SS:IPK.Heartbreak.Part 20 on PG 110, THE END

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Frances

@Punkin22

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Posted: 12 years ago

#351

Outstanding update Fuzzy. Dynamic from the beginning. In the first few sentences you outlined perfectly Khushi's heart and soul. Everyone has significance with our Khushi. Even forgotten children.

Oh, I love this Dadi, what a brilliant creative stroke Fuzzy. Bringing a new and unexpected loop into your SS. Superb. I like this NK too, he is more mature...

Arshi first meeting. Arnav just watching her, feeling her before seeing her. Khushi couldn't see him but knew her love was near. Best Rabbe Ve!!! Sentimental and beautiful. They love each other so much; only when you love this deeply can you be hurt this deeply.

Well, Arnav now knows where she is and she isn't coming home. Problem. But ASR with RM and GH will have a plan for sure. They all need Khushi to make their lives filled to the rim. Also, lets not forget about Dadi. She has words of wisdom for our Khushi...

Loved it, marvelous...

Edited by Punkin22 - 12 years ago

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pooja

@sanluvug

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Posted: 12 years ago

#352

awesome update.. how can arnav be quiet without confessing his love for her.. then how will she understand him.. stupid arnav..

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Tamanna Morshed Shamim

@Tamannaus

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Posted: 12 years ago

#353

Loved it ❤️ all the elements I was throbbing for are here. Please continue and put millions of romantic moments in there.🤗

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@Fazila~

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#354

Originally posted by: sanluvug
awesome update.. how can arnav be quiet without confessing his love for her.. then how will she understand him.. stupid arnav..

hes not stupid..hes being cautious...😉

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RareAngel

@RareAngel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#355

Awww such a sweet update Fuzzy!!👏👏👏👏

Keep it up ur keeping the real IPK alive through ur SS's,OS's and FF's...the CV's have lost the plot!😉😆🤣

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#356

man so dadi thinks she is akash's wife well dear its not its your dear grandson arnie's wife
really nk is so right he will shout at her and get angry when he doesnfind her
what do we do with him man
agar aap sudhre nahin naa toh khushi ko hamesha ke liye kho denge samjhe
whats more important your wife or your anger and ego
for gods sake dont be foolish and tell her you love her
man what do we do with this guy huh
cheers for pm

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Fairylights26

@Fairylights26

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Posted: 12 years ago

#357

OK I never thought i'll say this but i lyk Ddi in your fic and it's great that you are exploring a possibility which I am sure lot of us hav been wondering how will Dadi-khushi relationship hav been had they met under different circumstances.😊