SwaRon SS:nothing can tear us apart..

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Posted: 13 years ago
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dis is d second tym i start writing OS n thanks to my frnds it becum an SS...sooo ys another OS turn SS 😆😆
idea credit-appu(SwaRonluver666)..😊
will update in 3 parts..!!

sooo here is d part one-

Sooo it's decided dat tanni wil b d AGS of d collage bt no1 is happy wid d decision of VP to choose taani as new AGS..bt Rey has to work wid her...n nw d new task is to find new 6th dancer of weakling team as footloose competition is going to happen nxt month only..every1 is busy taking audition..daily audition..bt no1 cn match d weakling standard n dis tym every1 is really cautious for selection...

One morning VP Called swayam tanni Sharon n Rey in d office...he introduced one gal..she is d new entry in d collage...n she has learned dance frm new York..bt she has sum really deep connection wid Mumbai...4 of dem reached d office n swayam is just shocked after seeing her...his mouth wide open..he is unable to understand nything...4 of dem went in n VP introduced dat gal wid 4 of dem n vice versa...swayam n Richa still looking at each other...forgetting everything...Sharon noticed sumthing weird during d introduction...n VP gave d order to disperse...n every1 left d office...
Sh:nw wat?another chamchi of VP sir...
Re:bt cnt agree wid VP sir g have to take her auditions alos
Swayam walking bt still lost in his thoughts...
Ta:haan Rey is baar please don't chances..n look down..
Dey r still walking...bt swayam didn't paid attention..
Re:swayam dude kuch toh bol...
Sw:guys will catch u later kuch kaam aa gaya..n left frm Der..3 of dem r shocked he acting acting weird..

Swayam in d BB court sitting on d stairs his chain of wen he heard sumthing..a voice which is familiar to him..he heard sumthing after 3 yrs..after high school days...
Sammyyy...sum1 called his name n he look sideways...richa is sitting nxt to him..he shifted away frm her...
Ri:kya hua Sammy...u r going away frm me??
Sw:tum yahan achanak se??kaise??kb aai tum NY se wapas???
Ri:u r nt happy to see me here Sam??n Maine last month aai...just wanna complete my graduation soo st.Louis Mumbai ka Bst collage hai..sooo I joined her...I didn't knew ki tum b yahin ho..wen I was entering tb hi naam padha tumhara..ACS of d collage...
Sw:hmmm...
Ri:kya hua Sam??u r looking lost??u r nt happy kya??
Sw:nuthing like dat I m just shocked...cnt believe destiny cn play such a big games also..
Ri:kyn kya hua Sam??n don't u think u r forgetting sumthing..u use to call me sumthing...
Sw:nuthing richa...n I m nt forgetting nything..dat was past..n present is totally different..n I believe in living in present...I need to go nw tym to go..audition tym...cya later...n stand up to leave...
Ri:wait..don't u heard I m d 6th dancer of ur team den wats d need of taking d audition??
Sw:I knw VP sir said u r bt still u have to give d auditions..n u have to prove ur talent in front of every1..soo auditions gonna start in half hour in d auditorium...n leave...
Ri:ok..I will prove my talent Sam for u n for us...I knw I did wrong wid u n I wilk.rectify dat for sure...I will own u back...

At d rehearsal hall-
Every1 was Der...n Sharon n Rey told everyone about richa N VP sir ka decision...swayam enters d hall..
Sw:kyn guys aaj auditions nai Lena hai kya??
Every1 shocked...
Re:dude tune suna nai VP sir ne kya Kaha??
Sw:dude Maine suna bt cnt take risk dis tym..if she is dat good as VP sir said let her prove dat in front of every1..she just met me outside d rehearsal hall soo I asked her to gage auditions..if she is really interested she will give d audition..warna aur b ladkiyan hai.
Everyone is shocked swayam is going against VP sir ka decision...dis is very rare wen swayam didn't respect elder's decision..
Sw:lets go guys..v r getting late..participants must v waiting for us...

Auditorium-
Every1 take Der place n auditions started..
Last entry was richa...before her performance Rey swayam n sharon short listed few bt after watching her performance dey cancelled everyone...she is just fabulous...like actually...
Swayam has no doubt on her talent..he already knws dat she is d fabulous dancer...for dance she cn left nything her LOVE also...

Rey declared d results...n richa is selected as 6th dancer of d weakling team..everyone clap for her...even swayam..bt he is nt happy...she came on d stage n stand nxt to swayam...n den she hugged swayam...every1 is shocked...
Ri:Sammy I did it..I m in your team nw...after 3 yrs v gonna perform together..just like before..everyone is still shocked...
Re:dude u knw her already bt den y didn't u told us before???
Swayam is silent...
Ri:Sam u didn't told dem about us??
Sh:about us??wat dat mean richa?
Ri:v wer in relationship guys ...wen v wer in highschool almost 5 yrs back..!
Everyone is shocked...
N together said WHAT???
Sw:richa v ARE Naii v WERE..nw I don't knw u..who r u...bt yaa welcum to d team as it's a team decision nt mine...n I m nt happy to have u in my team..dis is my PERSONAL view...n he left frm Der...

hit d like button n do comment
thank
-purvi

P.S nxt update after getting 40 comments...!😊
Edited by SwaRonforever - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
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res
unres
amazing start
loved it
full on suspense and swayam and richa were in a relationship from past 5 years!!!
eagerly waiting for the next part...
Edited by lovely7010 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome buddy jaldi jaldi update kariyo...😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Pehle padh liya hai . But won't mind reading again.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wat???
swayam in a relationship wid richa for 5 yrs????
what is dat!!!
shit!!! sharon & swaron ka kya hoga!!
Edited by kriyaanshd3 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#6
Poorvi Di...
I LOVE YOU...
I loved this OS turned SS...you know i did...But i hate this Richa and this VP...SHaron..Poor girl...
Can't wait for the next part...
Update soon...
Thanks Rachz for the title and Appu for the idea and Poorvi Di for writing it so awesomely...

P.S. You need to mention that u will update after 40 comments only..warna kisi ko kaise pata chalega...aur bechari main aur Rachz tadapte rahenge...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG Richa will cause a rift in swaRon's paradise. Well a bit of jealousy is good for sharon😆Well it is fab update yaar. but ek binithi hai plz update jaldi. I will die biting my nails thinking of this SS. Haila ab kya hoga? FABULOUS!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ye richa badi kamini types lag rhi he !!!! mere swaron ke beech me aa rhi he gandii..iska murder kr dena he mene !!!
btw osumm idea appz and well ritten my dearie raj !!! i jus love dis ss...wud b waiting for the updates :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome update...!!!!!

update nxt part soon.. n pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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P.S guys sorry der was sentence mistake dey Are NT IN RELATIONSHIP DEY were IN REALTIONSHIP WEN DEY WER IN HIGH SCHOOL..!

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