OS-Is She Mine? (PART 8 AND 9 ARE OUT) - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Well a lot of you guys asked for it, so here it is!
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Part 2

Arnav reached in his pocket and pulled out his phone.
He quickly dialed Khushi's number.
''PICK UP DAMMIT!'' He screams.
He keeps trying calling her.
''Why did you have to force her into marriage Chote? WHY didn't you just ask her?
You ruined an innocent girl's life.'' Nani said.
Payal was on the floor crying. ''Why did Khushi have to sacrifice so much for me?''
Payal got up and was face to face with Arnav.
''WHY? WHY DID YOU DO THIS TO MY LITTLE SISTER? WHY? IF YOU HAD DOUBTS YOU COULD OF ASKED HER! Why..why did you have to ruin her life...''
''Payal please calm down'' Akash said.
''NO! I WON'T CALM DOWN AKASH! I HAVE ALSO TOLERATED SO MUCH. I TOLERATED YOUR MOTHER'S HATRED TOWARD ME, BUT NOW ARNAV CROSSED THE LINE.
I don't care if you mess with me, but if you play around with my little sister's heart, I won't be able to let you go so easily.'' Nani goes to Payal to comfort her.
''Payal dear, it's okay, we will get Khushi back into this house.'' Nani says.
''NO. I will not let Khushi back into this house where she will be hurt by her husband.
Nani, if you were in my shoes, would you want your little sister to be in a house where she was unhappy? No you wouldn't would you.'' Payal got up and headed to the door.
''PAYAL! WHERE ARE YOU GOING?'' Akash screamed.
''To find Khushi'' She said back.
''Where are you going to look? She could be anywhere.'' Anjali said.
''PAYAL ITS RAINING LIKE CRAZY GET BACK HERE!'' Akash screams and follows her.
Payal leaves the house to go find Khushi.
Arnav also runs out of the house and gets into his car.

Payal's P.O.V.

''Akash can you take me to the temple?'' Payal asks
''Payal, shouldn't we go to Bua ji's house first?''
''No Akash, I know she wouldn't go there. Poor Khushi, outside in the pouring rain in this weather! Akash please drive fast, I need to find her!''

Khushi's P.O.V.

''Thank-you Bhayia.'' Khushi starts to walk away.
''Khushi ji! Wait! I forgot to tell you, the train leave in 30 minutes, make sure your not late!''
''Thank you for telling me'' She replies.
Ring, ring, ring!
''Hello?'' ''KHUSHI! WHERE ARE YOU?'' ''Jiji, don't worry, I'm fine.''
''Khushi, I can tell your crying.'' ''N-no Ji-ji I-I am not-t.''
''Khushi please tell me where you are!''
''Jiji, I'm going back to Lucknow.''

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How is it so far? I thought I should give Payal a main role for this part. I will try my best to get part 3 and 4 up today!

Edited by IPKKNDfan101 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
Update soon i wanna know wah happenes next plz lol
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Fantastic update! I really admire Payal as the supporting character here! Do continue soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Youuu go payal :) loved wht she said x Arnav better cum in time and stop her :P update soon x
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awsome update, I liked how you gave Payal a voice after all sge's khushi's sister
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Posted: 13 years ago
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this is awesome just great and of course u should write another part ill eagerly be waiting
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update...
atleast there is something in the world which gives importance to payal...
So she is leaving delhi...thats Sad
plzz continue soon...
thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome part and def continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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absolutely loved it. I am glad that Khushi is standing up for herself. and I hope that they all win her trust back. :D Please continue!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wonderfully written. loved how u gave payal a main role in this part. please update soon!

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