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meghnas

@meghnas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#251

oooh this keeps getting better n better :D

Khushi now knows Arnav is Rishab...n Arnav has his last mission before he thinks he can be free!! excited to read the next update 😊

n finally, Abbas - you shd rot in hell!!

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arushi05

@arushi05

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#252

O MY GOD! i am totally blowed over by this ff. I am at a loss of words toexactly pinpoint my feelings after reading the ff. I read this ff at one go and i have only one word to describe it EXCELLENT. All the feelings all the situations all the characters the you have brought out in this ff are so realistic. I should advice you to write books and publish them and also to write stories for films. If this story would have been made in a film then it would be a blockbuster.
I have just three request keep writing the ff for i don't want it to end ever, second please don't make anything happen to either khushi or arnav for if something happens to any of them i won't be able to take it, thirdly i am sending you buddy request please accept it please. And o update soon.

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Gals

@Cute_Gal

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#253

Gr8 update..
wats gonna happen now..??
lavanya confronted khushi.. n khushi knows abt d whole rishabh thing.. now wats gonna happen..
eagerly waiting for d next part..
continue soon..

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Yellow.

@Yellow.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#254

awesome update.. its so sad to read confrontation of the two best friends... finally khushi knows the truth.. she is so heart broken... hope arnav says her each and everything now with out hiding anything from her... then she can heal faster.. 😔

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arushi05

@arushi05

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Posted: 13 years ago

#255

This ff is killing me. After reading it and after the last chapter i just can't concentrate on anything and is continuously thinking what will happen next. I just want to ask you something is khalid bhai arnav's father?

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nina

@DeePiku

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Posted: 13 years ago

#256

Oh god...Arnav is going to be in such big trouble!!!!!!!!! The storm has JUST started...hope Arshi make it through!

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umama shahid

@umamashahid

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#257

wow...so finally we got the update...loved lavanya's confrontation but expected her to be somewhat mature...awww khushi is heartbroken and shattered...hope she believes arnav now and hope she remembers all her past commitments...update soon

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Nehasupnfan

@Nehasupnfan

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#258

DAFAQ??????? Yes that is exactly what I thought when I read this chapter! I knew there were some BIG DHAMAKAS waiting to happen and you delivered beautifully hon!!! I'm just too shocked to give a coherent feedback on this! All I can say is that I hate the hand that was dealt to Arnav in this story! *sniff* Can't wait to read more!

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scorpio_8876

@scorpio_8876

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#259

thrilling update:)

it is very sad to see him fighting helplessly n desperately to get his freedom back..

he thinks just the 3 men n 3 bullets will set him free from this cruel world..but he is unaware that by doing this he will be getting further dragged in this cyclone .. i really hope he doesnt commit this mistake 😔

i just love your writing..so easy n effortless yet to the point 👏

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Gayathri

@GayuArnav

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#260

NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I know this was coming but i couldn't digest at all! 😭

OMG! Khushi has come to know the truth! Im definitely gonna cry in the next update! Arnav's life will be totally shattered!

I know that you are gonna make the next update or the other upcoming updates more heart wrenching. So im gonna be ready with tissues so that it will be useful!

You wont believe me but i feel like crying now!! Oh wait im actually crying now! Im never that sensitive or emotionally attached but anything to do with arnav is like my weakness! 😔 Please dont be so hard on Arnav!

Amazing update! :) Just loved it! I was biting my nails during La-Khushi convo!

Awesome one! :)

Edited by GayuArnav - 13 years ago