FF: The games we play Thread 3 - Chapter 88 Pg 43

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citi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Finally!

I swear, waiting for an update to this is how I have learnt how to stalk an FF.😃

Every time I get a Yellow!, Blue! or Heyy! I go yippee!!

Good that she has managed to keep a cool facade in the face of such madness. Jais and his understanding of the Raizada is revealing of both the men.

Waiting for the next update...prune the waiting period if possible.😊

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Gargee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

B. B, B, B *sighs, shaking her head at the screen*

*Sighs again.*

Oh. Dear. Lord. B!!!! How the hell do you do that? And why- in God's name- Why am I not able to learn that from you? Promise me. Yes, Promise me right now Lady that you are going to teach me how to build a chapter up like that and then f**king leave the Readers on a Steep Cliffhanger.

How, B? How could you be so evil to us? You chose to leave us there? Really? I mean like, Really?

*Sighs again, and takes a looong deep Breath to calm herself down.* Okay that's that Rant I've had built up in me out in the open. 😆

Now, to the nitty-gritties of that Fabulous of that *jerks her thumb over her shoulder and jerks her head* Update over there.

You know, even in the show- I have always wondered- just how much Arnav and Khushi seem to carry over their shoulders. Its like They're the only people who have the courage or the actual brain to process something as big as what they Handle. The rest of them? Only Pretty faces that get scared even if someone so much as says a loud "BOO!"

Now, Jais. This guy- I'm in Love with. I'm in absolute Love with him. Its a pity He fell for Anjali. *Sigh* But he's got a clue and i know what he's got- At least I've guessed. But, Hey! Why ruin the surprise?😉

Shyam Manohar Jha.This character you've created? It's the most awesomely insane character I have ever read about. I mean- and Yes, I know I've said this before- but writing, creating someone like that with such flawlessly described Flaws- Kudos! Because that my dear, is a feat in itself. I'm so Proud of you B!

He's nutty. Yes. But the sophistication and intricacy and delicacy that you've employed in describing Shyam Nutty-nutterson- Wow! I mean, Wowah!!!

So again- a beautiful and Amazingly Gorgeous Job done Honey! *stands up and claps with tears running down her face not caring a whit that her hostel mates are staring at me with conviction dawning in their eyes that she has indeed crossed the Crazy Turn and taken a sharp Left.*

Kudos! And loads and Loads of Love!! *Huuug!*

Cheers Hon!

G <3

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ssafdar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Thank you...you paint a very creepy picture of Shyam (sends shivers down my spine)...can't believe that everyone left Khushi in the house by herself...all seemed more concerened about Anajli rather then the object of Shyams obesession (makes me so mad).

please update soon as i want to know what clue Jais and Arnav have found.

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seeta naipaul

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

thanks for the PM

awesome update

seriously every time I see Yellow or your name I jump at reading

your story

Arnav is holding on by a thin thread, when he get his hands on

Shyam he will kill him

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Kalyaani B Rao

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

I like this update and sure enough I did not have to go back to refresh my memory about the story. I knew what had happened and you told me what is happening with a promise that what will happen next is beyond my expectation.

This Khushi I like in this update, there is an eerie strength about her which can daunt anyone, SMJ included. He has gone mad after all; Khushi was another reason for the insanity to step out of his evil mind.

The update was worth the wait…well worth it.

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Ankita

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

I cant believe you finally updated this in ages and left us all at such a cliffhanger!!!! My breath is stuck in my throat!!!

Ufff... Amazingly written!!

I BEG you to update soon..

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farheen75

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

An amazing and scary chapter...knowing that it's a piece of fiction still I am scared to death and upset like hell for arnav and this is the power of your writing...kudos to you girl for writing so brilliantly and to infusing life into each character that they seem like real people.

Coming back to the update Khushi is one brave girl considering her condition and still acting so calmly...I think this is the start of an understanding between arnav and jais which will be based on mutual respect and finally arnav will have somebody to look up to like an elder brother.

Please bingala a humble request don't make us wait this long for another update and kindly finish this FF so that we can sigh in relief that everything is hunky dory in arnav and Khushi's paradise...I really missed those days when u used to update twice or thrice a day and that's how I got addicted this FF.