Khuda Jaane ll Kriyaansh FF ll chapter 4 pg 60 - Page 13

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Originally posted by: abhiyakreya


sorry di aro update karegi

u have to wait till evening

shaam tak rukna padega...😭😭
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@ shenz - sorry yaar but its already decided dat i will reply to comments and aro will update

wait till evening pls

d update is all ready

and hey just w8 for few mins just finding a pic

uske baad i will update love and trust
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ok guys firstly a big thank u to all of u for ur like's nd comment ...so guys always do comment nd likes because it make us happy nd

sir rakhke k jaar de kadma te ,
jinde fir uthaya janda nahi ,
dil de k dilbar jaar nu ,
shergill bhulaya janda nahi ,
mera rsool ek , mera eman ek ,
eko rab varga jaar j kol hove ,
dooja jaar banaya janda nahi ...

ok ok bohat ho gyi sayari . nd agaib thanku all from both of us ...



At one place Kriya and Sharon left for shopping and on the other side rey and Swayam even left for shopping. What a destiny dey 4 have! They all arrived at the same mall yet didn't saw eachother! sharon were shopping in a fashionable designer shop making the shopkeeper go mad by asking him for d best lehenga's again and again. The shopkeeper too was frustrated but cant let them go even as if he would then it will b his loss only!

There on the other shop reyam were doing the shopping buying all the stuff needed for the marriage. KR were getting damn bored so they thought of going out.

Ek taraf se Kriya aaying and doosri taraf se rey. Both bumped into eachother.

Rey and Kriya – opps sorry!

'its fine' both replied at the same time and burst out laughing.

Kriya – jijz!!!

She shouted only to make rey scared

Rey – woah girl calm down itna mat chillao!

Kriya – oh shut up!

She ran in the shop where Swayam was present and almost give him a heart attack.

Swayam – woah calm down!

Kriya – hows u???

Swayam – chakachak! *wink*

Kriya – not soo funny!

Swayam – I know! Tu yahan kaise???

Kriya – don't ask! *she said frustrated*

Swayam – lemme guess Sharon???

Kriya – yup! Me bored!

Swayam – den help me! Ye batao Sharon ko kaunsi pasand aayegi?

He was selecting the rings. Kriya almost went to all the rings and was damn confused. Each and every ring was just perfect. Finally after a long tym she selected this ring

http://t0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcTjRmDa99F9WYJ1emRfCNaN5_Hro7nL9gzlAq_laGT5NdetNyigRA

Kriya – ye lo! She will lyk it for sure

Swayam – tereko itna tym kyun laga??

Kriya – arey meri behen ki shaadi hai aur uske liye ring select kar rahi hun so best hi dhundungi na!

Swayam – achha ji?

Kriya – yup!

Swayam – chal thanx saved my life jaaneman

Kriya – stop calling me ddat jijz else she will kill u for sure

Swayam – oh dekhenge!

Kriya – just shut up!

Swayam – kkk thanx saali saahiba!

Kriya – any tym!

Swayam – ab ye rey kahan gaya?

Kriya – kaun rey? *confused*

Swayam – mera bhai!

Kriya – aapka ek bhai bhi hai! Meko ni pata tha!

Swayam – abhi hi lonjdon se lauta hai

Kriya – kkk now me going nahi toh Sharon will kill me!

Swayam – kk bye!

she went home and helped the other in the arrangement and all

engagement se pehle raat ko

two sis r sitting in balcony nd cracking jokes ...
kriya : sis tune muje batay kyu nahi ..
sharon : kya nahi bataya mane ...
k : jahi ki jijzs ka bhai b hey ... jo london sey aya hey ...
s : arey cholly main bhool gyi thi ...
k : its k sis ...
s : k me bore ho rhi hoo ...
k : me to kya kre ...
suddenely kriya's phone bell ring ...
g : heloo ...
k : hello ...
guy : app kon bol rhe hoo ...
k : call apne ki hey to app batao na aap kon ho ...
guy : mane to sweetie ko call ki thi ...
k : lekin main ...but that guy cut in b/w ...
g: j main amar ...apka naigbour ...( sharonkriya sey kriya please cut mat karna please so kriya also start giving ans for her sis only ..)
k : kon sa left wala ja right wala ...
g : nahi j main to samne wala hoo ...
k : o to kya kaam tha apko mere saath ...
g : bas j muje to jahi pooshna tha ki aaj app balcony main baal sukhane kyu nahi ayi ...
k : ki matlab ...
g : matalab kuj nai j bas mane to aaj apne dosto ko bula liya tha apko dikhane k liye lekin app to ayi nahi kahi aap b hamari trha week end pey bath to nahi leti ...
k : what the hell ...
while this sharon laughing very hard ...
g : app batao aap rhi ho ki nahi mari bayjti hoo rhi hey ...
k : shut up phone cut kar rhe hi ki main cut kroo ...
g : app gusa kyu ho rhi hey mane to bas ase hi bol diya tha ...
kriya at last spek u p : u idiot , bewkoof , tumhe sense nahi hey kya baat karne ki ha ... muje mil to jao dekhna tumhara kya karti hoo .main ...u f*******
g : lo isme b koi pooshne ki baat hey
kriya cut the call at last ...
now kriya fuming with anger ...but sharon lauging non stop ...
k : sis uska to pta nahi tum to gyi kaam se m gonna kill u ...
nd then pillow fight start ...

other hand that guy is non other then rey ...
sw " kya rey kisi ko b tang karta hey tu ... bichari wo larki ...
r : bahi m just having fun ok or vese b wo larki main kuj jada hi atittude hey i guess ...abt to main is larki ko daily tang karne wala hoo ...
sw : abhey sudhar ja bohat maar paregi agar kisi din us larki k haath lag gya ...
r : arey kese pta chalega ... its just a blank call ...ok now bohat ho gya gud night ...

next day engagement day ...
singhanias arrive ...
k : ready sis wo log a gya hey ...
sh : ha but thori ...
k : come on sis ... tensioon ki kya baat hey ...
sh : i think u r right . or tu mere saath hi rehna ha ...
k : ha ha pakka chalo abhi ...
k'm : kriya ...
k : yes mom ...
k'm : beta neeche wo food check kar lena ... ok ..
k : ha mom going ...ok sis chalo neeche sab wait kar rhe hey ...

other hand rey roming in house ...
r : kya arrengment's hey i like it ...
sw : honge hi after all meri sali sehba ne jo kiye hey ...
r : really or wo milegi kab ...
sw : bas abhi ati hi hogi ...
nd sharon enter ...
sw : a gyi .
r ; ha but ao kha hey ...
sw : u mean sharon ki sis ...
r : ha whi ...
sw : ati hogi ...

kriya checking food arrengement ... while rey bore ho rha hey so rey again dail a no ... whi raat wala ...
sw : are rey aaj to band kar j sab ...
r ; bhai time pass kar rha hoo . abhi a jata hoo ...
rey go out side of house jha food arrenge kiya hey ...
kriya's phone bell ring ..
r : hello ...g tusi v kuj kehlo j ...
k : u idiot tumne phir call kiya ...
r ; wo kya hey na ... app se baat karni thi aap aaj b nahi ayi ...
k : tum ...(wait kriya saw rey ... because kriya rey k thik pishe thi ...)...u
r : u talking to me ...
k : ha tum phone rakh sakte ho ...
r : kyu main baat kar rha hoo ...
k : lekin tum jis se baat kar rhe hoo wo main hi hoo ...
r : rey almost got a mini heart attack ... m...mmm...mmm...main .
k : main . main kya ha . m gonna kill u ... muje preshaan kar k rkha hey kal se ..
r ; main to bas ...
k : kya ha ... samjte kya ho apne app ko ... ashi trha se janti hoo tum jese larko ko ...
r : what mane kya kiya main to bas .
k : kya kab se bas bas kar rhe ho ha ...
nd here fight start again ...
k : #
r ; %
k : @
r :#
inside housw everyone hear this voice so they all run outside ...
swaym try to stop rey nd sharon try to kriya but its to late ...
rey pulling kriya's hair nd kriya pulling rey's haie ... they fighting like childs ...nd every one present there just fed up .
swaron : stopid ... ( nd it is to loud for everone ...)
sw : rey j kya ho rha hey ...
sh : kriya what going on ha ...
sw : main tumse baat kar rha hoo ...
sh : main tumse baat kar rhi hoo kriya ...
k : sis meri koi galti nahi hey j idiot whi hey jisne kal rat ko call kiya tha ...
sw : what vo tum thi ...
sh : tum thi matlab ...
k : what jijzs or j kon hey ha ...
r ; j kon hey bhai ...
sw ; mera bahi ...nd rey j meri sali
k /r : what ...
sh : wait swaym tumn thi se matlaB KYA HEY TUMHARA ..
SW : MANE KUj NAHI KIYA SHARON WO TO J REY HI ...
SH : MEANS TUM MERE PISHE J SAB KARTE HO HA GIRLS KO PHONE .
SW : LIKE A BABY ...nahi mane kabhi nahi kiya ...
r : in ear bhai app bhabi sey darte ho ...
sw ; nahi to .
sh : mujse baat kro um ...
sw ; ha karta hoo .( j to gya kaam sey .)...
sh " what how dare u .
now swaron start fighting ...
kriyaansh un ko rokne ki bijaye khud againn ...
rey : miss con. kre whi sey ab koi nahi hey hame rokne wala ...
nd they start again ...
nd now u can imagin jin ki engagement hey wo b fighting ...four r fighting ...
swayam nd kriya ek taraf . or sharon nd rey ek taraf ...

precap : ab kya hoga agye kya hogi swaron ki engagement ... j phir or kya kriyaansh ki love story start hogi ... so wait for it nd keep thinking ...

swayam ki dress

rey

kriya

sharon

ok ok guys abhi thak gyi likhte likhte so now ur turn chalo bacha log do like nd comment we two r waiting ... love u all


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Awsm pics aro!

pms on d way!
Edited by abhiyakreya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
yayiee first one to comment
bt srsly last one 😆
bt phir bhi 😛
Awesum updte guyz
luvd it
krisha nd reyam in same shopping mall bt did nt see each other nt fair
bechara shopkeeper sharon ne uska dimaag hi kharaab kardiya 😆
kriyansh takraying 😆 bt o LLHH unwaah😭 nt possible har first meet mein inka LLHH hota hi hai 😒
lyking kriyam ka relation 😃
kriya helping swayum in finding sharon's ring
gosh kitna tym liya bt the best ring choose ki
the ring was awesumm guyz luvd it ❤️
rey played scha stupid prankk with kriya bt was funn u noe
evn i lyk to do that 😆
kriya ne rey ko dhund liya 😆
rey ki band bajing now 😆
kriyansh fighting nd pulling each other's hair 🤣 🤣
swayum nd sharon ki bhi fight shuru
swayum sharon se darta hai 😆
yeh dono bhi phirse strt huh
ladai rokne gaye the yaa khud ladne haa🤣 🤣
kriyansh ko bhi bahana mil gaya continue karne kaa 🤣 🤣
all in all hilarious updte yaar
luvd it
updte soon
luv yaa

Edited by cookie_arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome part 😃...
Kriyansh's phone convo was funny 🤣...
Swaron Kriyansh ki fight rok rahe the aur khud shuru ho gaye 😆...
Dress selection was Amazing 😊...
Continue soon...
N thanks for the pm 😊.
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haww..rey is such a prankster !!!
and luved d relation between...kriyam
and bechare swaron...engagement ke pehle hi ladayi ho gyi..wo bhi bina baat ke😆
waitng fr d next update..update asap !
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Awesome update
Kriyansh phone convo was hilarious
Kriyam vs sharey lol
Waiting for next part

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