The Mirage and Oasis...New FF: Chapter 13 updated

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@LumosMaxima

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#331

Awwwsum Update Sis..Just Read all the parts in One Go...

Superb..Just Superb.👏 Cont. Sooon. 😊

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cymateli

@cymateli

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Posted: 13 years ago

#332

Poor arnav all scared by the angry man.. I wonder if khushi's dad trust her But a very cute update.. continue soon!! 😃

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Gunjan Mukherjee

@gunjanmkj

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#333

The description of d hug gave such a tingly feeling..
n arnav felt like a teenager in frnt of khushi's dad😆
so both of them r feeling smthn smthn..hmmm

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#334

This was such a cute update.

All girls fear for their father when they do something which he dont like. That fear cannot be anytime changed in her life even when she is married, can she?

Kushi reminded me, here. And I had a lingering smile on my face.

Loved the update.

Thanks for the pm

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advaita

@advaita

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Posted: 13 years ago

#335

amazing update rima di !!! luvly !!! lund d entire story so far !!! all d charecters are moulded so well!!! thnz 4 d pm !!! :) waitin anxiously for the next update!!!

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Preeti

@preetihere

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#336

She felt hot and cold, shy and scared, worried and kind of secure.
Awww first hugs so confusing yet making u want more 😃

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Arnav shrugged, still amazed at being scolded like a gawky teenager who had gone on a date with a girl without the Dad's permission.
i think that's a first for him :))))) Poor guy never imagined when he went all bravely to explain to her father that he too will get scolded😆

If i am not wrong Ford Mustang's Barun's favourite car too? 😲 If so, it was cute of u to add that here 😎

Yeah, yeah control all u want ASR but the tugging at your heart has begun - u wanting to donate more and already hoping she doesn't get scolded further!
Waiting to read what's going on in Khushi;s head now

Edited by preetihere - 13 years ago