The Mirage and Oasis...New FF: Chapter 13 updated - Page 43

beautiful update rima

Tht is beautiful. Thnks for the pm.

😲😲OMG!!! this will be awesome week in Shimla😆😉

They are going to Shimla for a week.. wow Rima just wow...Pls cont..when u get some free time Rima.. I am sure this Shimla trip is going to be super amazing!! Thanks Rima..

interesting turn of events..cant wait to see what happens next..thanks for the PM

👏👏thanks...great job👏👏

Thanks for the PM. Nice. Khushi gets to go with Arnav.

hi receiving ur pm after a long time. So read chapters 6,7 and 8 together. Kushi and Arnav are both consevative right? We can relate to kushi's character very easily - simple, middle class girl, with over-protective DAD and a dotting mother. You dont make her look "extra glossy" or "special" thats what touches our heart. She is attracted to him but knows thats not right - so gets fully engrossed in her work to avoid trouble. The lift encounter i thought is simple incident, but what followed was pretty hillarious - Arnav being scolded by kushi's father.😆 (somehow shashi gupta's image we have doesnt fit in here LOL) But it was a perfect. Poor arnav felt like a teenager! But he also understands the values, and tells her not to late-stay if her father doesnt approve. Hope everyone gets a boss like Arnav. they are going on a weeks' trip?! great writing! keep up the good work.

i finished your true colors FF...loved it!!!

nd m lovin this new FF❤️...finished all 8 chapters today mornin👍🏼...its fantastic👏...hav bookmarked...hopefully u ll update soon 😊!!!

wow nxt shimla track...cant wait 😉!!!