Love 2 Hate U-KriYansh SS #3 teaser pg19 jul'2 - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
#51
di!!!!!!!! i have no words for this update

its just mind blowing, amazing, awesome...

loved it very much

poor rey kriya ka punch mila usse

their car scene is nice..

and the beach song sequence mast tha

perfectly described

first boys dancing adn then girls mast tha

at last rey did the way saif did in the movie...baaki sab ko sharam nhi aati claps kar rahe hahi

eagerly waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
kria wanting to make her devil pay for that Bet... and then the punch to make him back to his sences... that was so rofling🤣🤣 I didn't expect that from her... she's so unpredictable... and then their nok-jhok started with that song ko lekar discussion... Uff... these two are totally mad... then that marine drive ka sequence... KriYaansh ka so cute jhagda and the 3 couples dancing along with KriYaansh and fighting along with them... and the last thing was unbelievable... Rey just pecked on her lips infront of everyone... Kria ko chod even I am dumbstruck... KriYaansh are UNPREDICTABLE... waiting for the next part...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesime update
I think next update me rey ke band bajna wali hai
Waiting for next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
guys this is LAST CHAPTER!! no more chapters or epilogues..
now probably evryone are loving me for updating three updts in one day but after reading dis
im sure im gonna get jootas chappals in my direction.. or may b tomatoes n rotten eggs ??

and ya ignore typos 😆



CHAPTER 15



'IM NOT COMING ANYWHERE!!!!' I yelled at Sharon for 100th time !
'I don't want any excuses!! Ur coming and also wearing the dress I designed for u!! its prom nite after all and U CANT BACK OFF!!! Get ur butt out of the bed and GET READY its already 7pm!!!' Sharon screamed at the top of her voice..
I slowly peeped moving my blanket down so that only my eyes could be seen. I faked a cough
'sh sh shaaron.. u understand.. *sniff* im not alright.. deko muje pukaar hai.. sharo Sharon.. pls u go na.. mei ..'
'kick that onions out of ur pillow and get ready kria!! I know u very well!! and I also ki teri body temperature un chote chote mote mote ONIONS KI WAJAH SE BADA!!! STOP ACTING AND MOVEEE!!!'
Goodness Gracious!! Building dint fall ??? well I would thumps up the constructors of the building for being so honest with their quality of material!! Or else for the voice wich was vibrating currently in my room, the whole apartment would have been collapsed.. I mentally thanked my stars and put on a puppy dog face
Sharon sighed 'wats wrong sweetie ?' Sharon asked placing her hand on forhead.. wondering how she is so sweet ? well that is the real Sharon.. she cares a lot for me .. if she wouldn't be this sweet how would u expect me to be sweet and caring towards her wen I found tat she was Rey's gf ?? aahh! Tat was lie though..
Remembering of wich I recalled the incident wich I was brushing off these 3 days !! how dare he kiss me ?? well peck me infront of those strangers ? seriously he was insane!! Does he even know wats going thru me ? does he have any tiny idea wat im suffering ??? just for a bet huh!! He is using me and im giving him all free access!! Wah kria ghai!! Kudos to u ! MY FOOT!!
OUCH!!!! Sharon slapped me ???
Tears twinkled in my eyes.. my lips mouthed O shape.. my cheeks burning and my left cheek probably turned Red!! DAMN SHARON!!!!! She is a bitch HUH!!!!
'WHAT THE f**k SHARON ??' I screamed
'SAME TO U TO KRIA!!! kabse bula rhi hoon! I shoke u no response I patted u no response what do u expect me to do kiss u ?? to bring u back on earth ??'
Kiss!! Aaahhh!!! Nooo don't remind me meri maa I beg u !! *uaaan uaan*
'KRIA WOULD U WANT ANOTHER SLAP ??' Sharon asked politely with her high pitched voice!!
'ugggh!! Sharon do u know I hate u sooo much ???!!!'
'oh I know it already darls temme sumthn knew! And if ur drama is over can u move ur ass out of the bed and get ready for the prom nite ???'
'no im not coming!!!! And I hate u !!'
'I hate u to and ur coming!!!'
She left the room with a smirk
I screamed IM NOT COMING!!!!
***
'do u know ur gonna so regret for bringing me here ??' I glared at Sharon who was literaly dragging from the car towards the venue .. oopps correction! From my bed to venue!!
'I don't care! And u r not gonna regret it !! thank me later!!' she grinned
'in ur dreams!!' I scoffed..
The guards stopped us.. *entry for couples only* he pointed.. I smiled widely at Sharon as I dint have a date for wich I got a smirk in return
Have I said that I wanna smack sharon's teeths too while she smriks ?? no wonder rey n Sharon are best friends!!!
Just then rey came cladded grandly on his white shirt back pant and black blazers!! SHIT NO DROOLING NO DROOLING NO DROOLING!! I better make a recording of it in my mind before I do another mistake!!!
He grinned wide before wrapping his hand around sharon's waste.. I chuckeled 'drama king!!'
Swayam came behind me.. oh I forgot to mention 'he was boiling!!' hahahhaha!!
He wrapped his hand around my waisted.. I frowned
'so now u have a date!! So don't even dare to think of backing off u silly gal!!' Sharon laughed..
I hissed under my breath 'Universee jii!!'
'oh! Kria!!! how did u even think of not coming ?? wen im there ur date..' swayam winked at me before hugging me tigt! Well again I forgot to mention I could smell of boiling blood!! Hahahha!! May be Sharon ?? but I found it more from rey's side!! UUGGGHHH!! Stop it kria he is a jerk!!!
I broke the hug.. ooops sorry rey made us break as he was soo desperate to hug swayam!! Really ???
And then unwillingly we entered the venue.. I was enjoying though.. and constantly praying that rey doesn't propose me!! Please please!! Give him some brains! I don't know wat il do it him if he does!!
I sharon swayam vicky neha rey wer all sitting near the couch and blabbering something at the first.. then all of us greeted out friends and acquintances.. nd den lectures ??
Wen all formal greetings was done we headed towards dance floor.. for a while I forgot about bet.. I forgot about everythn.. because there was mass dancing going on 'switching partners for evry beat..
I firstly hesistated but then I thought if I get to dance with rey it would rather last for 10-20 seconds so why to worry ??
And there we started.. it was full of fun!! Flirting with random [ descent ] boys.. well it's a custom..!! once u switch ur partner u should complement ur new partner and greet them is a actual custom wich then got manipulated to 'flirting!!'
Aah flirting reminds me how joyfully rey was taking advantage of custom! CASINOVAS!! Never change evr!!!!!
Finaly I got a chance with rey.. I was praying my best for the time to pass.. I couldn't antrol my emotions. The hurt. The anger. Or the attraction I felt towards him.. it was tough time for me.. as though god heard me! U don't know ?? im not so fav of universe ji tats y he always puts me in trouble same things happned..
Music stopped .. a slow number was played.. and we are ought to dance with the partners we got.. Sharon had some random guy with him.. she was deliberately waiting for swayam to cling her arms with.. and then god heard her.. she is always god's fav!! Swayam politely asked her partner to step back.. poor guy frightened with swayam's politeness he backed off.. I looked rey.. who was waiting for me to respond.. SHIT!! I haven't even listening to wat he was saying.. my mind was in my world.. my heart was pounding hard how am I suppose to concentrate after all ?
I looked up our eyes locked again!
He pulled me closed by holding my waist.. other hand held mine.. we wer doing slow salsa..
I looked over his shoulder Sharon was hugging swayam and dancing. I chuckled lightly
'don't u think ur gf is enjoying swayam's company more than compared to u ?'
Well rey was taken aback by my sudden question. And I was hopping he would admit the truth..! yess I was hoping.. after all my heart was crying so.. if he did then I promise I wouldn't mind to be his slave for rest of my life! Mark my words.. I will hope till the last moment he would tell the truth. and then propose me, If wat I read in eyes wer true!!
'ummm may be!! Idk..'
'u don't care rey!!'
'may be!!'
'why ??'
'because..'
'u don't love her ??'
'no ..' I raised my eye brows.. my heart dancing
'I mean.. yes! wo..' my nose wriggled.. my heart sank
'actually.. wo mei yeh ..'
'why the hell ru stammering ???'
'because.. I .. wo ..'
DAMN!! MUSIC STOP!! He left me.. went to a corner..
Ugggh! Bad timing universe ji!
***
Evrywer I could see love.. love was in the air.. the romantic moment of the nite was yet to begin.. the famous romantic number..
More about romantic number ' there would be some light melodious music playing behind.. and couples here use it for other purposes other than dance.. like kissing ?? proposing ? a gal can anytime expect a proposal from a guy during this number..
This was I avoiding.. my mind planned for a escape..
I was about to turn while rey held me NOOO
I pulled me closer and took me to the dance floor..
'Why me ???' I pouted
And rey pointed Sharon and swayam busy.. umm.. well let me not explain much of it..!!
I turned back to rey
'ur a jerk!!'
'il take that as a complement!!'
'ur insane!!'
'wow thanks a lot im over whelmed..'
'leave me..!!'
'NEVER!!' he said looking into my eyes.. my heart melted SHIT NOOO!!
He came close to me.. my breathing rate increased.. no no no please don't kiss plsss..!
Bingo!!!! He kissed my cheeks.. I shut my eyes close and clenched my fingers into a fist..
I moved back..
'well we aren't together..' he said eyeing at Sharon..
I sighed
'I was always interested to be with u..'
Shit my heart stopped beating..
'we wer never together kria.. belive me..' he said holding my hand.. I couldn't blink !!
He went in his knees.. SHIT SHIT NO REY PLS DON'T DO THIS!!!
'kria! I have always loved u..! always.. and will love u forever.. I have waited for this day .. do dance with love.. to be with u.. to love u.. i I Love You Kria Ghai.. Reyansh singhania has fallen head over heals for u..!! do u love me ???'
Tear flood!! SHIT !!! tats it rey!! not anymore!!!
I gulped
'Yess!!!' I said in middle of my sniffs.. I could here the claps and cheer.. he hugged him.. he wrapped his hands around me hugging as tight as possible.. I closed my eyes..
I dint hug him back.. I couldn't.. swayam and Sharon stood behind him happy..
I think rey realised I wasn't responding.. he broke the hug and looked at me with a smile in his face..
I moved a step back..
'u won rey congratulations!!' I greeted him making myself strong! No I will not break I promise!!
All three wer confused .. but I could realise the slight hit of guilt..
'u won the bet!! U won rey!!' I raised my voice..
'what ru..' he started to speak only to c my palm facing him.. I stopped him from uttering anythn.. I just showed my palms straight [ she dint slap ] infront of his face.. he was bewildered..
'yes I have fallen in love with u.. right from day one I had crush in u.. wich turned into pure innocent love WICH U USED IT!!! JUST FOR A SILLY BET ???'
'kria mei..'
Well I think they understood
'U know wat rey!!! u don't have to leave dance for one year.. coz u won the bet! Because I LOVED U! because I fell for u ! so u won!!'
Realisation stuck them.. I could see tears collect..
'AND yess that is PAST!! I don't love u anymore!!! I would have if u told me the truth! I would have died for u if u told the bloody truth!!! IM NOT A MATERIAL TO BET WITH GET IT STRAIGHT ALL OF U !!!'
Sharon came forward 'kria relax lemme explain'
'JUST STOP IT SHARON WHAT WILL U EXPLAIN ? TAT BEING MY BEST FRIEND U PLAYED WITH MY EMOTIONS??? Tats y u wanted me to be here!! all the bf gf drama! EVRYTHN WAS THE PART OF BET ISNT IT ?'
'kria..'
'ENOUGH!!!! I have had enough!!!'
I turned to leave.. rey was dumbfolded he dint utter a word.. I turned back to them

'rey do u know y i said yes ? y i made u win after all this ?? even though i knew evrythn do u knw y i stayed quite ??' 'i loved u rey.. and i cant c u lose..!! and morevover.. mei nhi chahti tum apne first love se alag ho.. dance is ur first love right ? i dont want u to leave dance cz of this silly bet !!!! cz i knw the pain of losing first love..'

'i loved u rey.. take care..' i completed wiping my tears off as i ran out .. out from this world of LOVE!! out from St.Louis.. Out from Rey's life..

I went so far so far from everyone that they never find me! NEVER EVER!!! I heard them following me after that but I had decided to stay away and I did!
Here I end my story of my life..
***
'KRIAAA!!!' someone screamed as they stormed to the room.. a gal sweetly sleeping on her study table.. jerked up
'MOM ???"
'KRIAA!!! Its late chalo.. and yeh kya hai ..??' smriti [ kria's mom ] took a book..
"LOVE TO HATE U" ? smriti raised her eye brows.. kria bit her lower lip..

'my first novel mom..!!' - an incomplete one sided love story' she completed and sighed after dumping the book inside the cupboard..


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so how ru guys gonna kill me ???
🤣

hahahahhahaha i love dis
🤣

sorry sorry!! ab suno khaan kolke
🤓.. i mean pado ankh kholke😳

this is the last chapter..
😳NO EPILOGUE😳

but but im not a devil guys
😳 i understand u all love KriYaansh so much.. and how much u love dis SS 😳tats y tats y i have got a suprise for u ..😉 lekin uske liye u should wait till 2mrw..🤣

tab tak gaali do gaali do muje aur kush rho 😆

ring:



Edited by nams_arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG OMG OMG OMG... 3 updates in a row... and i loved every bit ok it... especially the last one...
loved loved loved it... quite an end i must... although i always love to read a happy ending story... nonetheless I just loved this SS of yours... truely the best work of yours so far... really looking forward to the surprise you were talking about in the end... just so wished kria was not really left hurt broken in the end... 😭 was sooo hoping for a happy ending... but loved loved loved it...🤗
Edited by nityaa02 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
oh man namss u made me cry kyun kiya tu ne yeh kya khushi milti hai tujhee tu bhi hamein khush nahi dekh sakto kyun oh kriyaansh naver together thats nt fair am upset nw but loved ur update specially the ending wsh kriya would have forgiven rey but loved wat she sed to him at the end man plz gve a prologue with gd ending plz plzzz plzzz and yh soryy cnt lykk tab nt wrking
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Posted: 13 years ago
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for innumerable gaalis 😡
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I loved it... their confession n then the way she just left him... I know sad ending but hope the surprise has a lot for us...😉 till then all I could say is.. keep writing and blessing us with such work of yours... love you
Edited by shenz_kriyaansh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
s**li...

kam**ni...

bl**dy b***h...

u...arghh!!!!!!!!!!!!

i hate u ...

i hate u...

i hate u...

subah hi maine i love u bola aur ab tum ...

u broke my heart...

mummaa!!!!!!!!!!!!*shouting in top voice*

i hate u nams for this...

jao mai update ke baare mei cmnt nahi karti...

dislike ki option ho toh 1st wala mera lele...

ab kya bachake rakhi hai kal keliye...

kal ki din kharab mat karna...

rey nahi ...u r a jerk...

sorry if felt bad...

gussa hun tumse...

sorry if got hurt...

i dnt really meant it...

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Originally posted by: deetha

s**li...


kam**ni...

bl**dy b***h...

u...arghh!!!!!!!!!!!!

i hate u ...

i hate u...

i hate u...

subah hi maine i love u bola aur ab tum ...

u broke my heart...

mummaa!!!!!!!!!!!!*shouting in top voice*

i hate u nams for this...

jao mai update ke baare mei cmnt nahi karti...

dislike ki option ho toh 1st wala mera lele...

ab kya bachake rakhi hai kal keliye...

kal ki din kharab mat karna...

rey nahi ...u r a jerk...

sorry if felt bad...

gussa hun tumse...

sorry if got hurt...

i dnt really meant it...



same to u for one of ur ss jahan tune KRIYA ko maar diya 😡😡😡

anyways i love to hear gaalis though 😆

thnkxxx anyway 😳😳😳😳

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