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Posted: 13 years ago
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😊****Chappy 1****😊

please speakers on rakho plzzz😉

A boy standing at the corner of the marriage hall talking to a beautiful girl
B: hey beautifull u look dam raveshing even in indian dress ...(and blow the stanz of her hairs )..
G: really u think so...(giving a smile)
B: i dnt think so i no so (giving a smirk )
here two girls in the same function hall serching for a guy and wen they found him they wer pissed of with his attitude and den
thought to have some fun with him😆...they both send one small girl towards the cheezy couple and den the small girl spoke to the boy
SG: (pulling out the boys pants to call him)(now the boy looked at her )"daddy mummy is calling u"
B:(gaving a look at girl...and the girl just slapped him and went away ...boy asked the little girl)...beta who told u to do
this...???(and den a girl from back called him)
G: maina kaha tha "SWAYAM"...u "mr cheezy" (comming forward near him and den he said )
sw: o how can i forget my mrs cheez one and only "KRIYA GHAI"(and went close to her )
a girl from behind said ...
G: y do u do all this things...NEHA hates wen u do such things...(yes she was neha...and the other 2 u have guess)
sw: arre mai kya karta vo he mujhse baath kar rahi thi (giving a sweet look )
den suddenly some one called neha and she went and then mr cheezy started ...
sw: waise ye mummy kon hai?(frownning )
kr: aa..a.a.a.a.wat do i no...mr cheezy...
sw: o really den who no mrs cheezy(mving close to her ) tum he ne to us ladki ko kha tha ...to tum he ho uski mummy...
kr: wat non sen meri to shadi bhi nahi hui hai...so how can i ..have a kid...
sw: mai ho na ...mujh se karo..."MR & MRS CHEEZY" wat say...
kr: you will never grow up (and pushed him and ran he followed her...they both reached the stage ...and suddenly he bumped into neha...&they wer about to fall but he saved her .)
sw:o hi sexy...(he called her dat)...i think hum bach gaya ...(neha looked into his eyes and started drooling)
ne: tumara hoto hua mujha kuch kaisa ho sakata hai...(in a pleeding voice and blinking her eyes and staring at her...)
kr: (was seeing this and she knew about neha's feelings and she inturrupted them )ahemmm ahemmm...neha i dnt think ke he will let u happen anything ... rite swayam ..(asking to him but he just blushed and left neha and went near kriya and slowly said...)
sw: i will never let anything happen to you...(dumbo ye kriya ke baath kar raha hai...aur kriya neha ke ...)(suddenly a song started and as they r the best dancers of mumbai or u can tell india so they started der work and ..)
Den wat kriya pushed him and started to shake her hips and den neha pushed him from other side and now he got scared and both
of them wer behind him pushing him punching him and now swayam's turn...
Song:-
Khabron ke college ka, main professor hoon baby
Ayyashi ke computer ka, processor hoon baby
he raised his collar and den swing his hands and pulled a randam girl and danced with her...and was showning attitude to his both friends...

Oh raja hogi gadhi jo bhi hogi teri deewani
Jitna kameena tu, main utni sayaani

now kriya nugged him from her elbow in his stomach ...
and neha joined her and both wer dancing and pushing him and den all three started dancing and wen the song ends he hugged kriya and den neha hugged him from behind and they did group hug...

Now they all left for home and in car neha and swayam was sitting in front and he was galring from corner of his eyes to kriya ...from the mirror .now they both got down as they both stay in 1 house... got down and was going to home and swayam called her...

sw:Hey sexy...good nite...
ne: to u to?
sw: sweet dreams ...
ne: i will to dream about you only so it will obviouslyit will be sweet ...
sw: how sweet of u ...(now neha moved towards door and swayam said to kriya and she stood near him only)
sw: so Mrs cheezy good nite to u tooo
kr: swayam ...(& gives i will kill u look as she was tired and he was irritating her )
sw: y do u always keep scolding me...(with pleeding eyes... )
kr: coz u always do this wen ever we go out u start ur cheezy and flurty behaviour ...
sw: ok sorry ) ...by the way y r u effected ...with my attitude.(& gave a naughty smile)...ooo i get it...u also love me na dats y
kr: ooo nnnooo...(she screamed and now she was about to go )
sw: so sorry plzzz...forgive now i will nt tell plz...
kriya dnt listen to him and go away till door wer neha was standing for door to get open and both turn and see him...he was standing der by catching his ears ...for sorry with pleeding eyes ...
kr: nautanki ..kahi ka ..and gives a flying and den neha also gave him...one flying kiss
He see excited and jump ... and act to fall by keeping his hand on his heart ..and said aloud
sw: i got bonus today 2..2..kiss fromm 2 beautiful girls...
..now even he goes to his home and den next morining every one decided to go in der own vehicle dey had 3 cars...
.swayam got an idea ...
sw: guys lets have a race ...wat say (and smirks ..)
kr: ok cool wat if we win ...
ne: ya wat will u give us...
sw: wat ever u ask darlings?
kr: ok we will ask wen we wil win ...lets do it mr cheezy...
ne:cool sam(she called him sam ) all the best (and gave a sweet look ...)
sw:same to u sexy...(&turned towards kriys)
sw: u to mrs cheezy
kr: watever
phew over guys ...

Precap:
How will be the race ...they saw three guys standing for lift ...
Who r those ?
Will they give them lift?
will mr cheezy again start with his flurtyness
Sorry for the short update

guys please do comment coz we r sending pm to more than 300 and replies r only hand somes so please if u will not comment we will
not continue next and next update after 60 likes ...


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Posted: 13 years ago
#92
awesome update...loved it very much
loved the bonding of trio
superb
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Posted: 13 years ago
#93
Awesome update

Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#94
Swayam in new avatar really aweome I liked his character alot
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Posted: 13 years ago
#95
oh no!!!! Swayam mr cheezy!!!! 😲 ...omg... Such a big flirt he is.. 😆
well lets see who is gonna win
precap seems interesting...
Update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#96
superb update...loved it
kriyam and neha are awesome
and swayam...flirting with girls...OMG😲
and the trick ...superb
loved it and love traingleor square whatever it is...its amazing...i am loving the way swayam is flirting with kriya...they are soo cute
waiting eagerly for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#97
Awesome start 👏...
These three r true friends 😊...
Loved it when the kid said "Daddy mommy is calling u" 😆...
There names r nice Mr. Cheesy, Mrs.Cheesy and Sexy 😉...
Waiting for their race 😃...
N waiting to know who r those 3 guys 😕...
update soon...
N thanks for the pm 😊.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98
Hey ders sum prob wid ma lyk button..
Consider dis as my lyk hmm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#99
Nw cumin 2 d update..
Hav read al d parts nw..
Wel aro aur tera creation matlab pagalpanti to hogi aur vo tum logo ne dikha hi di...
Pura love triangle ya kya banaya he pata nahi bt jo bhi he bada intrstn he...
Really lukin frward fr d cumn updates..
N i really felt bad abt ur frnd aro hopes she's f9...
God blesss
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update...
Loved it...
Swayam1es such a flirt...
Neha drooling over swayam n swayam latto over kria...amazing...
I guess d ppl standing for lift r sharon, rey n vicky...
Waiting for next part...:)

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