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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow . . . . Nyce concept . . . 😃

I wanna read dis 😛

plz pm me . . .
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
sounds intrsting...plz... continue... nd pm me wen u update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice start 😊

Do continue 😊

And thankuu for d pm 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
nice one
do continue
hope so its kriyansh
thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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GREAT START
ofcourse u should continue and pm me when u update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
wat a concept luved it


plzzz continue

i luved it

thnxx for d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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partner and shona now iam really breaking my head
it's so damn confusing you better post the fisrt update asap warna i don't knw wat i'll do...badly want to know the concept yaar...
and yeah i have added this id to my buddy list so plz send the pm when u guys update it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ok, quite interesting and confusing introduction.
Start it soon re.
And I promise you. Agar tumne pehle hi chapter mein kuch ulta seedha kiya na (even koi mystery di) toh you're gone.
I'm tired of trying to solve the mysteries! 😛
Do PM me. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi guys

So after such an overwhelming response

We are here with the first chapter

Hope you like it

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Chapter 1: Welcome to My World

Universejiii

Mai lut gayi

Mai barbaad hogayi

Mera kya hoga

Universeji

Aap meri madat bilkul nahi karte

Kaha than a maine aapse

Ki aaj mujhe jaldi

Jaga dijiyega

Aaj tak aisa kabhi nahi hua

Ki mujhe apna dress select karne ke liye

Ek ghante se kam time laga ho

I tried a dress, didn't like it and turned in a hurry dropping the

flower vase down.

Just then a girl came in through my bedroom door


Girl: What the hell

Iss room ko dekh kar aisa kyu lagraha hai

Ki koi bhukam aya hai

Bachpan se tere sath hu

Aaj tak yeh samaj mai nahi aaya

Ki tu ladhki hai ya aafat ki jeeti jagti namuni

Aagayi subah subah mujhe lecture dene

Junior Rani Laxmi Bhai


Just when she was about to leave I accidentally dropped the show

piece beside me

Before she could turn and shout I closed my ears but I gez it

didn't really help


Girl: KRIYA RAI PRAKASH


For heaven's sake stop doing that

What are you trying to do??

KRIYA RAI PRAKASH

Well ya that my name

One of the talented daughter's of the sensational dancer Gautam

Rai Prakash

I am the so called Diva of my college St. Louis

I am so clumsy and lazy

But before others I am forced to act the Diva

Being GRP's daughter

You know right "Image"

Well, I love dancing

Ok that's it dance is my world and nothing else

Enough meri behena, agar zyada chilaogi toh gala phat jayega.

And this is my sister Sharon Rai Prakash, the junior rani laxmi

bhai

Mom's complete replica at least in the subject of scold

Even though she is a full on attitude chick. I know most of you

wouldn't but trust me guys she is an angel at heart, very

emotional and caring.

Not to forget, she is also the Dancing Diva of St. Louis.

Well there is only one person in the world she hates the most and

that is none other than my boyfriend.

And that's not where it end even my boyfriend hates her like hell

and both keep fighting like cats and dogs.

The poor soul me, I get tired juggling between these two the

whole day.

( a voice loudly)


KRIYAAA SHARON COME FAST


Sharon quickly left the room.

And finally I got my perfect outfit

After all, I m gonna go on a date after college today

I stood before the mirror and exclaimed

"I look hot, in cold blue not bad ha

Hot in cold, so lets go"


Then, I quickly did my make up not too much though coz I had to

go to college first.

I ran down the stairs to the dinning area, to grab my breakfast

which was obviously fruits, cucumber and carrot.

This was us Rai Prakash sister's standard breakfast

Coz we both are health and figure conscious

As soon as I came down the stairs

Woman: Kriya what is this

Me: What is what

Woman: What kind of dress is this

Me: A blue colour drees.which'''''''''.

Woman: Enough I didn't ask you to describe your dress

You are going to college

This is not the kind of dresses you wear to college

College is meant for studying not for Fashion show

Just then my sissy joined me

Ok even madam was dresses hot

I can not, not stop admiring how she could pull of all kinds of

dresses so well

Honestly, I get a bit jealous sometimes

But well she is my sister after all

She too has the right to look hot, not just me


And well what more can you expect, she too joined me in being

lectured

By now you guys would have guessed who the woman is.

A woman yelling at you for your dress

Could only be either your headmistress or your mom

Since we are at home

The latter one fulfills all the conditions

Hi hi hi


So this woman with bad temper and army discipline

Is none other than my MY RANI LAXMI BHAI

I mean my MOM


Smriti Rai Prakash

She is a ok fine one word description " Volcano"

There is not a single thing on the planet except Dad probably

that she doesn't hate.

She gets furious for every little thing

Me: For God sake mom

Its 21st century

And we are not in India

Stop being such a narrow minded person

What do you expect

That we should wear, salwar kameez, ghagra cholli, chudhiddars

and sarees to college

Even Indian's these days probably don't follow all such stuff


Mom: You are an India dear

Me and Sharon: Not Again plzzz


A man entered the lecture scenario


Man: Enough dear, let them be

Mom: What do you mean

Man: I mean even you know they are not wrong

Mom: Ha ha kijiye enki tarafdari, mai toh aapki kuch lagti hi

nahi hu na, aapke liye toh aapki betiya hi sab kuch

hai'''''''''''''''''..

Man: Arre Smriti''''''''''..

Blah blah and blah


You must have already guessed who it is right

My super Dad

Gautam Rai Prakash


The dancing sensation, a top business tycoon and what else can I

tell describing my Dad

He is the ideal man for a woman

And the best dad in the whole wide world

Trust me my mom she sure has hell lot of luck

In my 19 years of life I never understood how these two totally

incompatible people could be together or love each other so much.

If I were to test their compatibility level, I know for sure what

the result would be

" Arayabhatta's Zero" "0"

You know what I really respect my dad

Not becoz he is a great dancer neither becoz he is a successful

business man

But because this great personality has the patience of God

He has been with my mom from the past 25 years

I know for sure there is no other man in this world who could

give up all his peace of life just for a woman

And you know what he would say if you asked him this question

He would simply reply " Coz it is fun, without her around life

would be boring"

Gosh

Finally, the Indian serial family drama that was going came to an end and after breakfast me and Sharon left for college in our beloved car.

We reached college, got off our cars and walked in.

Everyone kept starring at us, you guys know right

"The Attention"

Well honestly speaking off I love it but also hate it at the same time

Love it coz it feels so special

Hate it when those stupid guys keep drooling all over you with their sadistic intentions.

Well seriously yeh puri duniya gadhi se bhari padhi hai

We entered the college atrium

I was looking around well you know for whom

Obviously any girl in relationship would first search for her boyfriend as soon as she enters the college.

Shoron: Mr. Geeky guy is here kya?

Me: For God sake Sharon. He is my best friend

And I won't tolerate you calling him names

Sharon: Ok fine, why are you making it a big deal

He is my friend too you know

Me: Ya right

You only use him

Sh: Correction, seek help

And why not he is so intelligent

Just when I was looking around I heard Sharon speak in a harsh and sarcastic tone

I closed my eyes praying

Hey universeji

Plz aaj baksh do

But universeji toh aajkal jaise mujhe se bahut gussa hai

Sunte hi nahi

Sharon: Here comes the heartthrob of witches

Mr. Frankenstein

Boy: Good morning princess(Turning towards me)

Boy: Good morning Miss. Backstabber (turning towards Sharon)

Then as usual as if it was a ritual for them they started their cats and dogs fight .

My boyfriend is the hunk of the college, there is no girl who could resist him.

He has this super innocent smile which can make all the girls even give up their life for him.

His attitude varies with people around him

You have just seen how

I never figured out whether he actually hates Sharon or does all this for fun

Just then I saw my best friend who came to my rescue

BFF: Morning guys

Me: Morning

Sharon and my Bf did not reply and that was nothing new, they could not see anyone when they started fighting.

BFF: Wow amazing

They are at it again ''.

How come these two never get tired of it

Me : Who knows

Me: So genius

What's the plan

BFF: for what

Me: Project

BFF: Finished

Me: Are you kidding me

BFF: No, seriously I finished it 3 days ago

I gave an uncomfortable smile

What more can I say in the honour of my Best Friend

HE IS A GENIUS

There is no exam till date that exist when he didn't get one among the top 10 ranks

And this I m talking on international scale

I truly envy him

But talent, what to do

But I must complement he never shows off about it

And the best part is

Mr. Genius kabhi bakwaas nahi karte

Aur humesha hamari madat karta hai

Trust me

He is so understanding and awesome

I can trust him with my life

After both of us somehow managed to stop their fight we all went to class

In the class my BFF passed me a chit that was from my BF

It read

" You look hot"

I blushed

"So all set for the date haaa"

"Meet me after college near my car"

After the hell tiring day

I hurried to the locker room

Freshened up

Redid my make up

And went to the parking area

There he was waiting for me

I went and hugged him

He pulled my cheeks " Agai Cuty"


Okii guy pm's will be send later

Aditi will send it k

Plz ignore spelling mistakes

Enjoy

Edited by ShonaSparkzz - 13 years ago
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