SS:IPK.Heartbreak.Part 20 on PG 110, THE END

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Posted: 12 years ago

#531

Originally posted by: laksh65
nice update

thanks :))

Originally posted by: mehak06
Awesome update...

Thank u :))

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Posted: 12 years ago

#532

Originally posted by: Xaffi
Awesome update...

thank u :))

Originally posted by: rashgirl000
oh god you are gonna end it.😔
i really loved the update.
finally they patched up.
continue soon

Thanks n no i will give it 2 or 3 more chapters...pray i get over this hurt so i can conti writing :)))

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Posted: 12 years ago

#533

Originally posted by: riafna
Fuzzy its really true to character.You amazed by this skill. Not here not there how can you? Sorry I am commenting for both update together.
Arnav's angry it will be with him and only he can less its some points thats it but not completely..Where Khushi whatever happens she will forgive him easily. Mamiji whatever happens do what she thinks and continue her activity. You gave OP also enough space.Well done. I like your all characters.

Superb update. Thanks mail

thank u so much for all your kind words...love to hear it n it keeps me going...always...i know im very late at updating...im really sorry for it...will try to complte it soon :))) hugsss

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Posted: 12 years ago

#534

Originally posted by: rskumar
ya his anger always spoil everything... so syham is trying to do something big..nice update

ya...shayam wont change...thx

Originally posted by: Arshifan4life
Two amazing updates glad Arabi are now togeather

thank u :)

Originally posted by: drunkiiebabe
awesome updateloved itcontinue soonthanks for the pm

thanks :))

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Posted: 12 years ago

#535

Originally posted by: chavvi16
what the hell was going on
arhi are not with each other
that mami is being a complete pain
not to forget how shyam is giving something to anji secretly which cant be good for anji for sure
but am glad now arhi have managed to work out their differences
well they just had to right
oh my he wasnt taking care of himself in her absence was he
if he had wouldnt have fainted
uff he needs khushi 24x7 for sure to take care of him make sure he doesnt get out of hand and other things
so what are they gonna do about shyam and mami
glad now even nani and ndadi know what he did to her
cant wait for more
but last part already oh man no fair
hope you continue with something else then

thanks a lot...n no i will be writing more hopefully...soon...Shyam will never change...Do ppl change :))))))))))

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Posted: 12 years ago

#536

Originally posted by: 20839355
Hey dear ws Jst awesome Jst read all.lovely wrk bt I read dat d Nxt part would be d lst part font end it so soon coz Der lots of things uncovered sham truth n anjali baby d second women in his lyf payal n akash wt bout dem n mami n den Dadi it wil b too long if u end it nw update d Nxt soon

i wont end it soon...so dont worry :)))

I will try n update it soon...im so lazy need someone to scream at me to complete...can u do that plzzz.??? lol

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Posted: 12 years ago

#537

Originally posted by: A_R_S
Nice story so far. U have shown a good alternative version how the story of the show could also have gone. U also die justice to all characters especially Arnav, Khushi and Mamiji. Continue soon. And thanx for pm.

thanks a lot for ur kind words...yes trying to conti :))