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zonera1

@zonera1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#121

Gud One!Waiting for the big revelation.I wud love to have the truth out by Lavanya.

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-Raichu-

@-Raichu-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#122

when will you update ???

can't wait for the next update !!

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794754

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Posted: 13 years ago

#123

That was hot. And congrats on new thread! 😎

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794754

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Posted: 13 years ago

#124

Btw, please update soon. 😃

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achu_arshi

@achu_arshi

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#125

What's up dear?
No updates since 11th
When will you update? Pls let me know
I'm stalking

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molten_lava

@molten_lava

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Posted: 13 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: achu_arshi
What's up dear?
No updates since 11th
When will you update? Pls let me know
I'm stalking

Maybe tomorrow. My mind went on a long vacation to the Bahamas and is chilling out there!😎

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@flowers4u

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#127

great update ...i know kushis gona be completely shattered , but i hope she can rise above it all...continue soon

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kiddy-kavya

@kiddy-kavya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#128

Hey, you are one marvelous writer, u knw dat?😊
God, i just LOVE ur style...its really surprising how u express each and every character in its right sense...u seem 2 hav too much knowledge about everything, i mean, the mafia thing, ok.
I just love this FF...hav u published any of ur works? Well if u havn't den u better, cuz u r damn good...i dn't knw wat else to say...dis story seems so real dat i sometymes doubt whether its actually true...and dn't take me wrong, but it somehow felt like an experiensed writing, as if its something dat u already personally know about...well i definitly can't write dis passionatly or justified...huh, i am jealous🤔😆
And, i knw everytym der won't be any perfect ending and der doesn't seem to be any possibility of Arnav-Khushi happily ever after under all this mess,...so for the first tym ever i wouldn't care the least if dis story ends disastrously...usually i dn't lyk sad endings, but if u plan 2 end dis emotionally, i wouldn't mind cuz its all the well appealing to me😉
I don't knw wen i'll be able 2 comment next, maybe wen u finally conclude this😳 ...but i guess dis would do for now...i'll try to give u a comment anytym soon and dis one was for all dose updates on which i couldn't comment on😊

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Nehasupnfan

@Nehasupnfan

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#129

Yeah ok...I'm crying now..Thanks for that! 🤔 Arnav's childhood made me cry...and it made me realize how much Khushi and Arnav are meant to be together! They need each other and I wanna cry at the hand that God has dealt Arnav! (Or in this case, you! LOL!)

Honestly, I would love it if Arnav was the one who revealed it all to Khushi but since you want a shattered Khushi I'm guessing Arnav will not be the one..??

Great update! :)

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bushrayou

@bushrayou

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#130

SO firstly, i am sorry for not commenting earlier!! and now that I read both chapters DAMN!!

Chapter 38- amazingly written! every emotion, every move, every touch, every bit of love that passed between the two was illustrated to perfection! His confession was perfectly timed and that much stronger!

Really liked that chapter!!

Chapter 39-GODDD he was sooo close to telling her! I wish he just let it go and maybe she would have understood at that moment. But you want a shattered Khushi and Reader!!! I just think he needs her to survive and I have a very strong hope that she will stand by him no matter what she finds out.*fingers crossed*

Aman just makes me nervous...

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