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Posted: 13 years ago
#91
Awww arshiya Singh raizada...they combined their names
I am going to kiss this story
I loved the epilouge
And I cannot wait til your next FF
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Posted: 13 years ago
#92
awesome ff from the moment they meet and he bought her to her changing in to his clothes and dancing on the bed to him saving her from that snake to them falling in love but was not sure to her feeling scared and lonely to coming back to india and asr the bird and meeting the family on both side to marriage proposal and the secret marriage to the to meeting a wonderful family of character to the baby every chapter had wanting more loved the ff awesome will miss this ff thanks for the pm
Edited by dumas - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#93
awww its finished! i enjoyed reading this alot :)
fave scene has to be when arnav got his own angry bird and got posessive over it LOL
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Posted: 13 years ago
#94
AWWW... IT ENDED. SNIFF SNIFF... IT WAS SOOO GORGG ZAARAAA... WILL ALWAYS MISS IT.. BUT IM ALSO ELATED THT A NEW ONE WILL START... ALL DA BEST... :-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#95
awww i loved it
but im gonna miss it alot 😭
loved the FF alot
xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
#96
The epilogue was very sweet. Casanova really did midwife for Khushi 😆 . Sorry I really am unable to pick a favorite moment. Your FF had so many that I honestly can not pick one. A little sad to see it end, however you choose a good place to say goodbye. Happy to read that you are starting a new FF. Thank you for sharing this one. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#97
RESSS
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Hey Zara !!
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG !!!
Owkie before i start writing my comment lemme go get a full tissue box first so when the tears come out i have loadz of tissues 2 blow my nose and stuff *Runs 2 get the tissue Box* ...
Zaraa , u don't know how emotional i'm getting right now !! ... 1 of my fave FF's has finally ended , seriously when u wrote END at the end i got baree emotional !! ... obviously a FF has 2 end but i just didn't want POF 2 end ... Gosh this FF is like a drug Loool , it's all your fault Zara why do u have 2 have soo many goood ideas and why do u have 2 write soo good Loool only joking !! ... MashAllah it's a very good talent u have of writing , No wonder u have lots of readers who like 2 read your Fabulous stories !! ...
Urghhh !! ... i'm not first , My reputation is at stake Loool !! ...
Ok then lets move on 2 the WONDERFUL update !! ...
Awww !! ... Zara the update was Amazing , i was literally smiling and laughing the whole way !! ...
Loool , Arnav went office the day Khushi was in Labour Hehe , and Khushi was proper Angry ... Who wouldn't be ??? ...
Casanovas Khushi's midwife , i new it 100% ... it's nice Khushi's midwife is Casanova !! ... xx
LMAO , when Arnav said Khushi drives him up the wall made me crack up and burst in 2 laughters soo much ... Casanova is a naughty boy thinking like that ;) ..
ROFL , it was funny while Khushi was in hell alot of pain Arnav and Casanova were fighting !! ... Gees them 2 would never stop arguing but it's funny and i kinda find it cutee :)
Awww , Poor Khushi ... i felt sooo sorry 4 her ... She had 2 endure alot of pain !! ...
My heart was aching when she said that she couldn't push any more and that she was really tired !! ... But luckily Arnav the Hottie came and got Khushi 2 be active again and seriously when Khushi started pushing again i proper got in the mood of this FF and screemed Come On Khushi , You can do it Loool ... This is what your FF's do 2 me !! ... xxx
Yipeee ... we got a new Raizada member .. it's party time *Does a big happy dane* ... Finally Arnav and Khushi are parents !! ... and Awww a baby Girl :D ...
Casanova sure got the baby out !! ...
and Awww ... i Lurveed it when Arnav proudly said her name !! ... i was proper smiling ... Arshiya Singh Raizada , Thats a really beautiful name .. i Lurveee it and Loved how the family loved it 2 and how Khushi smiled in her sleep ...
Ok now theres nothing left 4 me 2 write about the update *Crys like a big baby and gets tissues* ...
But Zara can i say my journey with this FF has been amazing ... i remember all the threads and how we use 2 teleport *Gets another tissue*
and I can't pick a fave thing from this FF cause i loved everything ... But somethings i extremely loved like ASR vs Arnav ... That was sooo effin hilarious !! ...
and i Loved the Wedding of ArHi and there countless HOT suhaagraats ;) ...
Oh and i also loved there first meeting !! ... Obviously cause that's were there Lovely journey started !! ... Like it started with a disgusting thing like a brothel and it ended with a beautiful baby ... see look how nice that is !! ...
Another thing i adored is all the relationships in this FF 4 example Arnav and Khushi , Khushi and Casanova , Anjali and Aditya , Fernando and Minnie , Arnav and SJ , Khushi and Aman and e.t.c
Lastly i want 2 say That reading this FF has been AMAZING and 2 have someone like u writing and sending me pm's has been superb and i'm very very very very greatful !! ...
Thnxx 4 everything :D ...
Loved POF SOOO much <333 .

p.s: Eeep ... Can't wait 4 vines with thorns and guess whose the first person 2 comment on that FF *Points at herself* ... It's meee ... well i'll explain my Khushi in my comment on that FF :D .. xx

pps: My last comment on this FF has officially been the longest comment i've posted on POF and all of IF :D .. xxx

Edited by Fatz77 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98
so thtz all u wont write anymore on this FF
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Posted: 13 years ago
#99

wow soo sad to see it actually ending but loved it very much dear...awsuuum n i cant pick out a fav scene because i loved the whole of it but it has to be the time when arnav said he loves her...thnx 4da pm dear...

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Posted: 13 years ago

AWESOME AMAZING BRILLIANT SUPERB SO SAD THAT IT ENDED CANT BELIEVE IT

THE EPILOGUE WAS AWESOME I KNEW CASANOVA WAS GOING TO BE HER MIDWIFE SINCE U MENTION IT IN THE LAST UPDATE N ARNAV ACTUALLY AGREE TO WELL AFTER KHUSHI DRIVE HIM UP THE WALL OMG HOW U MANAGE TO MAKE ME LAUGH DURING A LABOR SCENE IT POOR NK EARS FIRST IT WAS ANJALI NOW KHUSHI N ARNAV THE DAY HIS WIFE GOES IN LABOR HE AT WORK N LOVED KHUSHI YELLING FOR HER HUSBAND N CASANOVA N ARNAV LITTLE CUTE FLIGHT BEAUTIFUL ENDING I DONT HAVE A FAV MOMENT OR PART I LOVED THEM ALL BUT I ENJOY READING ABOUT BRAZIL WITH DEEN VENICE WITH CASANOVA,ANGRY BIRDS,SHYAM TAKE DOWN, MOROCCO HONEYMOON, SCERET MARRIAGE SEE I DONT HAVE ONE I LOVED THEM ALL GONNA MISS THIS FF BUT CANT WAIT FOR THE NEW ONE THIS FF IS UNQUIE TO ME LOVED ALL THE CHARACTERS N LOVED THE CHARACTERIZATION N LOVED HOW U GAVE EACH CHARACTER TIME N SPACE N ALWAYS MENTION THEM N I ALWAYS LOOK FORWARD TO READ ABOUT THE OTHER CHARACTERS BECAUSE U MADE IT SO INTERSTING N AMAN N CASANOVA WAS A TREAT TO READ ABOUT THANKS FOR THE PM

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