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Finally! I'm first YAY!:)
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Hahhaha, he set up camera to watch Sama, my God, Rae, Ayaan is such a sweetheart. You are putting up serious competition between Arnav and Aynu for me. Hmph.
What a great idea, that's what Arnav said, dude you have me blushing like a tamatar right now. God this chapter is so SO nice. I have to, have to read it again :)
And you know I really loved the part, where Ayaan is looking fondly at all the important women in his life, it's highly similar to his father. Sigh. SO beautiful Rae!:)
He had resisted but she had resisted his resistance and insisted on spreading her brand of innocent and unadulterated joy in his bleak life.
^A beautiful line Rae. Exquisite:) And then the lines that follow are so wonderful. A riot of emotions. Lovely lines:)
Synchronised dhak-dhaks, such a beautiful phrase.
And you made them kiss. Thank you!:) Thank you , a LOT, because their almost kisses are becoming a little too annoying , Though no one minds them, I think :P
And yes, the kiss was beautiful. But isn't it obvious, aapne likha aur ArHi ne implement kiya 😆
"Please...yeh shaadi waadi jaldi karvao! I cant wait anymore!"
^Yes, YES, I can't wait too. And boy I love this girl. She says what she wants, so clearly. And the way Aynu was doing whatever it was that he was doing, was ahem, very you know...naughty, just like you said 😆
"Saari bibiyaan aayiyaan
Ayaan ki Sama na aayi!
Othhe kendi thi main barah baje aawaangi
Aithe bajj gayye dhai
Ayaan ki Sama na aayi!"
^And this, holy shit, you are, so, SO creative. Salutes. Mahaan hai aap, this is too good.
I can't stop smiling after this chapter, great work Rae!:)
Edited by mistyrains - 13 years ago
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