FF: Indecent Proposal #2 [Thread 3 - Page 158]

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segad

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Posted: 13 years ago

#951

I liked your note as well as the chapter. I agree Arnav can't pull a 180, at least not so fast. Would be hard to believe.

Liked the way he handled Nani. Liked Khushi's outburst and his memory. Brought the issue home to him I think. At least now he knows what's eating her.

The last scene was cute, almost domestic, wifey on the phone and hubby trying his luck

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aarrsshhii

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Posted: 13 years ago

#952

tht was a grt prt... loved khushis outburst...arnav needed tht...he bdly needed a reality chck...
bt dear, wasnt it lil short?? or mayb t ws too good tht i flt its a lil short...😊

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Shruti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#953

so finally arnav got y khushi was upset on the ring part haan

i loved the monologue and outburst of khushi much needed here

great work dear

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Noni

@sweetnoni

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Posted: 13 years ago

#954

Nice update:) Loved the fb...Arnavs emotions n the outburst by Khushi 2 gud.

Continue soon n thx 4 the update.

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ssafdar

@ssafdar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#955

As usual sublime update!!! 👏

I knew that Arnav would have some sort of plan in dealing with his family...he seems to be 2 steps ahead of everybody.

loved how khushi let him have it about him using her family's predicament to stop Nani from interfering, Go Girl 😛 and just the mention of angry sex 😍

But Arnav wasn't wrong in his thinking about Payal's broken engagement. also loved the ending😳

cannot wait for the next part!!!!!!!!!

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humsafar

@humsafar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#956

wowww loved it end was cute...arnav thought at the endwas so right she wants marriage lolll pm me next time

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johnangad

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Posted: 13 years ago

#957

u go khushi! arnav should realise that wat he id doing is so wrong on so many levels! hope the day comes soon when khushi can throw his job in his face and run, and he begs for her to return

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monaya_sajan

@monaya_sajan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#958

loved the update a lot!!!! fabulous!!!

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sunny_sarun

@sunny_sarun

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#959

amazing!!!!👍🏼
i love the way khushi made arnav realize his mistake and u absolutely stayed true to his character by making him feel guilt and then making him think that he did a favour to them.. this is the ASR which we love😛

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ekiholo

@ekiholo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#960

Awesome update!! Truly poor Khushi and reading an about Arnavs past on anjis marriage had me sad as well..no wonder why he's like that..amazing truly amazing!! 👏 👏