep for sometime...
Rey : But Sharon...
Sharon: i m with her Rey ...she'll b ok ...
Swayam: par tum akele kese ...
Sharon: main akeli kahan hun dad hain na ...plzz guys go and rest for sometime...
All noded and proceeded towards their homes...
Sharon sat by Kria ...looking at her with concerns and love ... kissed her cheek ...and slept by her ...
At about 3.00 am in night ...Kria awaked with a shout ...as NHE...
sharon awaked as she shouted ...
Kria: Ma Ma ...(crying)
Sharon: Kria ... shhh kuch nhee hua ...
Sharon hugged her tightly...
Kria: Sharon Maa... Sharon Maa ...Maa mujhe chor k chali gayi ...
Sharon: nheee nheee she is with us wo hameha hamare saath hai ...
Kria: nahee Maa meri wajah se ...
She broke the hug...
Sharon:nahee tumahri wajah se kuch b nahe hua... (removed her tears ) tumhe pata hai Kria ...Maa ne mujhse kaha tha k wo tumhe dance karte dekhna chahti hain ..
wo tumhe dobara St.Louis main dekhna chahti thi ...tum unki baat nhee mano gi ...
Kria noded and hugged her tightly ...Both sisters cried their Heart out ...
PS: sorry guys i m not giving much part of Krisha's father ...
Morning ...A new Morning for Kria Ghai no Kria Rai Prakash ...
door bell ..ting ting..
Sharon: kria tum door open karo ..m in washroom ...
Kria: hmm ok ..
Kria went towards the door ..opened the door...while all the ppl standing on the door were hell shocked ...
Swayam: Kria...(he had tears in his eyes actually the whole gang had )
Neha jumped in ...and hugged her tightly...
Neha: Kria tum theek hagai ...
neha broke the hug...just then Sharon came upto them ...
Sharon: haan guys Kria thik hogai hai... she is fine now...
Kria smiled at her words...
All came upto her hugged her ... Tani was also their with them ... she cam upto Kria..
Sharon: kria she is Tani ..Swayam's cousin sister ...
Kria remembered that she is the same gal whom Rey proposed in that restaurant...
Kria: Hi Tani ...
Tani came to her and hugged her ...
Rey was still standing at the door ..can't believe his eyes that His Baatcutter is standing talking smiling in front of him...
Sharon: Rey ...
Rey looked at Sharon ...and came in ...went to Kria ...
Kria was busy with all her friends but as Rey stepped towards her ..all of them backed off...Kria eyes met his ...They had a deep intense
eyelock ...Rey had teary eyes... he cudn't control himself and his emotions and hugged her tightly ...rey cried out ..he cried out loud...
After some time he broke the hug... Sharon came to him ... and said...
Sharon: ab kria theek hai rey ...
Swayam: haan guys ab rona dhona band karo ...come on ajj hamari Captain wapas aayi hai ..lets dance ...
Kria smiled and said..
Kria: haan guys ..now i m completely ok ... tum sab jo ho mere saath ...
They had an awesome day ...of course their friend was back ... and they were happy...
At Night ...Krisha's bedroom ...
Sharon: Kria ...
Kria: hmm ...
Sharon: tumhe pata hai jab tumahri tabayat kharab thi tab sab buht pareshan the ...Rey bhi ...
Kria: Sharon plzz dont wanna talk about Rey ...
Sharon: but kyun dont u love him ...
Kria smiled at her words...
Kria: i loved him , i love him and i will always love him ...u know my heart dont allows me to forget him ...
Sharon: phir kyun ...he still loves u only ...
Kria: but he is with Tani now and main kisi se uska pyaar nhee cheen sakti ...
Sharon: but Kria he loves u only...
Kria: but the fact is he is with some1 else...u know Sharon some stories are meant to be completed our story is not among those ...so just forget it ...wese tell me howz Swayam haan haan ...
Sharon: Wat Swayam...☺️
Kria: So ...
Sharon: So wat ... Kria buht raat hogayi hai i think we shud sleep ...
Kria: no tell me ur with Swayam ...right...😉
Sharon: KRIA ..i m sleeping ..u too sleep ..wese bhi kal 31 december hai..last day of the year ...good night ...
Kria: hmm .last day ...
Kria POV..
Is saal sab kuch change hogaya... VD wali raat mene Rey ka dil tora aur use kho diya ...and jab main mumbai aayi tou Maa ko kho diya ... aur phir shayad khud bhi kahin kho diya ... but m happy that he is happy...
Next Day ...
(The whole gang were going to restaurant Rey went to pick Swayam and Tani and all were meeting ar Krisha's home)
At Swayam's house...
Rey : Swayam tu abhi tak tayar nhee hua jaldi kar ...
Swayam: haan bus abhi aaya...(Swayam went to his room to get ready)
Tani: jab tak bhai nhee aate app betho ...
Rey : nhee Tani mujhe tum se kuch baat karni hai ...
Tani : hmm ..haan bolo ...
Rey looked down ...and then slowly steady his face up ...
Rey: I m sorry but i can't be with u ...
Tani : mujhe pata tha yeh Rey ...but i m happy for both of u ...
Rey : Tani i m sorry but i need a favour ...i know we r not together now but plzz dont tell this to any1 ..just pretennd thhat we r together ...
Tani : but Rey kyun ...u love Kria right then Y we pretend just go and tell her this ...
Rey : Nahee ...Tani ...u know she dont deserve a guy like me ..She is the best and she shud get the best ...i m not worth her ..i dont wanna remind her all her pains again ...
Tani : but Rey ...(just then Swayam comes)
Swayam: chalen guys ..
Rey : haan ..nhee to teri Sharon hamein maar degi ...
Swayam: Kya Rey tu bhi na ...
Tani: ab chalen ...
they reached Sharon's house from where they went to a restaurant...
At Restaurant ...
Simmi: awesome restaurant no ..
Neha: haan buht acha its looking...
all sat down on a big table settled for the whole gang...
Vishaka: we r together like this after so long na ...
Swayam: haan ...and it feels so good...
Rinni: guys ..come on join the dance floor...
Nil: haan guys come on ..after so long Kria is back ...come on Kria ...
all joined the dance ..floor ..all were dancing together ... just when Kriyaansh back touched eachother ..both tuned to look ...and gets lost in eachothers deep eyes ..with full concerns love ..dignity ..purity ... their thoughts were disturbed by their friends ...after the dance all were back to their table ...
Simmi: aj to maza agaya...
Amar: haan aj dance karne main buht maza aya...
Just then Rey's mobile rang...ting ting...
Rey : dad ka phone ...
Sharon: kya hua Rey kis ki call hai ...
Rey : dad ki hai US se ..
Sharon: so pick it up ...
Rey : haaan ...(he picks it up) hello...hello ...
Swayam: network problem hoga ..bahar jaake baat karle ...
Rey noded and went out to talk ...
Kria: tumne papa ko call karke bataya that we 'll be late...
Sharon: nhee abhi karti hun ... oh shit ..
Kria: kya hua????
Sharon: battery low... tum apne phone se call karlo..
Kria: haan ..but lagta hai main apna phone car main bhul gayi ..main abhi le k aati hun ...
Sharon: main bhi chalti hun tumhare saath ...
Kria: nhee u enjoy with swayam..😆
Sharon:☺️ acha jao akeli ...
Kria went out to get her mobile...When she saw Rey talking with his father on phone ...but wait he was in the middle of the road ...unknowingly in order to catch the network he walked in the middle of the road ...Kria was watching this ...Just then she saw a fast moving vehicle is coming towards rey and his back was facing the vehicle...Kria shouted so Rey cud see but her voice was not reaching upto him...All the memories of her mothers accident rewind in her mind...Kria just threw the keys of car and started runing towards Rey ...She pushed Rey ...and ... Rey felt sudden push and he fell down ...when he turned to see wat happened ...he saw a fast moving car passing by ...when he luked down at the road he saw A girl in while dress now completely dipped in red colour of blood...he stud up moved towards that gal ...sat down took that gal in his arms ...removed the hairs on her face ..and saw that it was KRIA...
Rey : baatcutter ..baatcutter ...yeh ..(trying to make her wake ) baatcutter ...utho na baatcuter...utho na..(tears coming off his cheek)
Kria slowly opened half of her eyes...and looked at Rey ..moved her hands towards his cheeks...
A smile passed through his face as her baatcutter replied ...
Rey : baatcuter tum theek ho na ...tumhe kuch nhee hoga ...
Kria: Rey ..shhh ... jab marna chahti thi tab zindagi ne ijaazat nhee di aur ajj jb jaana chahti hun to maut bula rahee hai ...
Rey : nhee tumhe kuch nhee hoga ...main hoon na ..main tumhe kuch nheehone doonga...
Kria: sab sapne adhoore reh gaye ..bus aik poora horaha hai ...tumhari baaahon main mar rahe hun ... tumhare saath jee nhee payi shukar tumahri baahon main mar rahee hun ...I love u Rey ...(saying this she moved her hands through his cheeks )
Rey : I love u too baatcutter par tumhe kuch nheee hoga ..main tumhe kuch nhee hone dunga ...
Just then then all others came out...and then hospital...
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I.C.U.
Doctor came out ...
Sharon: wo wo theek to hai na...
Doctor: i m sorry she is no more ...
Sharon crushed on floor ...Swayam held her ...Neha hugged Vicky ...All were crying...Rey was standing just by the I.C.U ...he went inside ...sat by her ...
Rey : ab tak mene tumhara intezaar kiya ab tum mera kar na...
Saying this he went out of the room and went away ...all others were crying ...
Nil: Rey ...guys Rey kahan hai ...
All started looking here and there ...
Swayam: guys use dhoondo ...
all started finding him ..but he found no where ..then they started asking peons and nurses and ppl out there in hospital ...then some 1 told them they saw him going to terrace...they rushed towards the terrace ...all were running to find him ...as they opened the door of terrace they saw Rey standing at the wall of terrace ..before they cud reach to him ..He jumped ...They ran to catch him but saw him lying on the floor with blood all around his body ...
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After one year...
Sharon: sab tayariaan hogayi na...
Swayam: haan haan sab prepared hai ..cake tayar hai...
Sharon: haan par baaki sab kahan hain ...
Neha: hum yeh rahe ...
Tani: haan hum sab yeh rahe ...
Sharon: mujhe to laga tum sab bhul gaye..
Tani: ajj ka din kese bhul sakte hain hum ...
Vicky: ajj wo donon hum sab se door chale gaye the...
Nil: Vicky ajj hamein unke jaane ki nhee unke peheli baar milne ki khushi manani hai ...
Simmi: haan ajj se theel do saal pehel ...that means 31 decembet ..new year k din Kriya aur Rey aik doosre se mile the ...
Tani: haan aur isi din wo aik doosre se hamesha k liye mil gaye... wo log aik doosre se pyaar nhee aik doosre ki ibaadat karte the ... isiliye main ubhe apna Angel samajh kar unki photo hamesha apne saath rakhti hoon ..unhone ne mujhe sache pyaar ka matlab samjahaya ...
Sharon: guys chalo lets cutt the cake...
The END ...
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