OS:I'll make u Mrs. Arnav Singh Raizada till 4ever

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pinky89

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Posted: 13 years ago

#81

Beautiful !!! Well written ...

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medha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#82

excellent work and i'm not sorry to say--it was not crappy as u describe it.

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Priya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#83

Loved it.i hope something like this happens in the show,though i dnt like everyone giving cold shoulder to khushi

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zsewaq

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Posted: 13 years ago

#84

its really a fabulous piece of writing. thoroughly enjoyed it.plz do continue.

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mishti_17

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Posted: 13 years ago

#85

Its amazing.. Loved all the 3 parts.. 😍

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Harshitha Shankar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#86

Fab work, Sunara. . . .
ALl of a sudden Khushi has turned into this punchbag for all the Raizadas except her hubby darling!! -__-

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maazia

@maazia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#87

A beautiful SS or OS - whatever you like to call it!!😃

Just like to make one comment. When you are writing dialogues, don't write the name of the person who is speaking ... it destroys the flow of the words and the story. The dialogue should be such that it portrays the speaker itself, should not need any other clarification...

I hope you get my point and are not offended by it...