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niania13

@niania13

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#191

Amar and Anjali are such a cute couple! I really hope they'll confess to each other soon.
Khushi is feeling guilty for what happened to Arnav, but he mustn't let her take her distance from him and get overwhelmed by her guilt.

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momai14

@momai14

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#192

read it in one go...loved it...do continue...

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Coffee

@coffee_beans

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#193

Just read the story in one go.. .loved it !
Brilliant work :) Update soon and PM me too 😳

xoxo

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Ann

@ipkkndank

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#194

Awww i'm second or third =)

** Edited**

OH NOOO i'm first to comment 😳 yipeee😃 well this os a very very rare situation i think 😃 well yeah to me this is really very Rare 😊

Aheeemmm , Back to ur update sweety 😊 well love it .

Love the way you have written first two para from shayam's point of view, coz it portraied how much he's attracted to kushi n he felt guilty for Anjali OHHH poor thing 😆 finally there's something in his brain is doing normal (but that's tooo temporary 😆) So he's da devil here and no change in that =)

And after reading the last line of yours i wanted to read the next part that second. But i guess have to wait for another couple of days to fulfill my dream right 😆

Awesome update as always 👏

And continue soonnn

Edited by ipkkndank - 13 years ago

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asrcraze

@asrcraze

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: ipkkndank
Awww i'm second or third =)

You're first !! :)

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Ann

@ipkkndank

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#196

Originally posted by: asrcraze

You're first !! :)

oh yeah well looks like my guessing went wrong this time 😆 No prob at last i'm first to comment😉 after comenting only i knew that i'm first 😃 😃 and i edited my post 😃 don't worry it contains more than two lines 😉

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aafan

@aafan

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#197

so cute. next will be a romantic scene.

Shyam days will be over soon.

nice update!

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asrcraze

@asrcraze

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#198

Originally posted by: ipkkndank
Awww i'm second or third =)
** Edited**

OH NOOO i'm first to comment 😳 yipeee😃 well this os a very very rare situation i think 😃 well yeah to me this is really very Rare 😊

Aheeemmm , Back to ur update sweety 😊 well love it .

Love the way you have written first two para from shayam's point of view, coz it portraied how much he's attracted to kushi n he felt guilty for Anjali OHHH poor thing 😆 finally there's something in his brain is doing normal (but that's tooo temporary 😆) So he's da devil here and no change in that =)

And after reading the last line of yours i wanted to read the next part that second. But i guess have to wait for another couple of days to fulfill my dream right 😆

Awesome update as always 👏

And continue soonnn