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Preethi

@blackdove

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#631

That was a very beautiful story and well paced and written. The cliffhangers and some MUs were scary, honestly. But you brought ArShi through all that, successfully.

The ending was very nice. But i did want you to continue it!

*And somewhere in the middle you did mention that " the honeymoon will be shifted to the last chapters". What about that?😉

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#632

beautiful story!!! loved it.. 😃

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just4this

@just4this

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#633

i came across this story very late . loved all the parts

beautifully written

try and catch ur other stories too

thank u for the wonderful story

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SAM

@kkyajo

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#634

amazing story...u hv a wonderful writting style, briliant...
read all chapters in one go...
loved the way u hv kept their relation from start to end...
sch a gripping story...loved it.

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Archna

@archnahardik123

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#635

Hi I found this story and left every thing to read it fully.

It made me cry many times and let me smile reading about their fight.

You are a marvellous writer and this story is nothing but master piece.

You have written so beautifully. No words to describe how brilliantly you portrait their character.

So like arnav and Khushi of the show and yet so different from them altogether.

Amazed how you bring these different personality together. And made them fell in love.

I too fell in love with them. I wish I could have been there when you write this story and commented on every chapter. There is so much I wanted to share through my comment.

I am glad that I found this beautiful story.

Thanks for writing it. Are you still writing? If yes can you tell me which one.

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Greyasr

@Greyasr

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#636

Ahh really touchy can feel Khushis pain

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napk

@napk

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#637

Beautiful story and I loved every bit of it.

I loved your writing style very different. Keep writing 😊

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Sarah

@ifsaal044

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#638

This was a great story to read. But, I did have one question was Arnav really going around with other girls while married to Khushi or was he putting up a front.

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UV_Arshi

@UV_Arshi

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#639

Hey...recently came across this story and just finished reading it.

It's a lovely story. Loved the gradual development of the relationship between Arnav and Khushi...how they start depending on each other, falling for each other subconsciously. And the date in the end was totally adorable! :)

Really enjoyed reading it! Thanks for sharing!

Edited by UV_Arshi - 10 years ago