[COMPLETED] ArHi FF: Colors of the Wind Th#3 (Last); TY Note on Pg144

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Yuks

@-Yuks-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Yay! Me first *finally*

You know what I love about your fic? The little flashback at the beginning. It puts certain things into perspective, counteracts certain other things, and just ads a whole new element to every chapter.

I love how you showed Anjali's manipulative nature without her actually being negative. She is so sweet, I can't see her as evil. But she is very very very manipulative, always wants things her way and will go to any extent to do things the way she wants.

I loved the confrontation.

Old Shyamu is caught now. Now what will he be able to do? He could demand alimony, I guess, but since Anjali doesn't own anything, what can he claim? Arnav's fortune? I doubt that

I loved this update and am waiting for more

Also, congrats on thread 3!!

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Res

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This is my long awaited dance party -

Shyamu's truth is out aur usko Anjali ne lagaya ek kheech ke!

*Distributes sweets*

But then remembers today's epi and wishes you could be the CV. :p

I LOVE THIS ANJALI! LIKE ADORE HER! Even though I got pissed off with the baby truth but then the Raizada's arent the most selfless or multi brain-track people...they tend to concentrate on one fact at a time.

Although I think that Khushi may have forgiven her, Arnav may still harbour some even more intensified guilt issues as far as Khushi is concerned but that is just my haywire brain going yap yap. :p

And Shyamu got it good! Please make the whole family kick him where it hurts? PLEASE!

LOVED IT, MEERA! :)

Absolutely amazing! :)

And Happy Moving! :)

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inspiringstars

@inspiringstars

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Res

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LOL Shyam is biting his own words, his pretense has indeed ended...He deserved every bit of the humiliation. I am glad, Anjali was the one that faced him and told him to get lost, and I am sure he will be unwilling to sign the papers, but I guess that can be taken care of.

Khushi is such a brave girl to have forgiven Anjali instantly inspite of knowing that she was the sole reason for Arnav forcefully marrying her, giving her so much pain, even if her intentions were not bad. I applaud the women in your story Meera, Anjali and Khushi both, Love the characters you have created...

Last but not the least, the slap...wow the slap that crepp so rightfully deserved...Yayy!

Update soon, finally the clouds of pain are going away!

Edited by inspiringstars - 13 years ago

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

res!

Edit - Tomorrow! Too sleepy :)

--Edited--

I'm late than I've promised. Didn't i? I'm sorry, been busy all day yesterday.

Congratulations for thread 3. Truly deserving story. All emotions in there.. I never felt compromised for any emotions there. All were said perfectly! Nice work dear!

New thread.. So new twist? It appears to be a good one.. At least that family is intact still and is not shattered to pieces as I expected..!

Anjali is not pregnant and she pretended so that her husband could change? Or to be exact her chotte would marry Kushi! These many twists in my early morning at office.. 😲

I didnt expect her to be this strong and composed and she knew these many truth about him? Good one!

Kushi.. I feel elated for her. She couldnt feel bad or angry at Anjali but still she found herself leaning towards the victim much. Very good characterization!

Ah.. Shyam! When demanding didnt work, he gone to requesting mode then finally to begging? Poor guy! Now, he spilled the truth!! Now Arnav's turn to action?

Thanks for the pm

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Sultan_Of_Swing

@Sultan_Of_Swing

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Congrats on the new thread!

Seriously can we like send this FF to Gul Kan to give her an idea of the story can be continued in an interesting way, that is still gripping and intense. I loved the silent show of strength by Anjali in this episode. I like her admission of truth with regards to her faking a pregnancy. I liked the way A&K were supportive of her letting her know in not many words they will always be for her.

Not every family confrontation has to be loud and over the top. It can be subtle, intense and strong like how you have written the Anjali Shyam confrontation. Kudos for the way the scene was written.

Shyam is not going to give up that easily, is he?

Keen to see how you are going to take this forward.

Thanks for the PM.

Edited by Naach_Basanti - 13 years ago

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s s nair

@..SSNAIR..

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

New thread...😃

👏CONGRATULATIONS DEAR...👏

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Gunjan Mukherjee

@gunjanmkj

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Cngratz on d new thread! 😊 sorry i cdnt cmmnt on d previous chapter..d thread got closed..
neway,m in love wid dis update..lovin d drama n d comin out of truth..m glad anjali's handling evrythn..m proud of her..
bt wat if creep dsnt sign😕 m tensed abt dat!

Edited by gunjanmkj - 13 years ago