SwaRon SS-Lost at sea to rekindle love:-Part8 Pg38 - Page 18

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Posted: 13 years ago

Ermm...many people complained me about not receiving PM...i am sorry guys but i did send it to everyone...don't know what the problem is!!!

PART6

Swayam was resting his head on her stomach and she was entangling his soft hair in her small fingers...they both were staring at the celestial objects placed randomly up in the sky...admiring them silently...

Then suddenly Sharon started laughing.

"What makes you laugh Sharon all of a sudden?" he said looking at her.

"I just remembered your dialogue Swayam...she said enacting him "Bohot accha lagata hai jab tum mera naam leti ho...pata nahi suddenly apna naam bhi accha lagne lagta hai...jab tumhare mu se sunta hu...ek ajeeb si feeling hoti hai...pata nahi isse stomach ache kehete hai ya stomach pain...ek ajeeb se feeling"

Swayam got a shock of 1000 watts... "She remembered the exact dialogue " he mumbled

"Kya hua...did you get shock of your life??...i remember everything okay... whatever happened that night...its latched in one corner of my heart...and will never forget it...for god sake stop looking at me like that...although I was high I knew I was with you"

"Ermm I know that...but mera dialogue ratta hai tumhe!!...i am impressed" he said smirking.

Then after a while Swayam started laughing...

"Now why are you laughing...are you copying me?" she said pulling his hair a bit.

"Arrey I remembered the swimming pool incident...the way you were seducing me before falling down in the pool..poor Sharon's mission failed " and he started laughing.

"Arghhh Swayam...you were so adamant that time..mere trap mein phase bhi nahi" she answered him honestly.

Then after few moments Sharon spoke "Swayam during our boat ride...were you honest with your answers?...i mean you told me that you are a Casanova...and you get bored of girls is that true"

"You think so Sharon...like really???"

"No...of course not...i am the only one na...but you are unpredictable like you said that time"

"That toh I am for sure and yes you are the only one" he said showing off his collar

Now again after a while Swayam spoke "You remember our salsa performance Sharon..long back..when I was newly appointed as your ACS...you were sooo lost in me"

"Ummm...you can say that...you know whenever I dance with you...i go in a trance..and that day you were too good...like I said you are an awesome dancer"

Swayam just smiled feeling happy.

"Umm Swayam the rose day...why didn't you ask me for a dance on a slow one...i was expecting you see?" she asked him after a while.

"You were upset Sharon...that too cause of me...I am really sorry for manipulating the results...I didn't want to upset you further by asking for a dance"

"Don't say sorry Swayam...i deserved that ...but I really wanted to be with you and dance with you"

They were all remembering their happy moments...rejoicing them again.

After an hour or so Sharon spoke

"Swayam I guess we should sleep now..."

He just moved up and rested his head on her chest near her heart so that he could listen to her heart-beats...trying to suppress the sound of the crickets who were screeching in the background

"Your heartbeat is like a melody Sharon...I can hear different rhythms"

He pressed his ear against her heart to be able to hear it properly... in the meanwhile brushing his cheeks so a electric shock went through her spine...his touch made her heart beat at a faster rate "Arrey ab toh your heart is running a race it seems...its pounding heavily"

"Swayam tum bhi na...now let me sleep aur tum bhi so jao"

"Can we sleep like this...i will drift off to sleep by listening to your heartbeats...its more kind of singing lullaby to me"

"Yes you can honey" she said caressing his hair with her hands..and the other wrapped around his back and Swayam too wrapped his arms around her tightly.

****

The next day morning Swayam was awaken by sweet soft kisses on his lips...he got up immediately Sharon was resting her chin on his chest and said "Good morning or good afternoon I really don't know..tumhari watch band ho gayi hai" she said giggling and then sat down...

Swayam too followed the suit and said "Hmm jo bhi hai par ab sab Good hai "

She laughed at his comment.

"Ummm are you okay Sharon..i mean yesterday..."

"I m feeling good Swayam...I said it all..there is nothing left now" she said flaunting her beautiful smile.

And that smile made Swayam's day and he said "Why do our candid talks end up in a teary note always?"

"It was not a teary end yesterday..it was blissful"

"Indeed it was...but I am not talking about that...previously you were crying badly Sharon I... was really worried for you"

"I don't know Swayam what happened I could not control myself...it was just the fact that I was feeling horrible for treating you like..."

He interrupted her by kissing her...and after a while said "If you utter a single word justifying yourself na...I swear I won't leave you"

"HAHAHA...you are talking like me Swayam ...dhamki and all haan..." she stopped after this

"Oh good Lord...Swayam is that our cruise...people are getting down see" she got up immediately

"Oh yes it is..." he gave the same reaction

"I guess Sharon this island is one of the place where the cruise is gonna halt"

"Thank God for saving us" they said in unison and Sharon gave Swayam a bone breaking hug.

"Sharon be quick we need to hide..." he said this breaking the hug and dragged Sharon to hide behind the bushes.

They then saw their gang approaching them...

Rinni ,Nilesh and Simmi came forward giving them a ghastly look.

"Hey" Simmi said blankly.

"Hey" Swayam answered.

"Hey" Rinni said.

"Heyaaa" Sharon was just following the suit not knowing what else to say.

"Odd man out...Sharon" Nil bickered.

Simmi whacked Nil's head for being a nitwit.

"Swayam & Sharon when did you guys get down...hamse pehele kya?" Rinni asked

"Uh...uh...haan haan Rinni hum abhi utar gaye...haina Swayam" Sharon answered giving Swayam a look to come up with some answer.

"What the hell guys...where you were last night...and kal ka pura din you just royally ignored us haan...we both were searching for you guys on the entire cruise??" Swayam was best in this game.

"Arrey Swayam dekho na yeh sab iss stupid Nil ke wajase se ho raha hai...he was poora din in that game arena with Vicky we all were searching them on the entire cruise like idiots" Simmi answered.

Sharon just wanted to howl with laughter...she was so proud of her boyfriend.

"I am sorry guys please forgive me...AND... let's just hit the beach...!!!."Nil said removing his shirt

"Sheeshhh...he is never going to sudrofy...is he??" Simmi questioned them.

"Nope" was everyones answer to the rhetorical question.

The rest of the group was already enjoying on the beach. Swayam and Sharon thought of going in the cruise...they were tired, hungry and thirsty.

"How I wish I could kiss you now Swayam... you were too good" Sharon said this to Swayam holding his hand while walking.

"Who is stopping you then...our gang didn't even notice that we were missing since yesterday from the cruise...they are least interested in us sweetie...so you can proceed." Swayam said winking.

"SWAYAMM" Sharon said showing her tomato red cheeks.

"SHARONN" Swayam imitated her.

And they walked towards the cruise.
****
Not the end aur parts hai😆
Edited by Rutu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hayyyeee wat an awesome update!!!!😳
the way they were remembering their happy moments and rejoicing them again was the sweetest and most adorable part of the update😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hahaha, swayam's retort was EPIC! Too good.
And the reminiscing is a really nice touch!
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Posted: 13 years ago
these two are adorable i loved it awesomeee update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
aawww it was so cute, i was smiling hard when swaron cherish those special moment's, specially rdx party moment i loved it... god!! if half of this palki give me in the show i will be so thankful 2 her
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Posted: 13 years ago
this was soo cute rutu..😛every line was soo well explained..i cud soo visualise them..❤️u r too gud..👏loved it...u knw a secret..i always wait eagerly for ur update..😳
this is from me for one of my favorite writer
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update rutu !!
beautifully written👏
loved how sharon and swayam talked abt their happy moments ☺️, it was too adorable😃
now as the cruise is here , swaron are no more stranded 😊
the gang didnt even notice that SwaRon were missing all night 😆
will be waiting for the next part , update soon...
thanks for the pm.

p.s- really thought the ss was going to end with this part but thank god its not

Edited by tanukaswaron - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
It was really cute update
They r cherrishing their beautiful moments
Waiting for.next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
Another marvellous update. Loved the part where they were talikg about the past incidents. How i wish they would something similar in the show. Waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh thank god aur parts hai..
When i read that they meet their gang ..
I thought this is last part nd becm sad..
It is an awsm ..
Its lovely how they both were remainding their old days..
Pls update soon

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