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Posted: 12 years ago


Chapter 15:

Hum dono couple hai????


The ray's of the morning sun with its soft warmth touched

the beautiful maiden waking her up from her daydreams.

Today her green eyes just reflected the light. The glow

was missing. Drowned in her deep thoughts she got off

her bed and walked down the white marble stairs to the

dinner table.

A voice bringing her back to this earth


Voice: Goodmorning my dear princess

Good morning dad''''''.(in a dull voice) she said

Dad: tum thik toh ho na Kriya

Koi pareshani

Kr: No dad I'm fine just thinking about my homework

GRP: sure na beta agar aap ko koi bhi problem hai toh

hume batadijiyega ok

Kr: yes dad( fake smile)

Smriti: Mujhe pata hai problem kya hai


Kriya looks at her mom with confusion


GRP: Accha toh batao

Sm: wahi shirtless wonder

Mr. Rey

Kr: mom plz

Aapko rey se kya problem


Sm: Mujhe usse nahi uske character se problem hai

GRP: Rey smriti

Seriously, tumhe rey se kya problem hai

Aur tum Rey ki character ki baat kar rahi ho


Sm: ha, jante nahi hai aap usse

Kr: (loudly) Aap usse nai janti mom

Waise bhi aap rey se kitni baar mili hai

Aur aap ko koi haq nahi banta ki aap rey e character par

comment kare

Kriya storms out of there leaving her breakfast unfinished

Sm:Dekha kaise baat kar rahi hai mujh se

Aaj tak krine mere saamne apni aavaz nai uthaii

Aur ab dekhiye kaise uss characterless ladhake liye mujh

se ladh rahi hai..


GRP: enough smriti mai sun raha hu iss ka matlab yeh nahi

ki tum kuch bhi bolo

Sahi toh kehe rahi hai Kriya bina kisiko jane tum kisike

character par ungali nahi utha sakti

Aur jaha tak Rey ki baat hai toh mai rey ko bahot acche

se janta hu

He is like my son

I don't want to hear a single word against him get that


Grp also leave the place leaving Smriti all alone the

outcome being her increasing anger towards Rey as to why

her family would favour her compared to her.



Location: College


Kriya got out of her car and walked towards the entrance

thinking about the previous night.

Kr(thinking to herself) :Kal job hi maine suna kitna ajeeb

tha

Par Rey ne itna bada sach mujh se kyu chupaya

Ya phir sirf mujh se nahi sab se

Sharon ko iske bare me pata hoga par I'm sure agar

maine unse pucha toh woh mujhe kuch nahi batayenggi

Dad kya unhe pata hai iske bare meh pata hona chahiye so

mujhe shayad dad se puchna chahiye

Par yeh toh rey ki personel life meh interfere karna hua

na agar unhe pata chalgaya aur bura lagga toh

Ho sakta hai woh nahi chahate ho ki mujhe kuch pata chale

Par mujhe pata karna hai, kya meh Rey se directly pucchu

Universeji mujhe kuch samajme nahi aaaraha, plz meri

madat kijiye

Her prayers were heard because universeji just send her

the person she could talk to her best friend Swayam


Swayam: Morning Kriya yeh tum subah subah college

entrance ke samne khade hokar universeji ko kyu yaad kar

rahi ho

Jana tak mujhe yaad hai aaj koi exam nahi hai

Hai kya?

A smile came upon her face and she hit swayam's head

slowly

Kr: Nahi baba koi exam nahi hai

Mai kuch important soch rahi thi

Accha swayam tum meri help kar sakte ho kya

Sw: yeh bhi koi puchne ki baat hai Kriya

Always bolo kya karna hai

Kr: Yaha nahi koi private jagah

Sw: rehersal hall

Kr; nahi waha sab aajayenge

Sw: then''.

Kr: Fire exit'

Sw: seriously

Kr: Ha challo jaldi

Saying so Kriya pulls Swayam along with her to the fire

exit and closes the door

Kriya to herself: Swayam se kaise pucchu taki usse kuch

pata bhi na chale aur mera kaam bhi ho jaye

Ok kriya jaldi tere paas time bhi nahi

Class shuru hone wala hai

Sw: kriya ab toh bol sakti ho na

Kriya turns back takes a deep breadth and asks

Kr: Swayam agar tumhe kuch aisa pata chal gaya ho

Sharon ke personel life ke bare meh jo usne pehele kabhi

tum se share nahi kiya ho par tum uss cheez ko detail meh

jaana chahate ho toh tum kya karoge


Sw: Mai usse directly puuchungga kyuki agar maine kisi

aur ko pucha toh aisa lagega ki mai usse trust nahi karta

aur usse bura lagega


Kr: par agar usne nahi bataya toh

Sw: that would mean woh mujh par abhi bhi completely

trust nahi karti ya phir koi aur reason bhi ho sakta hai

Kr: jaise


Sw: hmmm jaise maybe mere safty ke liye

Ya phir just for example woh janti hai ki mai bahot

emotional hu aur usse related har cheez mujhe bahot

effect karti hai so shayad woh nahi chahati ki mujhe dukh

ho maybe

Par tum achanak mujh se yeh sab kyu pooch rahi ho

Kuch hua kya kriya


Kriya was lost analyzing the situation from swayam's poit

of view which at the moment seemed more sensible

After all Rey was one among the people who literally lived

for others.

And knowing how much he loved her he would never even

dream about hurting her be it even sharing his own

sadness since he knows it would surely make her sad.

Sw: Kriya are you listening ''Kriya

Kriya came out of her dream dimention

Kr: Swayam, thank you so much

I never would seen it from this point of view

And realized what I did just now

THANK YOU SOOO much

She hugged Swayam tightly in joy who was completely

confused at her behaviour and was probably starting to

doubt his best friends sanity.

Swyam to himself: Pagal par agar kriya mere aur Sharon

ka example le rahi hai toh obvious si baat hai ki this all

concerns Rey. And since it is Rey meaning love aur love

meh toh koi sane behave kar hi nahi sakta toh meri pagal

dost thodi koi exception.


So saying he smiled and returned the hug

Just then someone opened the door and when they turned

to see guess who was it who shut the door back with rage

and stormed out

'''

Kriya looked at Swayam who was stund unable to react

Kr: Sharon( she whispered)

Sw: Sharon ( whispered back)

Kr: Woh itne gusse meh kyu thi

Kahi Sharon ne kuch galat toh''

Swayams face turned pale and Kriya felt guilty. She didn't

want to be the reason for their fight.

Kr: Swayam ab yaha par khade kyu ho jao

Jake misunderstanding clear karo''''''''

She pushed him out and hit her head, then she prayed to

her universeji

She rushed out and into someone spilling the coffee that

the person was carring all over his shirt and when she

tried to she ended up bupping into his head just to realize

that it was none other than Rey.


Kriya looked at him all soaked in coffee and rubbing his

head at first she found it cute but then she in a moment

she felt sad as why should be the reason for all his pain.


Rey: yaar dekh kar challa karo


Rey finally looked up to see his Kriya whose face was

filled with sadness which instantly worried him.


Rey: I'm so sorry Kriya tumhe koi chot laggi hai kya

Bahot zyada dardh ho raha hai

Challo medicine room chalete hai

Kriya didn't stop him as he took her to the medicine room

where there was no one but them.

Rey: yaha nurse kyu nahi ?

Acha let it

Kriya tum bolo tumhe kaha lagi hai mai ointment laga deta

hu

He turned just to find Kriya hold his hand.She gently

pulled him near the sink and wiped his hand with water

where the coffee fell, it was probably hot since his hand

had become red.

She looked at his hand and then into his eyes that seemed

confused as to why she was behaving like this for such a

small hurt.


Then she bandaged it with utmost caution so as to avoid

causing him any kind of pain. Then she took his hand in

hers and brought the bandaged portion of his hand to

touch her cheeks and closed herself.

Rey because this action of hers realized what she had

been thinking and how she had been blaming herself.

He knocked her head slowly


Rey: Stop thinking stupid things. It was not your fault at

all. Nothing was ok. And maybe it was for the good kyuki

ab we know it was not just some kind of attraction but

true love right and look at it this way ab hum relationship

ko seriously lene lage hai as well hum shayad isse aaur

maturely handle karengge right.


Kriya looked at him completely surprised causing him a hell

lot of confusion.

Rey: Kya hua aise kyu dekh rahi ho

Kr: Hum dono couple hai?????

Rey was shocked at that question he was practically

speechless

The only question in his mind was what the hell were they

until now'''.

Rey: Kriya trust me bahot bura joke tha

Kr: Par Rey mai mazak nahi kar rahi


Rey was mad and trying to analyze what all the moment

between them meant did they really have no meaning at all

What the hell''''''''''''''..


Sorry for the short update will post next part soon

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Edited by ShonaSparkzz - 12 years ago
sweetydiyafrien thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
ABOVE THE CHAPTER AWESOME... LOVED IT...
UPDATE RES OF THE CHAPTER SOON...
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Posted: 12 years ago

hey...

i juz came accross ur ff juz a couple of days ago...n juz read the whole thing in a go...ITS JUST AWESOME...fab n vry realistic the way u hv described their relation after kriya's return😊... i juz loved it...liked sharon also...she accepted kriya😊plz do continue soon... _jannet n stars😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
It was super awesomee shona
Edited by --Kinjal-- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
i just love kria and swayam friendship bonding
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was an awesome update...loved it very very much
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update.
kriyam is too cute luv their bonding. ,.. . . 😳
Kriya . . hum dono couple hai. . . . . .speechless rey . . . . bahot bura joke tha. . .what the hell they were untill now. . . . too cute yahi to hai apni sweet n confused kriya.
Loved it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was a wonderful update - the Kriyam part was simply brilliant ...even the Kriyansh incident was beautifully put across...I hope Smriti has the sense to pause and observe Rey b4 she jumps to wrong conclusions...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wooow shona kahati tu u knw how much i missd u anywy welcum bk .. bk to reading ur updtes yippree.. this 1 was super duper awsomme
but crap end mein kya hua am scred and cnfusedd well cnt wait 4 the next bit
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Posted: 12 years ago
Woahhh.. One more update.. Yay yay.. I lovd it..
Smriti is still Anti Reyaansh.. Whts hr problem yr.. He savd her daughtrs life..cevryone knows they both love each othr lik mad thn u cnt she accept it..
Gud to c our cute kriya bk in her action.. I c dat universe g vala thing.. Always fightin debatin wid hr universe g..

Swayam.. Gosh,I too wana hav a bestbuddy lik him.. He is a real wise man..
Lovd how he judged d situation bt ooopsss.. Sharon saw dem huggin.. I tl u these wrong timings.. Ufff

Kriyaansh part..was hell cute.. Kriya's concern,Care,love fr Reyaansh..reyaansh judgin n understndn kriya's emotions.. Hayyeee.. Miss dem 😭 😭

Hum dono couple h???
Kriya trust me bot bura joke tha..
M nt kiddin Reyaansh.. Haha 😆 😆
Lvd it.. Waitin fr d nxt one :)

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