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REDWINE

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Posted: 13 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: lovely7010
Awesome update!!!

Originally posted by: Nirju99
awesm update dear

Originally posted by: cool_star14
amazing update !!!!
luved it...

Originally posted by: prrk86
wow so interesting excellent

Originally posted by: rock_ruvi
awesome update...
thanx for pm

Originally posted by: pratik54000
its really nice...i liked the beginning...

thanks guyz...😃

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REDWINE

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Posted: 13 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: ..Surbhi..
OMG. THAT IS JUST SOOO SAD..
she died? but wait..
someone said rey.. its kria..
she's alive right. PLZ TELL ME..
update soon and pm me

ya its kriya

now happy

will update tomorrow

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REDWINE

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Posted: 13 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: arul01
i actually thought kriya was dead but then what would the story be if there is no kriya and thank god, kriya was in hospital and she reacted after the six months! cool! now starts the actual story... i really wonder what is going to happen! please update soon!

there's is no kriyansh without kriya...

will update soon

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Puja

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Posted: 13 years ago

#144

amazing first chappy...

an emotional one...

rey..wo to poora tut gya hoga...hope kria jldi wapis aa jae..

waiting for next part...

update soon...

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REDWINE

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Posted: 13 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: puja_arsha
amazing first chappy...
an emotional one...
rey..wo to poora tut gya hoga...hope kria jldi wapis aa jae..
waiting for next part...
update soon...

thanks

will update soon

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rithi.A

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Posted: 13 years ago

#146

nice update

d girl s kria, hope so swayam n rey get 2 knw abt kria in hospital n she s nt dead.

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Eyesfriendly

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Posted: 13 years ago

#147

just read ur ss..

and loved it alot...

update soon..

and plz. do pm me..😊

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REDWINE

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Posted: 13 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: rithi.A
nice update
d girl s kria, hope so swayam n rey get 2 knw abt kria in hospital n she s nt dead.

thanks

they'll know soon

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REDWINE

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Posted: 13 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: Eyesfriendly
just read ur ss..
and loved it alot...
update soon..
and plz. do pm me..😊

thanks dear

glad u like it

will update 2day

and pm u too

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REDWINE

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Posted: 13 years ago

#150

hey guyz

I'm back with an update

First of all Thanks for all like and comments...

Note :If u want Pms of this ss...ao plz add kritzd3pm in ur buddy list...

ok now here's the update...

Chapter 2

In Max Hospital

A girl lying on the hospital bed...reacts after 6 month...and utter a single word...in whisper "rey"...

Nurse is totally shocked after seeing reaction in the body...and then she calls doctor...

Doctor come and check her pulses and all...(sorry mujhe hospitals k baare main jyada kuch nhi pata)...

Doc :wao its a miracle...patient ne 6 mahine main pehli baar humari treatment pe react kiya..aur ab coma se bhi bahar aa gyi hai..ita really a good news...

(and when doctor is busy doing more checkups...kriya slowly slowly try to open her eyes but cant due to the light...and she's continuously whispering rey)

Doc :sisters ward ki lights dim kardo patient aankhein kholne ki koshish kar rhi hai...

(after lights got dim she open her eyes...and adjust herself in light...and she look at her surrounding...he saw one man in lab coat...and lady dress like a murse)

Gir :(in weak voice)doc main yahan kaise...

Doc :aapka 6 mahine pehle ek accident hua tha...aur uske baad aap coma main chali gyi...

Gir :kya..main yahan 6 mahine se hoon...(doctor nodded)

Doc :aapka naam kya hai...

Gir :kriya...kriya ghai...(then she remind some thing)...

Kr :(panicly)doc meri maa bhi meri saath thi wo wo kahan hai...

(doc saw towards the groung then towards her)

Doc :sorry miss ghai...she is no more..

Kr :kya...(tears started flowing from her eyes...and next moment she's cring bitterly)

Kr :(while crying)...maa aap kahan ho...plz wapas aajao...mumma plz...

(doctor try to console)

Doc :dekhiye sambhaliye apne aapko...ko kismat main likha hota hai..wahi hota hai...aur ek message hai aapki maa ki taraf ne...jo unhone aakhri saans lete hue aapke liye kaha tha...(she look towards him...saying with her eyes to conti.)

Doc :unhone kaha tha...wo apna promose wapis leti hai...aap wapas chali jaiye apne dosto k paas apne pyaar k paas...and apne dance k paas...wo aapko aapka dil dosti dance...wapas deti hai...

(after that doctor leaves...and kriya is lost in her thoughts...she remember the day...when she left mumabai with her mom...)

when she's going away from mumbai...from her dil dosti and dance...she's not the same kriya...she lost herself back in mumbai..they are in the bus of delhi to mumbai...

(note :- dehradun direct koi train aur plane nhi jaate...(first they take the train from mumabai to delhi...and then bus from delhi)

they are in bus...(u know na guyz...dekhradun ka route one way hai...ar hilly area hai...toh ek side se bus ja rhi thi aur ek side se truck...and truck driver is also drunk...so he have no control...and bus driver is lost his control in shock after seeing truck coming towards the bus...and then and then both vehicles collapsed with each other...some of the passnegr(including kriya nd her mom...fallen down from the bus on the road...their head in injured...(ab khud hi soch lo kitna buri taareke se accident hua...coz I'm very bad in writing accident scene...fir bhi likh rhi hoon...)(and then buss lost all its balance and fallen down from the hill and blast...all passenger in the bus died at the moment...)

After this she snapped open her eyes...and tears rolling down from her eyes...and then her mind turns towards the doctor words...which is actually said by her mother...

Kr :nhi main apni mom ko kho choki hoon...aab main apne dosto aur rey ko nhi kho sakti main apne dil dosti dance k paas wapas jaungi... paas wapas jaungi...aur apna dil dosti dance wapas paungi...(she said this with full confidence)

now tell me hows it...

ok first of all

sorry for the short update

par kya karu

school reopen ho gye hai...toh tym nhi milta..(jutthi pura din comp se chipki rehti hai)

nhi shi main guyz tym nhi milta'

now plz guyz click LIke tab and leave ur precious comment

I really need it...

kriti

Edited by Kriti_rox - 13 years ago