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N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#521

awesome update.. a sneak peak in aman past was wonderful.. that shows how he evolved and became what is he is now.. what is arnav for him but still family comes first over friendship.. now that makes me think what would have arnav done if he had to choose between aman and khushi.. if their lives were at stake..

the last phone convo.. or phone silence was remarkable.. i felt like crying over the loss they felt..

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coronapsyche

@coronapsyche

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#522

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OMG! Thats another blockbuster update of urs!!👏
Now I dnt know how am I gnna put this up ; but U buddy are an expert in making me emotional!!😭
Poor Aman! He is caught in the middle between familly & Arnav!!😭
He respects him too much to cause him any pain & again his love for his sister stood in front of him- nobody wants to b in this situation!!
& the Arshi scene! The way he said made my tears roll down!😔

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Jenni

@prettyasjen

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#523

This update made me cry. Update soon

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mysterious_maze

@mysterious_maze

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#524

wow... just came back home from a long tiring working day and eyes are aching but still i managed to read the update...

so Aman is always a sacrifising soul and Arnav is the one who helped him when he came to delhi... his story brought tears in my eyes... beautifully written emotions...

so its shyam... i always knew dat... am glad that atleast something came as i guessed... the last part what can i say about that... you are always superb with writing emotions... he is asking for her forgivenes and she is realizing that her heart still beats for her... just superbly executed scene...

and plz dont give us Akash's story in the next part... i mean am dying to read about Arnav and Khushi and you are not only making us wait too long but also giving us supporting charaecter's stories now... plz have some pity on us...

and you are so sweet telling about the date of your next update... it will surely save my time... as i am already back to work and can't stalk this ff frequently 😔

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norolim

@norolim

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#525

You bring out their plight beautifully. Once again, wonderful writing and a heart wrenching scene. :) Thank you for the update. :)

Continue soon.

Cheers, Avi.

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Mahnoor

@AngelMcQueen

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#526

aww poor arnav and khushi u made tme cry too

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Gals

@Cute_Gal

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#527

dat was an awesome update..
d end part was beautiful.. abit emotional..
continue soon..😊

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thebubblespop12

@thebubblespop12

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#528

God I feel so bad for Aman!! And Shyam didn't he work with Arnav before??
And the Arnav and Khushi call scene. Broke my heart!! And yes that banner is perfect!

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prachi

@Prachi..

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#529

awesome update girl...

loved it...

i was wondering about aman's past...

thats true we sometimes end up choosing the blood relations over some of our most important relations

love the way you describe emotions...

while reading your ff i always end up saying "aisa hi hota hai"... one of the honest ff's i have ever read...

i seriously loved the arnav khushi part

silence conveys much more than words could do...

thanks for the wonderful ff,

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mayabegum

@mayabegum

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#530

Awesome awesome awesome!

i loved how Aman met Arnav now i realize why their bond is soo strong, it was very sweet of Arnav to take him in and help him out.. But now obviously things have turned upside down, i just hope Aman doesn't betray Arnav.. That would be awful but that's what im expecting anyway..

i loved it more towards the end when Arnav and Khushi both silently spoke over the phone. that was a beautiful part and you had written it so very well!😛

Will wait for wednesday night for the next update😉