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Posted: 13 years ago
Wowww Zara sucha beautiful ending indeed ... khushi gave birth to a baby girl and cassanova was the mid-wife lol.. I love this FF from the starting and can't wait to read the next new FF cause i know its gonna be Awesome ... My Favourite moments in this FF is the part(s) 1. where he rescue her from being sold, thats what caught my attention from the beginning ... 2. There travelling to different counties and Arnav falling for her ... 3. The angry ASR was a blast for me non-stop laughs, the angry bird play its part in the story very well ... 4. There Wedding and off course all there suhag-ratt's non-stop ... was fun to read ... so that was it for me and will share my views on the next FF ... Thx for all the PMs ... and Good Luck on the new FF ...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ipkkndank

Well i'm commenting on this after ages๐Ÿ˜ƒ i think after second or third thread ๐Ÿ˜ƒ =) it has been a long time...

K back to ur story ๐Ÿ˜Š Awesome ending zeee (i love that name n u were one f buddy ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ) really love the epilogue and arshiya singh raizada is perfect ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ cheers.
Since i was at the begining with this journey around the world with Arhi even though i wasn't at the mid way ๐Ÿ˜Š i wanted to comment on the ending ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
I really liked the way you have portraied all da characters in here specially cassanova's character ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜‰ I loved angry bird scenes and arnav briging one to himself is just cute ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜ƒ i love its big yellow bow ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜† thank you...
And arnav scaring Kushi in the egypt i guess n after there love making night knowing actually that sort of thing has happened there =) =) also add some kind of scary situation to the story at that time =) =) not only that khushi gone missing in the water with her lil dolphin friend is also a cute part =) aww thanks for liking . and appreciating.
Well for their love making scenes i think each n every scenes were really adorable , lovable n beautiful =) =) i do remember the wild one arnav had one of the store room ( i think its full of piles of clothes). And saying all the sexy nick names to Khushi =) =) Just mind blowing zara ๐Ÿ˜‰
hmmm what else ah yeah i love how you make cassanova to call khushi as " Cherry Blossom" its really sweet =) Thank you. I'm really glad everyone loved casanova so.
And yeah i love all those little kids too ๐Ÿ˜Š they were so protective towards their didi ๐Ÿ˜Š remember the scene where they were to attack arnav n questioning him it's also awesome๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ LOL and the garic and crosses made of sticks for vampire arnav. ๐Ÿ˜†
Well if i continue to comment i'll go on n i might be ended with your whole 60 chaps ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜† so i'm going to stop from here zeee ๐Ÿ˜Š and i hope u won't mind it ๐Ÿ˜†
forget to tell you that i also liked that fire scenario in japan ๐Ÿ˜ƒ after reading that i thought u r going to kill khushi ๐Ÿ˜ญ (but i knew u r not going to do that sort of thing)
k got carried away little bit ๐Ÿ˜† Muah
Overall love the story great work zara ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ hats off to you ๐Ÿ‘ mainly coz of the wonderful story u have given for us n taking us around the world ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Your very welcome.
OH forget to tell abt SJ oh i love him tooo ๐Ÿ˜† Awesome story Superbbb


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetvanie

Wowww Zara sucha beautiful ending indeed ... khushi gave birth to a baby girl and cassanova was the mid-wife lol.. I love this FF from the starting and can't wait to read the next new FF cause i know its gonna be Awesome ... thank you :') My Favourite moments in this FF is the part(s) 1. where he rescue her from being sold, thats what caught my attention from the beginning ... 2. There travelling to different counties and Arnav falling for her ... 3. The angry ASR was a blast for me non-stop laughs, the angry bird play its part in the story very well ... 4. There Wedding and off course all there suhag-ratt's non-stop ... was fun to read ... thank you all so much!!๐Ÿ˜† so that was it for me and will share my views on the next FF ... thank youuu๐Ÿ˜ƒ Thx for all the PMs ... welcome and Good Luck on the new FF ...


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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
the way she shouted at casanova and arni just loved it
the name arshiya was so cute
and nk's reaction๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ
perfect ending will miss this ff
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aww tht was shweet
Plz PM me for next FF
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Posted: 13 years ago
EDITED MY COMMENT ON PAGE 15 !! ... xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Fatz77

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Hey Zara !!
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG !!!
Owkie before i start writing my comment lemme go get a full tissue box first so when the tears come out i have loadz of tissues 2 blow my nose and stuff *Runs 2 get the tissue Box* ... LOL๐Ÿ˜†
Zaraa , u don't know how emotional i'm getting right now !! ... 1 of my fave FF's has finally ended , seriously when u wrote END at the end i got baree emotional !! ... Awwwn. Hugs sis!
obviously a FF has 2 end but i just didn't want POF 2 end ... Gosh this FF is like a drug Loool , it's all your fault Zara why do u have 2 have soo many goood ideas and why do u have 2 write soo good Loool only joking !! ... MashAllah it's a very good talent u have of writing , No wonder u have lots of readers who like 2 read your Fabulous stories !! ... Thank you, but you are really over exaggerating, lol. I's still ameture lololol๐Ÿ˜ณ
Urghhh !! ... i'm not first , My reputation is at stake Loool !! ... lol๐Ÿ˜† don't worry your rep is still high on my list.๐Ÿ˜‰
Ok then lets move on 2 the WONDERFUL update !! ...
Awww !! ... Zara the update was Amazing , i was literally smiling and laughing the whole way !! ... Really super duper glad!!
Loool , Arnav went office the day Khushi was in Labour Hehe , and Khushi was proper Angry ... Who wouldn't be ??? ... in her position, lol, defiantly!!๐Ÿ˜†
Casanovas Khushi's midwife , i new it 100% ... it's nice Khushi's midwife is Casanova !! ... xx
LMAO , when Arnav said Khushi drives him up the wall made me crack up and burst in 2 laughters soo much ... Casanova is a naughty boy thinking like that ;) .. Yep Arnav and his silly frustrations, lolol.
ROFL , it was funny while Khushi was in hell alot of pain Arnav and Casanova were fighting !! ... Gees them 2 would never stop arguing but it's funny and i kinda find it cutee :) lol thank you. their bromance is special like that, lololol
Awww , Poor Khushi ... i felt sooo sorry 4 her ... She had 2 endure alot of pain !! ...
My heart was aching when she said that she couldn't push any more and that she was really tired !! ... But luckily Arnav the Hottie came and got Khushi 2 be active again and seriously when Khushi started pushing again i proper got in the mood of this FF and screemed Come On Khushi , You can do it Loool ... This is what your FF's do 2 me !! ... xxx Very emotional stage for the both. tought times but they made it. glad you felt apart of it.๐Ÿ˜Š
Yipeee ... we got a new Raizada member .. it's party time *Does a big happy dane* ... Finally Arnav and Khushi are parents !! ... and Awww a baby Girl :D ... Woopwoop!
Casanova sure got the baby out !! ...
and Awww ... i Lurveed it when Arnav proudly said her name !! ... i was proper smiling ... Arshiya Singh Raizada , Thats a really beautiful name .. i Lurveee it and Loved how the family loved it 2 and how Khushi smiled in her sleep ... Yay! thank you sis.
Ok now theres nothing left 4 me 2 write about the update *Crys like a big baby and gets tissues* ... :') I feel teary tooo! *takes one tissue from you*
But Zara can i say my journey with this FF has been amazing ... i remember all the threads and how we use 2 teleport *Gets another tissue* Yep i remember my craziness *sniff*
and I can't pick a fave thing from this FF cause i loved everything ... But somethings i extremely loved like ASR vs Arnav ... That was sooo effin hilarious !! ... Aww thank you!! love my ASR, hehehe
and i Loved the Wedding of ArHi and there countless HOT suhaagraats ;) ... hehehehe
Oh and i also loved there first meeting !! ... Obviously cause that's were there Lovely journey started !! ... Like it started with a disgusting thing like a brothel and it ended with a beautiful baby ... see look how nice that is !! ... long journey to a beautiful future.
Another thing i adored is all the relationships in this FF 4 example Arnav and Khushi , Khushi and Casanova , Anjali and Aditya , Fernando and Minnie , Arnav and SJ , Khushi and Aman and e.t.c Aww thanks for picking up on that. the charatcer scenes have been an interesting write. glad everyone enjoyed them
Lastly i want 2 say That reading this FF has been AMAZING and 2 have someone like u writing and sending me pm's has been superb and i'm very very very very greatful !! ... I'm very grateful to have a reader and friend like you. thanks.
Thnxx 4 everything :D ... Muah!!
Loved POF SOOO much <333 .

p.s: Eeep ... Can't wait 4 vines with thorns and guess whose the first person 2 comment on that FF *Points at herself* ... It's meee ... well i'll explain my Khushi in my comment on that FF :D .. xx see you there!๐Ÿ˜‰

pps: My last comment on this FF has officially been the longest comment i've posted on POF and all of IF :D .. xxx OMG!! I KNOW RIGHT! I was totally wowed!!! *Super mario hug!!*


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Posted: 13 years ago
right now am just speechless
but still...
thanx for the pm.
the epilogue was marvellous awesum actually u left no words to descreibe how much fantastic it was .
Starting from khushi's gud news 2 Arnav's insecurity everything was just hmm no words -----------
just outstanding.
the morocco scene, all the beautiful places n finally the name ..ARSHIYA all was just fabulous beyond my imagination.
this is the best epilogue I've read ever amongst the all the fanfics which I've read
u r tooo good .
excellent creativity
I don know wat else to say just a warm embrace from my side for ur special story-
PRICE OF FREEDOMโค๏ธ- a complete luv story which showed the strength and beauty of true luv where ARNAV & KHUSHI being the luving soulmates remained wid each other in all the ups n downs of life along wid their symbol of luv their child ARSHIYA n ultimately the whole family finally along wid the new borns lived happily everafter.the whole family seems to b the happiest in the whole world now.
claps n cheers for u ZARA๐Ÿ‘
luv u luv ur brain n ur heart for making u frame such a heartthrobbing masterpiece.
but I'm sad as this ff is ending I wished u wud have contd it more.I'm in luv wid ur ff i've told u very often.
anyways every end has a new beginning wil catch ur new ff very soon
once again thanx for writing such a gr8 story for al of us.


โค๏ธ ๐Ÿ‘ โค๏ธ It's really a pleasure to read ur ff...โค๏ธ so ... see u at the VINES WITH THORNS...โค๏ธ
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey zara!!!
so our favourite ff has come to an end!!! with a lot of love n loud cries in the end!! ha ha !!! but just loved it!! cant tell how much i loved ur ff!!
and ya u writing it!!!
cming to my favourite part was there honeymoon in morroco., the fight b/w ASR n arnav!!! oh i so loved it so much!! n ya the talk b/w khushi n casanova so much in the last part.!!!!! there are many more fav parts but these are the main ones!!! u know actually the whole ff is my favourite!!!
oh i'm so going to miss all these characters !!! but ur back with the new ff for which i'm waiting eagerly!!
so love this ff!!! nthing much to say !!! i just loved ur replies to my comments n especially the gifts!!! zara love you!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome epilogue... arshiya singh riazada ... what a beautiful name.. arnav's princess came into this world... casanova did khushi's labour great... im so proud of him... great FF dear

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