Arhi: Desert Rose Chapter 11 updated pg 113 - Page 95

On chapter 3 and loving it thus far! 👏😳

I am advertising this FF to all :D

Hello,
Just finished reading the updates in these thread.😃And its SO beautifully written.Each intricate detail has been attended to.👏Be it the colors,the haveli,house,its decor,outfits,food,traditions,the characters,the landscape and the over all plot of the story.👏.Its amazing .[:Y]

The way you have protrayed their emotions,the inner thoughts of Arnav,Khushi is fantastic.Each chapter kept me hooked.There wasnt single line that lacked in keeping my interest.😃The backdrop of story -Rajasthan-has its own essence--the vibrancy it brings--draws anyone to it!
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Payal is so positive and optimistic outlook she has surprises me.I could easily connect with Khushi.😊Arnav is as complex as ever,but you have a way with him and that makes it easier for me to intreprete him.I mean the way you written ,with that interesting shade you bring to his character.
The attraction betn Arhi,and the desire..I could feel the heat.☺️Kudos to u!

Felt sad for the state of Akash..bt if it wasnt for him we wouldnt have the story.Want to see how hs meet with Payal turns out.
Also,waiting for shyam to return,there is something fishy abt him.:|

If I can say..I want to tell you I find the story SO delicious😆I know it sounds weirdly creepy,Bt I dnt knw other way to verbalise,how much I have fallen for this story.😳


Nw,am off to Next thread!😉to read further..

@charlotte74: Nyc story!!!!😊

Read chapters 1-11.. Wow, this is an amazing read.. The relation between them from strangers to being attracted towards each other to Khushi's self confession that she loves him.. There is a past story with Lavanya I guess... Arnav is not bad...

Off to the next thread.. :))

One of the best stories I read so far!

I have just started reading your ff..it's damn good yaar😃

Such an captivating story, it's a pity I read it now.