OS: Khushi, not a damsel in distress! - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely OS.. Please do continue..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
Oh how I wish khushi was like this yesterday but alas! Anyways whatever we got was just perfect and I loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
Amazing! This is what should have happened...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
Oh this version is awesome ! She could've stamped on Shyam's foot yesterday !!

Are you planning to continue??
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
loved it
hope you do continue it soon pls
why should khushi be damsel in distress all the time its about time thats changed
hope she is okay
see you soon thanx for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow, what a story! very well-written... it would have been nice to see something like this in the episode, but that is too much to hope for! they prefer melodramam over anything else... I was hoping khushi would have bitten shyam or lallan, kicked them, etc rather than just yelling 'arnavji' totally distracting him, but that was not to be! but thoroughly enjoyed yesternight's episode... loved your take on the episode, too
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
Awesome.
Wish Khushi had done something like this.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I was planning to end the OS with one chapter, but then since so many of you requested me to continue, I thought I will write one more part and end it. But then I watched today's episode, and I'm so so so happy, I thought I will add a lot of romance at the end. Half an hour after the episode, I'm still crying and smiling at the same time, my heart is brimming with happiness and my head feels like it's going to explode.. sigh, what has Arshi done to me??????


So here goes.. the second and last part.. please do leave your comments! Thanks!!
Remember Khushi is not a damsel in distress, she's strong and bold! 😆

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Arnav sat on his knees, tears running down his face, eyes closed. "Khushi", he screamed. He opened his eyes and said, "No, Khushi, I can't let you die". He ran to one side and looked down; it was a steep cliff.. and he couldn't even see the bottom. "Khushi", he screamed again. He ran to the other side and put his hands on his head. There was no sight of her anywhere. "No, no, no, this cant be happening. After all that we have been through, I cant lose her this way. Please, please, come back to me Khushi. I need you. I can't live without you! Khushi", he closed his eyes and collapsed onto his knees, his head in his hands.

Suddenly he heard a man's scream. He turned around to a knife fall from Lallan's hand as he collapsed on his knees, putting his hands on his head, blood pouring down his face. He looked up and saw Khushi standing behind him with the same wooden log in her hand. She saw Arnav and dropped the wooden log. He stood up and walked towards her. She stood frozen, her lips trembling, a smile appearing on her face, as tears streamed down her face. He reached her and put his arms around her and pressed her body to his. She burst into tears as she put her arms around him. They stood hugging each other. He pulled away and wiped her tears away. "Don't cry, Khushi. I am fine. Everything will be fine." "Arnavji", Khushi stammered. "You.. I can't believe.. you.. are.. " she touched the wound on his cheek. Arnav took her face in his hands. "I thought.. I lost you forever, Khushi.. what if I had lost you.. what would I.. don't you dare scare me like that again, ok? Don't you dare.." he screamed at her and she smiled and asked softly, "Why?" Arnav looked at her, with his eyes wide. "Tell me, Arnavji. Why does it matter?" Arnav hugged her and tears ran down his cheeks. "Because I can't live without you, Khushi." Khushi put her arms around him and burst into tears, with a big smile on her face. She pulled away, took his face in her hands and pressed her lips against his. He was surprised, but he kissed her back, passionately; moments that they spent together flashing in their minds. She put her arms around his waist and pressed her chest tightly against his as if she was afraid that he might leave her again. Finally when they pulled away, breathless, he took her face in his hands, kissed her forehead and looked into her eyes. "I love you, Khushi". He didn't have to hear anything from her; the smile that appeared on her face and the lone tear that escaped down her cheek, leaving a twinkle in her eye said it all. He bent down and took her in his arms and walked into the sunset!

This is just the beginning...

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Ok, now you might think? Khushi kissed him first? Well, the guy took such a long time to tell her he loved her.. you think he might kiss her now.. she didn't want to wait.. so she kissed him first.. I don't see any problem with that.. do you.. wouldn't you jump and kiss Arnav if he told you he couldn't live without you??? 😆

Edited by boreddamsel - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
yayyy me 1st 😃

read bth d parts!! n realised tht i wld hav been happy if dis ws in d show too 🤣


Edited by -veena.shona- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
what difference does it make if she kisses him the main thing is that everything is okay between the two
loved the ending or was it the beginning
thanx for pm

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