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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update yar
kriyaansh pov was fab
then their kiss
they showering all their love on each other
lovely yar
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update...!!!!
Luvd it...
Thnx 4 de pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update👏
loved it😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved d update...
kria s always unpredictable she kissed rey wen he hesitated coz she was uncomfortable..
loved d update...
superb..
waiting for next...
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey shivani...
amazing update...
loved it...
thnx for pm n sorry for the late comment dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
AWESOME

AMAZING

LOVED IT

READ IT ALL IN A GO..MONDAY IS MY EXAM N HERE I AM READING IT ALL..COULDN'T RESIST IT

GRT JOB

TAANI-RAGHAV SCENES..HH

UPDATE SOON :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago


(thanx k 🤗❤️ )

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Rey's pov

Kreya's pov

raghav's pov

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I know updating after a long time…sorry sorry…

Keep reading….

Keep liking………

Keep commenting…….

Episode 35


I reached near the pool….taani was there….her legs were immersed in the water…and she was starring at her reflection in the water…the moon above her head shine brightly…she was sobbing…I could hear that sound of "uuhh,,huuu,…uhhh.." and tears in her eyes…I promised myself…that I will make her smile…at least I will wipe her tears…

I went and sat next to her…she soon noticed me…tried to wipe her tears…

T: aap? Yahan? Kab aaye?

Ra: jab tum ro rahi thi!

T: nahi mein nahi ro rahi thi!

Ra: juth mat bolo! Rey ko like karti ho na?

T: kisne bola?

Ra: rey ne!

T: kyun?! Apne tak rakhna chaiye tha na!!

Ra: it is ok! U know arjun kreya ko like karta tha…n tabhi hi mene kreya ko propose kiya tha!

T: what! Aap aisa kaise kar sakte ho?

Ra: kyunki arjun ke khud meri help ki thi! Coz arjun ko pata tha ke kreya also used to like me!

T: toh ab woh rey ko bhi chod ke jayegi?

Ra: nahi …mere aur uske bich mein sif infacutation tha! Abhi she mature enough!

T: oh…sobs again…

Ra: ekk baat bolo senorita ?

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"haan …bolo na" kreya said…still holding my hand…

" raghav ka phone tha…" I replied

" and sabko pata hai!? " kreya said….rather questioned!

"yaa" I said helplessly!

"oh noo! Bhai kya bolege…neha…vish….taani! Sharon" she started to panic…

I tried to calm her…but I was not able to…! I tried talking ….but it was no use….i firmly hold her by her arms …and kissed her again

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She gives a confused look….raghav ignores it… and completes his dialogue …

Ra: baadebaade shaadi mein chote chote pyaar karne waale log mil hi jaate hai…aur kisa dil bhi tut ta hai…pur…dil tutne se zindagi thodi khatam ho jaati hai… life mein move on toh karna hi padta hai…listen I know you are were strong…and it is okay….you will fall in love again…but this time aisa ladka dhund na jo sif tumse pyaar kare… only you! Jiske liye tum hi uska present ho..aur tum hi future…

T: hmmm…. Wipes her tears…gets ups…raghav gets up…and she hugs her…

It was so beautiful to explain her….the hug,… it gave me warmth….she is so cute….i felt so good…when she placed her head on my chest….her perfume…was the only thing I could smell…she was the only one I can see….i felt the pain..she was going through… I felt happy when I could wipe her tears…

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Raghav taani soon joined the group…

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She left me as soon as she required oxygen…and now she was quite….now I know how to keep my baat-cutter shaant!

"chill, ur bhai is happy!" I said …

"but" she tried to speak…

"there is no but…u love me?" I asked a silly question

"yes I do" she said without even thinking!

"and so do I" I exclaimed …

She smiled back at me…

" jab hum dono khush hai…toh muje duniya ki koi chinta nahi hai!" I said in a firm tone, I don't know how true it was!

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" okay" said swayum…

"Get me chocolate ice-cream" neha demanded…

" I will come with you" Sharon said…

"I need chocolate ice-cream bhai" kreya said…

Swayum turned back …a smile grew on his face…he ran towards up…and opened up his hand…we hugged him….the gang was next to us the other moment…so was taani….all wished us …hugged us…I felt like was married!

"congo dude" Vicky said!

"party time guys" arjun said…nil , bharat and ,amar agreed to arjun

I hugged raghav and thanked him…swayum just stood and kept on smiling..i wonder what he was thinking….

The topic soon changed to ice-cream again…

" okay I will get it!" swayum said!

"sabko chocolate chalega na?" Sharon questioned….

Everyone was cool with it… swaron left the bunglow to get ice-cream…they saw a ice-cream van across the road…they started walking towards the van….

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A guy…was driving car…he was with his family…they all were enjoying the night scene…they came on the main road….the car was in speed…but samne se achanak one truck came in full speed..the truck was on the wrong way…to avoid accident… the guy, took a left….and "DASH"

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love ...tc 😳
shivani


Edited by sweety-reylover - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally rei aur kriya kriyaansh...and tanni also find frd...
It was awesome...
But yeah last mein ky tha...it's a cliff-hanger...update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally shivi .tujhe update krne ka time mil gaya. .
Lovd d update. .
Shivi,mai ek baat frankly bata deti hu,m not at all interestd in raghav and uss chudail ki love story mai,so dnt expct a coment about them nw,or in future. .k. .
Lovd d kr scene. .hehehe kya tareeka nikaala hai rey ne apni baatcutter ko shaant kerne ka. .
Hehehehehehehehe. . . .
Woh. .last part .shivi,wat was dat. .mujhe to kuch samjh nai aaya. .pls nxt part jaldi update keriyo.

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