❤️ 'We HATE but still LOVE' ❤️ #3

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Posted: 13 years ago

😃 Happy KriYaansh😃 frenzz..

welcum to d thread 3 of

" WE HATE BUT STILL LOVE"

hehe i got banner in my 3rd thread😆 & all thanks to kinjal 4 dis qki meri author ko toh kuch ata hi nahi..bina banner , bina intro , bina Cs ke hi mujhe shuru kar diya tha..i thot 10-20 ppl will only read me.. aftr hr dis bevkoofi well uski bhi galti nahi dat tym she was a newbie she knew nothing abt IF all credits to me dat she bcame Goldie 2day!!

well enuf of my bak-2 now cuming to point..

😃hey i m vry happy dat i have got my 3rd thread...😃

party tymzzz...

lets dance!! in d beat of ...hmm.. sab apne-2 favorite song par kar lo yaar...😆

thanx 2 all d readrs who have suportd me thru all d thick & thins..

who have comntd on evry chaptr so beautifully wid a extreme gud length dat it brought 64 inches smile on my writrs face..(oh i think hr lips mst have got crakd by now by smiling so much)😆 😆

In 19 Chaptrs i finishd thread 1 but in thread 2 i have gaind a lot momentum & i cumpltd it in 11 chaptrs itslf!! So goood velocity..(patting my back 😉 ) .

well i dont need to say dat d 80% credit 4 my dis success goes to all my dear readrs...& 20% to my stupid writer too..

I thank all of u 4m d core of my heart...

Special thanx to:

1.Kinjal-d tik-tok queen jiske tik-tok ke bina koi chaptr update nahi hota...

2.Asma- who was 1st to join dis FF & has comnd till now on evry part.

3.Shivs-who is not seen now-days yet she has been always hlpful to my writer.

4.cherry- cutest comnt queen!! hr comnts r vry pretty!!

5.Yogini-d emotionful decoratd comntzz queen..

6.Aroma- who sumtyms evn comnts bigger den d update..(missing u)

7.Snigdha-who gives vry encouraging & motivating comnts..

8.Konpal-queen of colorful decorative long comtzz.

9poppy-who's busy so reads & comnts short on my scrap book(missing u)

10Aisha-who is vry desprate 4 evry update & is wid us 4m long tym..

11.Anki & Sweets - joyful long comntzz queen..

12..twinkle-who has been supporting me 4 long..

13.Shenz-she gives 1 of d prettiest comnt.

14. Shaffy-who's busy wid exams still find tym to read me & comnt on it.

15.Bhairavi-She joind us late but gives me cutee-2 comnt..

16.Crazysky & Eyesfriendly -whose cute lil comntzz r love to read!!

17.Annie-highlights d most enjoyable part of updates..

18.namrata-1st swaronian to join my FF & who gives pretty comnts..

19. Puja & Misha-gives sweet-2 comtzz.

20.jiya, jhanvi,kittu- whose comnts r inspiring & motivating to read!!

21.preety, sweety,shweta &cookie- who all comnt on evry part..

22.rishita who has rejoind me aftr long yet she supportd a lot..

23.varsha,awesomeabshu,deetha,palak,spicyray,srujana shona & all d readrs!!

sorry agar kisi ka naam bhul gayi toh me ear holding!! excitmnt mein galtiyan ho jati hain..

but i thank each & evry1 whole heartdly...

4 ur love, affection & support u gave me in dis 2 threads!!

hope 2 get more of love & success in dis new thread!! hope my momntum evn more increses here!!

❤️Love u loads .!!❤️

So my writr will give treat on my behalf as a anothr update now!!

❤️wid Love❤️

😊"We hate but still Love"😊

-Neeti...

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Neeti

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Posted: 13 years ago

HAPPY kRIYAANSH..

Chaptr-36

*Sw's room*

Sw*slf talk* : iska matlab kriya ka accident hua 1 & half years back & Mahraaj Arya singh wud have found hr aftr accident , he wud have adoptd kriya gave hr new name, & told hr sum random story.Iska matalb Rr hi kriya hai.. haan Sw Rr hi kriya hai..

All of a sudden his eyez got wet getting dis joyous news .his fevr vanished on getting dis merryful news dat kria is back aftrall he had waitd long to get dis news.He was vry happy, he wantd to share all dis wid Rey, but cant coz Rr wud nevr allow him go out in dis condtion so he thot of a plan.

He acted sleeping ovr pillow placed ovr Rr's lap.

Rr (smilingly) :chalo achha hai, princess Rr ke kahani sunkar ye so toh gaye.

She placed his head gently ovr another pillow on bed & covrd him with blanket & left out to take dinner 4 hrslf.

As soon as she went to kitchen, Sw got up out of d blanket, walkd to d door of his room saw Rr cuming out of d kitchen holding a plate 4 dinner in hr hands he quickly ran back to d bed & buried himself under d blanket, Rr came towards his room, ppepd Sw 4m d window & found him sound sleep,she smiled & walkd ahead to hr room.

Aftr she left,Sw peepd out of blanket saw hr going towards hr room, & slowly woke up out of bed, as soon as Rr entrd hr room & closed d door, he came out of his room & wituot making any noise steppd out of d house.

* D same place where Reyam sat on prevalentine nyt *

I hope u all remebr it, it was a goround , near to tea-shop Rey has parkd his vehicle, & reyam were sitting upon d top-front of d car.

As dat day in same position,same place & same way Reyam r sitting.

Rey:Bol q bulaya mujhe wo bhi itni raat ko??

Sw:What else can we discuss in nyt except..

Reyam(2gethr): CHICKS!!

Rey:U mean Sharon, q fir se tum odno ki fyt toh nahi ho gayi??

Sw:Not Sharon,its Kriya!!

Rey:Kriya??

Sw:yaa.. Rr..kriya..

Rey:hey what r u saying Rr , kriya , jo bhi kehna hai clearly keh.

Sw:tu sahi tha rey, aur mai galat, tere dil ki awaaz sahi thi.

Rey giving a prplxd look.

Sw:Rr hi kriya hai..

Rey:What?? I mean I know par how u came to know, did she tell u??& if yes den u askd him y she behavd as strangr infront of us 4 past 3-4 months.

Sw:Hey wait, she didn't tell me anything coz she dosnt remebrs anything.

Rey: I cudnt get u??

Den Sw tells him d entire story which Rr had told hr.

Rey:Iska matalb, humare clg ka losses mein jana, Mr.Raajvansh ka humare clg ko hlp karna aur uske baad apni daughter ka humare clg mein admission karvana ye sab Univrseji ki setting thi mujhe keri kria se wapis milane ke liye..

Sw:Sirf tujhe hi nahi hum sabko qki kria humari bhi toh bahut achhi friend thi..

Reyam's eyez got wet, Rey quickly hugged Sw vry tightly , Sw hugged him back.

Reyam breaking d hug say:Our kria is back dude,she's back…

Rey:Par Rr ne tujhe apni story sunayi kyun, I mean..

Sw:coz I got fever aftr our rain dance & dr. said ki agar mera proper take care ho,& if I take complete rest 2nyt so I may get well by 2moro morning itslf.

Rey(with concern):Sw tujhe fever hai

Sw:Hai nahi tha..

Rey:Tha matlab??

Sw:tha matlab ye ki kriya ne mera itne ache se dhyaan rakha meri itni sevaa ki, ki mera fevr thik hogaya, aur issi bhi jada kria ke comeback ki news ne mujhe alryt kar diya..

Rey:ok u had fevr dats all ryt but story??

Sw:haan wo actually mujhe neend nahi aa rahi thin a so kria was telling me story , patting my head.

Rey:u mean when u don't get sleep kria tells u story patting ur head.

Sw could smell d fumes of slight jelousy arousing in rey's heart, so now he thought of sum shaitaani.

Sw:yaa & dat too by placing my head upon hr lap.

Rey:Upon hr LAP.. kria itne achhe se khyaal rakhti hai tera..(baby face)

Sw(controlling laugh):Haan.. kria mera bahut achhe se khyaal rakhti hai..

Rey's sad baby face changes to super sad baby face & seeing dis Sw bursts into laughter.

Rey:Ab tu has q raha hai.

Sw:rey dekh tera chehra burning wid jelousy , kitna possessive hai yaar tu kria ko lekar,& worry not sirf aaj hi kria mujhe story suna rahi thi aur uske lap aur mere head ke beech 1 pillow tha, ab khush.

A smile of relief spread ovr rey's face.

Rey:Sw tujhe yaad hai around 1 & half years back, on prevalentine nyt hum isi jagah aise hi car par baith kar mere kria se milne ke liye plans bana rahe the, aur usi din meri kria mujhse dur chalegi gayi thi aur aaj isi jagah par meri kria mujhe wapis mil gayi..

Sw:haan sachme tujhe teri kria mil gayi dude…

Rey:what??

Sw:Leave what & look back .

Rey:hey kria , yaha !!!

She cums closer to dem.

Rr(in full on anger):humne aapse kya kaha tha Sw raat ke 12 baje bimaar halat mein tea-stall ke samne rey se gossip karne ko ryt??

Sw:Yes. I mean NO..

Rr:So what did I say u??

Sw:To take rest.

Rr:So is dis d way u r taking rest.

Sw:Sorry kr.. I mean Rr.

Rr:What sorry haan, dere I m so worried 4 u dat I cudnt sleep & here u r,What so imp to discuss dat u cant evn wait 4 u getting well by 2moro morning.

Rey:Wo Rr ismein Sw ki galti nahi hai.

Rr:Exactly hum Sw ko q dant rahe hai, ismein Sw ki kya galti hai, aapne hi zaroor Sw ko bulaya hoga yaha, aur Sw who's ever ready 2 do anything 4 frenzz wud have cum widout thinking anything abt himself.

Rr(continued):Rey aapko pata bhi h,Sw is has such high fevr aur is halat mein aapne unhe yahan bulaya hai , wo bhi itni raat ko, u evn care 4 sum1, I am ryt 4m beginning u r really careless 4 urslf & 4 evryelse.. & she continued..

But it was strange to c evn Rr/kria was contihuasly scolding rey, but rey wid a lot of essence in his eyez was quietly listenig to hr evry word, widout any trial to defend himself..

Rey*slf tak*:Meri typicall Battcutter, bina kuch jane samjhe bas bolti rehti hai, par tumhe aaj jo bolna hai kria bol lo, I don't care ,what I care is I m seeing u speaking infront of me, near me, wid me, & 2day I got link to get u back 4evr..(a smile of hope & cheer spread on his face).

Rr(wawing hr hand ):Mr.Caresless I m talking 2 u!!

Rey:yaa..

Rr:What yaa?? Ab aap humein aise hi dekhte rahenge ya apni car mein humein clg campus bhi karenge, otherwise lets hier a taxi Sw.

Rey:Ya ofcorse I'll drop u guyzz, cum lets sit inside d car.

Sw:hey wait,Rr tum apni car mein nahi ayi??

Rr:No, I came by taxi coz agar hum car mein aate toh Pitaaji ko pata chal jata ki hum itni raat ko ghar se bahar ja rahe hai, u know na Sw my outing is banned late nyt.

Sw:yaa, lets go!!

*Inside d car*

All the 3 sat inside d car, wid Reyam on front seat, wid rey driving d car & Rr on back seat.

Rr recivd Sam's sms informing hr dat 4 d work he came to India has been done, now both of dem startd text chatting thru cell.

Cold breeze blowing out entrd d car,thru window Rr's silky hair beagn drizzling ovr hr face,she got disturbd a bit, rey noticd it thru rear-view mirror of d car.

Rey:u can close d window.

Rr:No its ok, I like such cold breeze aftr rainfall, let be.

She was still busy in chatting wid Sam.

Her curly brown hairs wid choclate brown shade were constantly touching hr cheeks, wid hr fingrs trying to pin dem back, how can dis innocent beauty go un-noticed by our romeo rey, he was drooling hr image in d rear-view mirror of car.

Wid BG:O ho.hoo...O ho Ooo..

Sw noticed d single sided LL in b/n KR,he coughd a bit to bring rey back to his senses but no use he was cumpltly lost in kria.

Sw: rey dekh ke road par concentrate kar dude warna hum HOSTEL nahi HOSPITAL pahunchege..

He smirks.

Rey (out of senses):yaa.. kya karu dude baatcutter = distraction, how easily she distracts me.

Rr:hey guyzz what r u both talking abt??

Sw:nothing jst remebring our 2day's rain dance.

Rr : yaa it was rili awesome I enjoyed a lot, but u know what I jst wonder I mean u all r great dancrs of St.Louis so u all doing hip-hop is ok, but me I nevr dance excpt slow-dance of royal parties how was I able to dance wid u,dat too hip-hop street dance.

Sw*slf talk*:Ab tumhe kaise batao kria ki tum kitni brilliant dancer ho.

Sw:it happens when we r happy & in joyous mood we often do those things which we have nevr done in life.

Rr:perhaps u r ryt.

& dey go on..

Next morning

*St.Loius*

Neha:Babu , tumne tayyari toh ki hai na, dekho is test mein tumhe paas hona hai aur wo bhi bina cheating ke.

Viky:Don't worry kagu, dekhna is test mein mai, merit-list mein aunga..

All:What??

Nil: Dude itna hi fake na jitna log catch kar sakein.

All smirk.

Swmaira cum runnig.

Rr:Thankgod Sw hum late nahi hue.

Taani:bhai aap theek toh hai na.

Sw:haan Taani mai bilkul theek hun,aur Rr ke hote hue mujhe kuch nahi ho sakta.

Sharey cum.

Sharey:All d bst guyzz so lets go now to classroom.

Dey give dier surprise test .

Profeesor collects answer sheet & moves out.

Shr:Finally test is over,& it was good.

Vish:Yaa man my test was also good.

Rr:haan surprise test keh kar itna dara diya tha par test to easy tha.

Nil:Aur viky top kar raha hai na tu is test mein.

Viky chal na dude now stop teasing maine nursey mein bhi kabhi top nahi kiya hoga toh kya MBA ke final year ke test mein top karunga.

Bharat:Chalo yaar canteen chalte hai.

Neha:Haan chalo.

Reyam: guyzz we'll cum dere aftr few minutes.

All:Ok.

*Rehrsal hall*

Reyam enter & say dier signature dialogue looking @ kria's pic.i.e. Hello kria.

Rey:Kya kismat hai humari yaar,kria humare saamne hai, aur hum yaha uski photo ko hello keh rahe hai, y cant we jst go & say hr dat she's not Rr but our kria, my Kria.

Sw:Wo isliye Mr.Romeo coz evn if way hr she'll not belive us.

Rey:par q?? we have proofs, we'll show hr footlosse photographs,rose day's photo, hr all records as St.Loius' student & as AJS.

Sw:Proof toh humne palace mein bhi dekha tha, hr passport ,visa ID of London Univrsity, photos wid Raajvansh family & dat too since childhood.

Rey:So whats so special abt photo any1 can edit d photos 2day, unhe kria ke bachpan ke photos mil gayi hogi aur unlogo ne use apni family photos mein include kar liya hoga.

Sw:yahi toh mai tujhse keh raha rey dat fake proof ,evidences everything can be easily creatd 2day, aur agar hum Rr ko aaj ye kehte hai ki wo Princess Rr raajvansh nahi balki kria ghai hai toh wo humari baat q manegi, q wo apne un pitaaji par shak karegi jise wo khud se bhi jada pyaar karti hai.

Walking ahead he continued: tujhe yaad hai , jab us din Rr par attack hua tha, uske baad usne kaha tha ki uski jaan sirf isliye imp hai qki uske dad uske bina nahi reh sakte she loves hr dad most in dis world as b4 1 & half years back she lovd hr mom.she cant hear anything against hr dad.

Rey:But Sw Mr.Raajvansh ne aisa q kyun hoga, agr kisi accdent ke baad unhe kria mili bhi toh unhe kria ko uski mom ke paas pahuncha dena chahiya tha , y he made hr his daughter.

Sw:mai bhi kal se yahi sonch raha hun, rey kahin aisa toh nahi ki Mr.Raajvansh kria ka kisi kaam ke liye use kar rahe ho, waise bhi ye Raajvansh kinhdom ki story bahut hi complex aur dangerous hai, I fear dat dey r not using our 4 dier some means.

Rey:Hone ke liye toh kuch bho ho sakta hai dude, par ab hum kya karein??

Sw:Any how we have to find what exactly happned aftr kria left Mumbai, how she lost hr memory..par hum ye sab find kaise karein??

Rey:Hey univrseji ab aap hi kuch way bataiye..

All of a sudden nil entrd.

Nil:Hey dude, I have 2 invite u 4 sumthing.

Reyam:What??

Nil:Rr's birthday party.

Rey:Rr's b'day!!

Nil:Haan , but listen it's a surprise party princi ko kuch pata nahi chalna chahiya, hr bestie Samraat is organizing it 2moro, so he contactd me aftrall is clg mein Rr ka sabse achha friend toh mai hi hun na..So both of u have to cum 2moro evning, tym & venue I'll msg u later on ok mai chalta hun I have to invite evry1.. but remebr it's a surprise 4 princi..

He leaves.

Sw:Kahi ye Univrseji ka reply toh nahi hai tere recent paryer ka.

Rey:yaa dude , ho sakta hai , is party6 mein humein kuch pata chal jaye , coz Samraat is organizing dis party so all d royal ppl , including all d relatives of Raajvansh family & friendz will cum dere , ho sakta hai hume wahan kuch pata chal jaye..

Sw:yaa…

A servant of clg entrd: Reyaansh sir, ye Talent contest ke winnrs painting hai, Sharon madam ne kaha tha ki ye paintings hum rehrsal hall mein laga dein.

Rey:Achha aap ise yaha rakh dijiye hum dono laga denge.

He nods & keeping d painting he leaves.

Sw moves ahead to paintings .

Sw:Rey look @ dis, tune aur kria ne same scene paint kiya hai.

Rey( nearing to Sw):Show..

Sw:kahin is sketch ke boy aur gal tu aur kria toh nahi??

Rey smilingly nods.

Sw:Hmm.. so dis d bst scene of ur life aur ho bhi q na, aftrall ismein teri Baatcutter tujhe kiss jo kar rahi hai..(patting rey's back)Good going haa dude.. kissing aur wo bhi 1 & half years back..

Rey:Ab kria ki painting yaha hang kar dete hai aur meri painting store mein dal dete hai..

Sw:Store room mein..

Rey:yaa coz my heart says 1 day'll cum jab kria khud ye painting rehsal all mein apni painting ke baju mein hang karegi..

Both smile & hang kria's painting on wall.

To be continued…

Ok so a long update as a treat 4 hitting century on 3^rd thread.

I know u all r missing sum KR special momnts as many of u said in ur comnts , ther4 I have plannd sum KR momnts in 4 nxt update..i'll try to give 1 more update b4 I leave 4 to Assam 4 my engineering studies, & if not den I'll meet u all aftr I reach IIT Guwhati(Assam) & get settld dier so it'll take nearly 1-2 weeks, dere4 I'll try my bst dat b4 leaving to give 1 more update..Lets c I m able or not..

Ok so enuf of my bak-2 now plzz comnt soon , im waiting anxiously 4 ur precious comnts..

Love u all..

Oh precap (I jst 4got)

Precap:

Rr:Is he in d party.

Sam:if u have some othr topic den we can talk otherwise lets go & meet our othr friends 4m London.

Rr:ok baba, I wont say but u have to propose hr soon.

Jia flew to dem,& strtd flickering hr wings.

Sam:I think jia wants to take u sumwhere..

Rr:yaa.. chaliye jia ab aapka surprise kya hai ye bi dekh lete hai..

kitna bada precap (hwww..)😆

Edited by hARSHA_Neeti - 13 years ago

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Neeti

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Posted: 13 years ago

Happy Kriyaansh friendzz

Chapter-32

*Swamaira's house*

Sw's room.

Sw took bath & is infront of d mirror, combing his hairs(zulfien).

Sw(shouting): Rr wake up!! We'll get late 4 d clg.

Rr's room

Rr(4m hr bed shouting back):Sw bas 2 minute.

(plzz c ,hey dis is d link of hr room i dont y but its not getting uploaded)

http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_C4L8XftIrHU/S7gmOzDdYMI/AAAEyo/qZSLi_bdV1Q/s1600/Girls-Bedroom-and-Living-room-3.jpg )

decoratd wid d following teddy racks & teddy collections.

Sw:No Rr , uth jao warna yaad hai na kal maine kya kiya tha..

Rr:Achha baba uth rahein hai, plzz kal ki tarah chillanna mat.

Sw:Dats like a gud gal .

He smiles.

Sw:ok get ready soon , I m waiting here 4 u.

Rr: yaa..

She cums out of d blanket , streches hr arms wide wid a cute smile & all of a sudden notices sumthing which multiplies d length of hr smile'

Rr(jumping out of joy): Jia'

Jia who was sitting on hr room's window flew to Rr on hearing hr cute-shrill voice.

Rr caressd Jia's soft feathrs.

Rr:Jia aap yaha kaise aayi??

In response Jia droppd a small card on Rr's lap which Jia had grippd in its beak.

Rr(picking up d card):ye kay???

She oppend it.

D chit read: Evrything in dis universe whom u love , care & need will never remain away 4m u'Dats my promise to u princess.. Have a happy tym wid Jia'

Rr twinkled hr eyez wid a blush, joy & smile on reading d note'

*on d way 2 clg*

Sw: thanx Rr.

Rr:4 what Sw??

Sw: 4 .. umm..(extending his ryt hand) Friends!!

Rr(wid surprise): we r living 2gethr 4m many days & 2day u r doing friendship wid me, anything special??

Sw:yaa.. d joy we had yesterday as friends..

Rr:Ruinig ur noodles!!

Sw:No sharing my icecream.

Rr smild , & shaking hands wid Sw.. ya friends Mr.philosophical.

Sw: yaa Miss.Attitude.

Both smild & entrd d clg.

*Classroom*

All d Loiusians sitting on dier seat coupld accept Sharon & rey.

Swamaira & Taani entrd.

Sw walkd & sat nxt to Sharon.

Taani walking rapidly to catch up seat nxt to rey & den suddenly bubble taani appeard.

Buble taani:Taani dheere chal, nahi toh roz ki tarah gir jayegi kal hi nayi sandal li hair oz-2 kitni nayi sandal legi.

Taani nods & reduces hr speed.

B4 taani cud reach rey Rr sttepd to rey, she didn't know y is she trying to ovrtake taani & get seat nxt to rey but it was jst hr heart said & she did widout evn realizing y is she yearning to do dis.

Taani:ye lo isne fir se baazi mar li.. par Krishna ji net oh kaha tha ki rey sirf kriya ke hain, fir humesha aisa kyu ho jata hai ki rey & Rr paas a jate hai..

Rey(leaning to Rr's ear):So princess sitting bside me, actually tried hard to get dis seat(naughty smile).

Rr(trying lame excuse): wo.. jst coz dis seat was vacant!! & nothing else. No trials to get d seat.

Rey:Rili??

Rr: yaa & also coz , I hav to say u sumthing.

Rey(in a romantic whisper):I m always ready to listen.

Rr tunred hr face 2wards rey, wid hr eyez wide open glittering as stars , wid white shine of moonlite & spark of sun beams more dan enuf of 4 rey to fall in love wid hr dis beautiful eyez again .

Rey slowly sinking in hr eyez was brought aback to dis world by hr sweet-shrill voice saying:Thank you.

Rey(blinking his eyez):What?? Thank you??

Rr:yaa Thank you..

Rey:4 what??

Rr: 4 promising me to give everything I love in dis universe..

Rey:Oh so u likd my gift.

Rr:NO!!

Rey:U didn't like it stil u said thanx.

Rr (hitting him sliglty on his head):Stupid I jst loved it , I was missing hr like hell & u brought it jst..(cut off by rey)

Rey:jst 2 c dis dazzling smile & shinig eyezz..

LLHH was jst to begin but unfortunately professer entrd saying:Assignment cumpltd students!!

Most of dem:Yes sir!!

Pr:ok den submit it 1 by 1 & I'll chek it here itslf.

Niky bro as usual havnt cumpltd startd praying t God 4 sum miracle.

God heard dier prayer & jst b4 dier turn bell rang, niky took breath of relief!!

*Coridor*

Loiusans walking.

Viky:y's dere crowd near notice board.

Rey:coz holidays ka notice laga hai.

Nil:wow dude holidays kitne din ki??

Shr:holidays par kyun??

Rey(facing nil): for 1 week ( & den facing to Sharon) qki maine petition file file kit hi dat we r tird of so many wrks & assignments so we need break & petition is answrd!!

Bharat: Ab 1 hafte tak ache se araam karunga aur garage jaunga.

Nil:Mai toh clubs jaonga..

Vilky:Mai toh apni diwaani ke sath..

Rey:hey stop day dreaming guyzz pehle puri new toh suno..

All :kaho.

Rey:Aftr d hlidays we have surprise test in which any qsn 4m any subject will b askd 4m d chapters which we have studied in in dis month.

Viky:Lo de di na bad news.

Vish:U mean holidays nahi study leave'

All:hmm'(making sad baby faces)

*Swamaira's house*

Evening 5:00 pm

*Drawing room*

Rr: New friend!!

Sw(cuming out of his room): yaa new friend!!

Rr:I m missing sumthing??

Sw:What , u have brought all most ur entire palace to dis house & now what r u missing??

Rr:A swing inside d house.

jst d swing is inside d house

Sw(wid a questiong face) :SWING inside d house.

Rr:yaa c dis , u have jst fix it here in dis corner.

Sw:tum na Rr ho 22 yrs ki par behave 2 yr ke kid ki tarah karti ho.

Rr:haan aur aap 22 yrs ke hokar 220 yrs ke saints ki tarah batien karte ho, common Sw its fun to b like yaar, chalo ab jaldi se ye jhula yaha hang kardo, I m bringing hammer & nails 4 d task.

Sw adjusts d stool , stands ovr it.

Rr:Daro mat , I m holding d stool tightly , aap nahi giroge.

Sw smiles & Rr hands ovr him d nail , hammer , d curvd iron bar requird 4 d task.

Sw:jhula do !!

Rr lifts d swing up wid a lot of effort & both hlping each othr hang it 4m d celing of d room.

Sw (stepping down 4m d stool):Done!! Anything else princess!!

Rr smiling: No, ab hum jhula jhulenge..

She happily sits ovr d swing & wid Sw's hlp starts swinging.

Rr:Aap bhi ayie na Sw sath mein jhulenge.

Sw: kitna chota sa jhula hai..

Rr:O ho, toh aap aur hum bhi toh itne lean & thin hai araam se jhulenge (saying dis she pulls Sw & makes him sit nxt to hr).

Both start swinging & enjoying.

Ting tong

Rr: job hi hai andar ajayiye , door is unlokd.

Loiusans(entering):Surprise!!

Sw:guyzz tum sab 1 sath all of a sudden!!

Viky:Dude surprise all of a sudden hi diya jata hai..

Sw:yaa , cum sit.

Rr:Sharon!! Plzz don't stare us like dis, wo humne aaj hi swinh fix kiya na isliye we were swinging 2gethr & me & Sw have jst bcum friends recently dats 2day morning itslf.

Swamaira stud up 4m d swing.

Sw:guyz please sit.All of dem get seatd in d sofa.

Rey:hey what was dat dude, small board outside d house labled "SwaMaira's place".

Sw:Nothing jst Swayam + Ramaira =SwaMaira, new friends!!

Nil:Oh so princi made a new friend.

Rr:yaa..

Shr:Rr, Sw y is d entire hostel so calm ??

Sw:Aaj se holidays ahi isliye sare hostlrs outing par gaye hai,& surprisingly is tym pure St.Louis campus mein humare alawa aur koi nahi hai , infact Principal sir & teachrs who reside hear r also in outing.

Viky:wow dats fantastic , pure clg campus mein sirf haum log hai ab kuch dhammal karte hai??

All of a sudden dey heard a loud sound which terrified evry1 excpt Rr.

Bharat:ye kaisi awaaz thi.

Rr: guyzz all of u plzz sit here , don't step outdoor I m cuming within few minutes, lagat hai unhe bhi pata chal gaya ki hostel campus aaj koi nahi hai..

She rushes to hr room & is back within 7 minutes but now she's cumpltly dressd up in black (trouser + skinfitting top) wid a bullet proof jacket , hanging a balck stiff bag @ hr back .

All of dem stared @ hr 4m toe to tip of hr head wid a big shock .

Again d same sound echoed in d hostel campus.

Rr:guyzz plzz stay inside, let me handle it.. plzz no1 will cum out of d house!!

rey:Rr but it sounds like bullet firing, how can we let u face it all alone.

Rr(wid disgust): plzz rey try & undrstand, i'll hnadle it, pitaaji told u all na dat im well traind 4 all dis, if u'll cum out it will create more complications so plzz stay inside & lemme go!!

Nil & Sw:but Rr we cant let u..

Rr:Trust me guyzz nothing will happen , i warn u all once more no1 will come out.

Sw: Rr is u have revolver (pointing to d revolvr fixd in hr waist belt).

Rr:relax Sw, licensed hai ,hum sirf ise self defnce ke liye use karte hai.. ok I m going & plzz no1 will step out.

Saying dis she steps out & locks d door 4m outside.

She lowrs down d bag she's hanging , takes out a electric machine , ordrs two gaurds to wrap d entire outr walls of d house wid wires attachd to d electric machine, dey do d job quikly , she switches on d machine.

Rr:Dekhiye is wire karan ghar ke pure diwaron par electric current hai , isliye plzz aap mein se koi walls ko mat chhuna .

Rr(to gaurds @ d door): suno aap dono , door par hi rahenge aur ye dhyaan rakhenge ki anadar jitney bhi log hai unmein se koi bahar na aye.

jo log anadar hai unhe inform kar dijiye current ke bare mein , hum unki life ke sath koi risk nahi le sakte.

Gaurds: par raajkumaari ji agar aapko humari zaroorat padi toh bhi hum..

Rr:toh bhi aap dono yaha se nahi hilenge, agar humari jaan bhi chali jaye fir bhi nahi.. aap log yahi khade ho kar humre frenzz ko guard karenge.

Gards:Raajkumaari ji..

Rr:ye humare ordrs hai..

Dey nod.

Rr calld the 20 gaurds of d day shift thru cell to cum here urgently, while she had now 20 gaurds wid hr of day nyt shift.

Rr took a deep breath & diald a no.

Rr(thru hr cell): Where have dey reachd.

Guard(on d cell phone):raajkumari ji , wo log abhi hostel campus enter kar rahe hai..hum koshish kar rahe hai unhe rokne ki par wo..(cutoff by Rr).

Rr:Aane dijiye unhe humne tayyari kar li hai apni suraksha ki.

All d while Loiusans who have arranged demselves d two window panes were staring @ Rr , glaring hr actions , wid shok & horror.

Dey arrivd & d fight began, all d gaurds trying to protect Rr 4m d gang of killers. 1 among dem reachd Rr & tried to give hr a punch but b4 dat Rr caught hold of his fist , twisted his wrist , & turning him round made him fall on d floor , beagan hitting him wid kicks , by dat tym another 1 came & tried to hit Rr's head wid a iron rod, Rr cud smell d danger 4m behind, she moved aside & d fellow fell upon d already fallen 1 hitting him wid d rod. Rr left dem & movd ahead to handle othr rouges.

All d while She fought Loisans kept staring @ hr widout evn blinking dier eyez, shock, terror was prevailing inside d hose & fyt , bloodshed, bullet fire was prevailing ioutside d house.

All d gaurds & Rr wore bullet proof jacket so no1 was hurt thru bullets.

Aftr a long run many of d killer gang & sum gaurds were injurd, othrs were still fighting.

1 among dem trapped Rr, holding a knife (dat murder knife in his hand).

Rr (pointing revolvr towards him):Age mat badhna warna hum..

Gang man(GM): kya karengi raajkumaari ji , itni nazuk kalayi se goli chalayengi..

He steppd ahead.

Rr(wid a anger ):humne kaha age mat badho !! warna tumhare liye bilkul sahi nahi hoga.

GM:Himmat hai goli chalane kit oh chaliye.. hum bhi dekhe 1 raajkumaari goli chlate kaisi lagti hai.

Rr*slftalk* : himmat toh itni hai, ki revolvr ki puri 6 goliyon tumhare sar par utar dun, par hum ye nahi chte ki humare hatho kisi ka murder ho. Hey nature mom ,plzz hlp kya karein if I don't shoot him , he'll stab me.. eithr I have to die or he have to .. koi toh rasta hoga jisse hum ise mare bina hi khud ko bacha lein..

*inside d house*

Rey:kitne hlpless hai hum wahan Rr ki life danger main hai aur hum yahan sirf use chup-chap khade hokar dekh rahein hai..

Nil:yaa dude 1^st tym in life im feeling so hlpless.

Sw:par kar bhi kya sakte hai, samne do gaurds kahde hai hume rokne ke liye, aur agar window panes ya door ko tod kar bahar jana chahe toh wo bhi nahi kar sakte sabme electric current hai..

Back to Rr.

D gangman steppd ahead ,Rr steepd back, he again steppd ahead .

Rr taking a sep back again: hum akhri baar keh reh age mat badho..

D GM wid evil smile steppd ahead & Rr wid hlplessness steppd back.

He tepd ahead, she steppd back & den he's jst about to stab hr'

To be continued soon'.

I know aise cliffhanger mein hang karne ke liye aap sabko mujhe shoot karne ka man kar raha hoga.. but chill guyzz I'll continue soon'

plzz comnt i m waiting anxiously 4 ur precious comnts...dey rili mean a lot to me...😊

p.s.plzz read my below post also.. plzz plzz read it..

Edited by hARSHA_Neeti - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

Ok so lets begin now..

Chapter-34

* At d exit of Swamaira's house*

Sam, Rr & Sw coming out of d house.

Sam:ok princi, take care of urslf (patting Sw's sholder) & let dis man live in peace, don't experiment ur abnormal adventures on him, u saw how he was scared yesterday..

Rr (giggling): ha. Ha.. ha.. don't worry abt him(placing hr hand around Sw's sholder) I'll take care of him too.

Sam(shaking hands wid Sw):ok den I m leaving..All d bst to both of u 4 ur surprise test… do well.. byee…

Sw:thanx dude, byee..

Rr:Sam, b4 leaving 4m india u r coming 1s again to meet me okay..

Sam:As u say princess, do u think I have courage to say NO 2 ur orders.

Rr smiles.

Rr (moving close to sam whispers): propose hr soon, my heart says she'll definetly say yes.

Sam: I m going byeee princi ...(wawing his hands)

Rr:byeee, humne jo kaha wo karna zaroor.

He leaves, Swamaira enter d house.

Sw:chalo libray chalte hai wahan prepration better hogi.

Rr nods.

Ok guyz I m skipping d exam prepration part.

All d Loiuns prepare thru-out d holidays 4 d surprise test.

1 week later.

*Swamaira's house*

Evening 5pm.

Rr cuming out of hr room to drawing room.

Rr:hey Sw, aap theek toh hai na.

Sw:haan mai theek hun.

Rr:but I heard u sneezing(touching his 4head) kahin aapko bukhaar toh nahi.

Sw:Nahi, princi mai theek hun , wo bas thoda sa cold & cough hai, nothing 2 worry!!

Rr:okay..

She sat near d window luking out, placing hr fist below her chin.

Sw: kya hua bahar kyun dekh rahi ho?

Rr:Nothing jst watching dis beautiful rain.

Sw lookd @ hr innocent eyes, which were earnestly urging to go out in d rainy season & enjoy d monsoon.

Sw caught hold Rr's wrist & liftd hr up.

Rr raised hr eyebrows indicating what??

Sw: we r going out.

Rr:But why??

Sw:coz humne test ki sari prepration kar li hai, aur yahan kisi ka dil kar raha barish ki pyaari si boondun ko ji bhar ke enjoy karne ka..

Rr:par aapko kaise..

Sw: u r eyes say so.

Rr*slf talk* aaj tak aisa koi nahi tha jo humare dil ki baat bina kahe hi humare aankhon se padh le, par Sw ne toh aise jaan liya jaise wo humare bahut close ho.

By d tym she was busy in hr self talk, Sw dragged hr out of d house.

Rr:par Sw aapko toh cold hai na agar aapki tabiyat kharaab ho gay toh?

Sw:O ho, Rr I m fine, aur ab toh dekho barish bhi band ho gayi hai, ab toh hum walk par ja sakte hai na..

Rr:R u sure ki aapko kuch nahi hoga?

Sw:110% sure.

Rr:ok den, lets go.

Dey start 4 walk.

Rr:Wait a sec,Sw kyun na hum cycle par chalein.. aa. I mean cycle race.

Sw:Cycle race?? umm.. hmm.. okay.

Rr:par apke paas toh 1 hi cycle hai aur humare paas toh cycle hai hi nahi..

Sw:yaa.. what 2 do now??Let me think sumthing(2day sumthing unusual was happening with Sw, he wanted to fulfill evry wish of Rr as if sum old-strong bond was compelling him to do all these) Hey don't worry , we'll borrow a cycle 4m any boy of the hostel.

Rr:if u r borrowing ,den borrow 2 cycles.

Sw: 2 for whom??

Rr:Aapki behen… Taani, hum use bhi le chalte hai apne sath

Sw:taani aur wo bhi cycle race?? princi, wo theek tarike se chal bhi nahi paati , cycling kya karegi, even I doubt ki use cycling aati bhi hai ya nai aur agar aati bhi hogi toh cycle race toh wo kabhi nahi kar payegi.

Rr:yaa u r ryt, she falls frequently while walking so cycling…

Sw:ok so leave her, I m bringing cycle u jst wait here.

Rr smilingly nods.

*Singhania house*

* rey's room*

Tring-tring..

Rey:hello, Sharon.

Shr:hello rey.. wassup??

Rey:nothing , jst now cumpltd studies now standing @ d balcony of d room.

Shr:hmm.. same here.. jst want to spend sum tym with u 2day.

Rey: Ok den, close ur eyes 4 few minutes & wen u open dem, ur bst friend will be infront of u.

Sharon smiles & cuts d phone.

* Main exit of St.Loius Campus*

Swamaira on 2 cycles luk @ each-other smile , d watchman @ d gate blows d whistle & both begin d race.

Both cycle with same speed 4 sum tym , den obviously Sw exceeds Rr (aftrall Sw ko achha kahas xperience hai cycling ki).

Sw(luking back):Basket ball u won par ye race toh mai hi jeetunga.

Rr:par hum itne easily aapko jitney nahi denge.

She too accelerates hr speed, reaches near Sw, both continue racing along with chit-chat, giggles , lolz, enjoying d moist climate blended with sweet fragrance ozing out of soil, wettd by rain drops .

*Raiprakash mansion*

Sharon flew down to d outr lawn of hr house, seeing rey's car 4m window.

Shr:rey u arrived so soon!!

Rey:I said na, tum apni ankhen kholte hi mujhe apne saamne paugi.

Shr:yaa.. cum lets go to my room.

Rey: No, I have no mood to go inside d house.. I wanna enjoy in dis pretty climate outside.

Shr:okay so lets go 4 a walk.

Rey:yaa.. dats a gud idea!!

Dey both begin dier evening walk near d raiprakash bunglow.

*on d road*

Swamaira cycling.

Sw:thanx princi 4 dis cycle race idea , I m really enjoying a lot.

Rr:Thanx toh humein aapko karna chahiye jo aap hume bahar le aye,waise Sw hum kis street par turn le rahe hai??

Sw:wo ye rasta.. ye raasta..

Rr:hmm.. Sharon ke ghar jata hai ryt??

Sw: Haan.

Rr:Oh to ACS ko CS ke ghar ke raste par cycling karne ki itni aadat hogayi hai ki race par bhi unhone yahi track chuna.

Sw: Common Rr , now u don't start pulling my leg like othrs ok.

Rr:theek hai baba, nahi karte waise bhi ye toh nilesh aur Vicky ka department hai..

*on d road near raiprakash mansion*

Rey:quite gud climate na..

Shr:yaa & ur company makes it even more gud, infact best!!

Swamaira cuming cycling 4m d front.

Sw*slf talk*: u don't need to thanx Rr, I don't know y but seeing ur smile I m feeling happy as if u r sum person vry precious in my life.. aaj tumhe dekh kar rey ki tarah mujhe bhi kria ki yaad aa rahi, kahin rey sahin toh nahin sonchta kahin Rr hi kria… kahan chali gayi tum kria , kyun cali gayi hum sabko chhod kar…

Rr*slf talk*: why do feel so attached to Sw nowadays as if we know each-othr 4 years.. as if he has been vry close to me , always with me in my evry failure & success.. d way I m attached to sam d sane affection & attachment I feel 4 Sw 2.. y is dis so nature mom.. Sam toh humara bachpan ka dost hai aur Sw ke sath toh hum bas last 1 month se he reh rahe hai..

IS THIS THE BEGGINIG OF KRIYAM OUT OF SWAMAIRA…

Both r so much lost in self talk & slf thots dat dey don't c breaker on d road , & in gud velocity dey by-pass d breker making dem loose dier balance, with d handles of dier cyles colliding & den clinging against each-othr making dem ride d cycle straight out of d way & finally falling in a muddy ditch(d ditch is clean jst muddy water has filled inside it coz of rain dat occurd jst b4 sumtym).

Shr:Rey c, koi gir gaya wahan..

Rey:yaa lets c.

Dey go near d fallen angels.

Dey r standing a lil far 4m dem.

D position of Swamaira is now like- Both d cycles fallen in d mid of d ditch wid Swamaira fallen on either side of d bicycles, both liftd up dier faces wiping d drops of muddy water sprinkled on dier face.

Sharey 2gethr:Swayam & Ramaira!!

*At Ditch*

Rr:Sw , dekhiye aapki wajah se hum gir gaye.

Sw:Meri wajah se?? (giving a questionfull expression)

Rr:Haan aap hi Sharon ki duniya mein kho gaye honge aur aapki cycle ki handle humare cycle ki handle se collide kar ke gir gayi..(making baby face)

Sw:kyun aisa bhi toh ho sakta hai na ki tum kisi world mein kho gayi hogi aur tumhari wajah se mai gir gaya..

Rr: Akele aap hi nahi Sw, shayad hum bhi gir gaye hai.. aur galti aapki thi..

Sw:galti tumhari thi Rr..

& d dog-cat fyt begins.

Sharey cum @ d rescue.

Sharon sits nxt to Rr out of ditch, & same rey does beside Sw.

Shr:guyzz plz stop fyting kya hua ?

Sw:Sharon tumhe dikh nahi raha kya hua?

Shr:yaa but tum dono fyt kyun rahe ho?

Rr:hum ladai kahan kar rahein hai(baby face) hum toh itni zor se gir gaye(super baby face) aur wo bhi Sw ki wajah se.

Sw:Accha jaise tumhe bahut chot aayi, us din un goons ke sath toh itne bravely fyt kar rahi thi aur aaj cycle se gir kar ro rahi ho.

Rr:Hum ro nahi rahein hai Sw 1 toh galti ki aura b dant bhi rahein hai..

Sw:O hello none of my mistake its all urs..

Rr:galti aapki thi Sw.

Sw:meri kya galti thi??

Shr:yaa , Sw admit it it was ur mistake.

Rey:hey , gals stop blaming Sw ok, waise bhi mistakes usually gals ki hi hoti hai.

Krisha:hawww..

Shr:how can u say dis rey ?? dat gals always do mistake,(wid full attitude) MISTAKE= BOYS.

Rr:200% ryt Sharon(wid full on attitude)

Reyam:Crazy gals & dier crazy talks !! All nonsense.

Rr:Oh u mean gals talks r non-sense?

Rey:yaa.. what senseful can gals talk??

Shr:Oh so if gals talk widout any sense den y d hell u boys die 2 hear dier 1 voice.

Sw:Dats coz jst we love dem so we love dier voice & so we tolerate dier non-sense talk fed in sugar-sweet voice.

Rr(wid disgust):Enough Sw, u cant call a gal's speech as a garbage in a sweet box okay .

Rey:hey nyc title yaar, garbage in a sweet box.

Krisha get irritatd a lot while reyam smirk pulling dier legs.

Out of irritation she sprinkles d muddy water ovr rey's face, but rey hides his face behind Sw & it falls ovr Sw's face(actually his 4head).

Sw:Rr , ye kya tumne fir se 2 saal ki bachhi wali activities shuru kar di.

Rr:Toh aap bhi ban jao na 2 saal ki bachhe ki tarah aapko kisne roka hai.

Sw thinks ya she's ryt, he sprinkld d muddy water ovr Rr , but Rr esacaped bending & it fell upon Sharon.

Sharon: Sw u r so childish!!

Saying dis she sprinkld d watr back which fell upon rey & d sprinkling process continued till evry1 is coated wid muddy water cumpletly.

Sw:hey guyzz wait a sec, Sharon , rey tum dono yahan shayad meri aur Rr ki fyt end karne aye the ryt??

Rey:yaa .. aye toh hum usi intention se the par humne toh..

Shr:fyt aur aggravate kar di.

The 4 luk @ one-anothr & den burst into lolzz.

Reyam stud up, & extended hands to gals 4 hlping dem stand up.giggling out gals too stud up, reyam straightnd up d fallen cycles.

Krisha walkd ahead.

Rr:OMG, what a pitiful condition,(she luks @ hr dress , hr hands, hr legs everything drenched wid muddy water).

Shr:yaa Rr, me to luk @ my nails, I got dem trimd yesterday itslf & now dey r staind wid mud.

Rr:yaa.. (touching hr cheeks) & my face, I got facial yestrady only & now c ..

Shr:I visitd spa jst few days b4 & now I m in such condition..

Reyam standing back, tilited dier heads to 30 degree so dat dier heads touched & said:DRAMA QUEENS!!

Reyam walking ahead to Krisha.

Rey:Gals beauty-spa humesha ke liye close nahi ho rahe hai , u can visit it 2moro.

Krisha:yaa..(still upset)

Sw steps ahead & scratches his head 2 think sumthing which can turn dier upset mood to merry mood.

Sw:gals stop seeing ur dirty condition look @ me kya haal kiya hai Rr ne mera.

Rey:kyaa alag haal kiya hair Rr net era, hum sabki tarah toh dikh raha hai drenched in mud.

Rr lukd @ Sw's face 2 search 4 what special harm she caused to it.

Rr:rey Sw is ryt, c him I mean c his hairs which touch his eyes & covr his entire 4head, (she giggles) aisa lag raha hai jaise Sw ne mitti se shampoo kiya ho.

Sw:yaa exactly, u jst ruined my hairs(saying dis he lifts his hairs covring his 4head to d top of his head)

Rr runnigly cums near Sw, tilts hr face to 90 dgree infront of Sw's face & says: hey Sw, hum aapke sath 1 mahine se 1 hi ghar mein reh rahe hai, par aaj tak humne aapka 4head kabhi bhi nahi dekha, ur hairs always covrs it.

Rey (lifting up Sw's chin):True dude , maine toh in 2 years mein kabhi teri eyes bhi properly nahi dekhi,dikha tera face widout being half covrd with ur hairs.

Sw:kya yaar rey ab tub hi, Rr ki toh aadat hai mere legs pull karne ki , ab tub hi..

Rr:I m not pulling ur legs Sw, I really mean it ur eyezz r rili vry charming, & I m seeing ur complete eyes jst 2day .

Rey:Sw's r eyezz r charming??

Rr:yaa dey r. infact Sw himself is so charming..

Rey: yaa.. Sw is only charming.

Rr:yaa rey !! y m I wrong??

Rey:No , Sw is only charming.

Rr*slf talk* ye rey ko kya hogaya well leave him now bettr concentrate in Sw's hairs.

Rr: Sw, y do u keep ur hairs like dis??

Sw:Coz dese hairs has only hlpd me…(luking to Sharon who in response began blushing)

Rr(lukd @ both Swaron 1 by 1): hmm.. so dey hlpd u 2 charm Sharon,ryt Sharon.

Sharon's blushing increased turning hr light pink cheeks to red-pink.

Rey:Sharon now stop blushing & look @ Sw's face, aftrall pehli baar toh mauka mila hai hum sabko Sw ka pura face dekhne ka.

Shr lukd @ Sw ,his darck choclate brown eyez which he opend aftr slightly closing wid a sweet smile spread on his face.

Shr:Really Sw's eyez r truly charming, thanx Rr dat u targetd his hairs 4 sprinkling d muddy water & I got to c his complete face 2day.

A drop of water fell ovr Rr's face, she smiled , another drop upon sharon's face, a cute smile got plastrd on hr face 2.

& slowly drops of rain began falling upon dem.

Krisha walkd ahead enjoying it. Both strchd dier arms out , wid face liftd up towards d sky & took rounds feeling & enjoying evrydrop of rain.

Reyam stud behind placing dier fists below dier chin & drooling dier respective angels who r looking evn more prettier & beautiful under d shower of rain.

It continued for 5-6 minutes, suddenly Rr ran back 2 reyam holding Sharon's wrist.

Rr:Sw-Sharon kyun na aap dono romantic sa dance karien under dis moonlight & showers of rain a complete natural setting of romantic nyt.

Shr:NO Rr, in street a romantic dance..

Rr:O ho common Sharon, romance ke liye street ya koi romantic site nahi dekha jata sirf (placing shron's hands over Sw's hand) apne pyaar ka sath dekha jata hai & c how romantic is d nyt, now no xcuse u both have to dance!!

Swaron agreed.

Sw encircled his both hands around Sharon's waist, while Sharon placed hr wrist around Sw's neck, & both of dier eyes got interlocked & dier feet startd slowly tapping in d music of Pehla nasha instrumental…

Rey:Ab hum kya karein.

Rr:Hum audience ban jate hai Sharon-Sw ke dance ke liye, cum lets sit & watch dem.

Dey both get seatd on a rock beside d street.

Rr smilingly lookd @ Swaron's dance .

Rey*slf talk*: Audience ban kar toh aise dekh rahe hai jaise humein toh dance aata hi nahi, hey univrsji Sharon-Sw ki tarah mai q nahi apni baatcuttr ka sath dance kar sakta, itna romantic climate aur isse hum dono audience ban-kar waste kar rahe hai.. ab yahi din dekhna reh gaya tha Reyaansh sighania ke liye.

Rr:kya hua rey ??

Rey:Nothing!! I m really vry enjoying to bcum an audience.

Rr smiled.

Rey gave back a fake smile.

She again startd watching Swaron's dance which was rili majical 2day, both wre dressed in whites & were dancing vry passionately.

Rey*slf talk* Do sumthing rey, warna itni romantuic myt mein toh bas audience ban ke reh jayega, tera pyaar bhi toh tere sath hi hai , itne paas ho kar (luking @ Rr who's sitting jst nxt to him) bhi hum itne dur hai…

Swaron's slow dance ended.

Now rey cudnt resist dancing,he stud up & startd tapping his feet in hip-hop style amidst d street.

BG song: !! (4m d movie masti I think or sum movie such like)

chora-chori , chora-chori chhat pe milenge aur khelenge prem game,

chod ki sari batein bas romance rahega main!!

On d roof in d rain , on d roof in d rain

Rainfall is still continuing

Sw joined him & both did sum hip-hop moves.

Gals 2 cudnt stop dem , dey too joined dier respective partnrrs & d 4 brilliant dancrs prformed in dis song wid full on masti & fun.

Dancing dey tapped dier feet traveling thru d street, hanging across d towers, laying down d ground & finally jumping upon d roof of nearby house.

chora-chori , chora-chori chhat pe milenge aur khelenge prem game,

chod ki sari batein bas romance rahega main!!

On d roof in d rain , on d roof in d rain

As it is a hip-hop danceform so its difficult describing d steps, so plzz all of u imagine Kriyaansh & Swaron on d roof dancing undr rainfall in above song!!

Dey ended up dance cycling, boys cycling d two cycles wid gals sitting on d front rod of bicycle & enjoying a lot.

Kriyaansh 2gethr in 1 cycle & so as Swaron in other.

Den came a two-way junction in dier way.

Both d cycles stopped @ dis point, d gals steppd down.

Rey:Sw ye cycle toh teri hai na, so..

Sw:So what?? Tu aur Sharon us cycle mein Sharon ke ghar chale jao, aur wahan se tu apni care se apne gahr chale jana, aur ye(pointing to d cycle he was sitting upon) maine hostel ke 1 friend se borrow ki hai, toh mai aur Rr ismein clg campus chale jate hai, tu meri cycle baad mein return kar dena.

All agreed to his POV.

D gals got exchanged & as dey were in a 2 way junction so Swamaira & sharey went away following d 2 opposite ways..

*On d cycle all slf talk* (remambr all r thinking in dier mind.

Sw(smiling) : Dis was 1 of d bst dance of my life with ny love Sharon.

Shr:Aaj Sw kitna achha lag raha tha & our dance it was sumthing majical I felt 2day.

Rey:Finally sabke sath hi sahi mujhe meri Baatcutter ke sath dance karne ka mauka toh mila & den our cycling, she was sitting so close jst here!!

Rr:Sw ne achha hi kiya jo Taani ko lane se mana kar diya, warna aaj rey ke sath cycle pe hum nahi Taani hoti, & I cudnt have enjoyed dat majical moment, 1 sec Rr aap ya kya sonch rahi hai, y r u getting possessive 4 rey, u cant feel so 4 rey Rr, u cant ditch ur 1^st love, aur waise bhi rey toh Taani ke hi hai, no matter u like it or not dey r official couple , so stop thinking abt rey.

Well kuch bhi karlo princess u cant stop urslf thinking abt rey..

To be continued vry soon…

I always wantd to write sum chatptr which has Kriyaansh, Swaron,Reyam, Krisha, Kriyam & Sharey altogether 2day finally I tried such chaptr writng hope I was successful.

Well wud like to tell u sumthing dis chaptr came in my mind 2 months back on 28^th April nyt b4 my AIEEE exam , I was vry tensd abt my exam, many horrible thots were cuming to my brain when I went to bed 4 sleeping so to calm down my slf I startd thinking abt dese 4 charctrs & as a rslt I got dis scene, finally got d storyline to fit it in my FF.

So I have written a long dis tym 13 pages in word.

Long update na.. So I want long & cute comnts also.. So what r u waiting 4 comnt soon..

I m waiting..

Preacap:

Rr(taking out thermometr 4m Sw's mouth): Its 100 degree Fahrenheit Sw & u say u have slight fevr, I m calling doctor now.

p.s. chapter title giving responsibility to Aroma.

Edited by hARSHA_Neeti - 13 years ago

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Happy Kriyaansh frenzz..

Chaptr-31

Cold breeze carrying sweet fragrance wid it r slowly touching cheeks of a yong lad, his hairs( bettr to be calld zulfein) r drizzling ovr his 4head , 32 inch smiling prevailing ovr lips, as if dreaming of d most beautiful nyt he evr had, wid his love….

"Sleeps enemy= alarm " disturbd dis cutee sleep, a sleep who no gal cud evr think of disturbing..

He shut d alarm wid anger saying:kya yaar sapne bhi chain nahi.. clg frenzz beech mein ajate hai aur dreamzz mein ye alarm ..

Koi mujhe chain se apni sweet se angel Sharon ke bare dream bhi karne nahi deta!!

Chal Swayam ab uth ja subah hogayii hai..

He strechd his arms ,& den again fell on bed placing his chin ovr d pillow he said: par kya raat thi na kal ki.. Sharon meri bahon mein wid rose petals falling on us.. our dance .. wow sab kuch kitna achha tha… par who did all dis?? It was jst like well plannd surprise date 4 us..Nilesh.. no no nil itna romantic nahi ho sakta.. ye sab toh wahi plan kar sakta who himself has experincd d true essnce of love.. den who did it 4 us..

"Sw ye sab baad mein sonchna pehle , jakar evry mrng ka 1^st alottd task cumplt kar..

*Rr's room(= teddy land in Sw's language)*

He rushd to Rr's room who was sunk in deep sleep wid sweet smile prevailing on hr face( jst like Sw had jst b4 sumtym)

Sw:Oh so princes in deep sleep.

He walks to hr bed.

Sw:Rr .. Rr ..wake up Rr..

Rr places pillow ovr hr ears .

Sw removes d pillow & shaking hr says:Rr wake up. Its 7:00 am now.

Rr continues to sleep widout any response.

Sw: Sharon ka gussa shaant karna aur Rr ko roj subah neend se uthana both r damn difficult works!! Ab kya karu??

He gets sum idea..

Placing his face close to hr ears he shouts @ d top of his voice :RAMAIRA…

D voice was so loud dat all d students of St.Loius hostel too woke up.

Rr wakes up & sits on hr bed .

Rr(full on Jhansi ki raani avatar) : Sw r u mad!! U almost have burst my eardrum!! I fear dat I don't get deaf hearing dis loud voice!! Cant u wake me up calmly??

Sw:Calmly!! As if u hear my calm voice.

Rr: So I may be in deep sleep na , dat dosnt mean u'll jst get my ears damagd by shouting so loud on my ears!!

Sw: great, dis is gud, agar na uthao toh bhi tumhari irritating dant suno aur gar uthao toh aur bhi jada irritating voi..

Rr now stud up , & both r standing on eithr side of bed now.

Rr:Wat u said irritating voice..

Sw:No not dat Rr, I mean..

Rr: I knw vry well wat u mean sw, saying dis she threw a big teddy ovr Sw.

Sw bends down & d teddy falls ovr hr dressing table making all hr cosmetics fell down.

Rr : Oh no!!

She gets irrtatd a lot & turns away 4m Sw, now naughty Sw arises out of calm Sw & he threw another evn biggr teddy ovr Rr . D teddy hits Rr , she turns back to Sw & giving angry diva luk throws bunch of teddy's ovr him, Sw flew out of d room .

Rr followd him .

dey reachd kitchen ,she threw all d vegetables & othr eatables @ him 1 by 1. Sw tried to escape but 2-3 vege's still hit him, in turn he splashd 1 big bowl watr ovr hr & ran to his room & was jst abt to lock it 4m inside bt to his bad luk b4 he cud do dat Rr entrd.

Now it was Sw's rooms turn to get messed up. Rr liftd 1 buket watr 4m Sw's washroom & splashd ovr Sw, Sw cumpltly got wet wid watr dripping 4m his entire body…

In turn he selctd all d light weightd objects 4m his room & trew dem ovr Rr.

Now Rr bcame vry hyper , she ran behind Sw to beat him(slight beat noit a harsh 1)

Sw ran , followd by Rr , dey continued running for 5-7 minutes all around d house breaking almost all d breakable articles of d house.

Finally dey got tired up, & sat down reclining ovr a pillar on its opposite side facing away 4m each othr.Bot were breathing out vry fast, heart beat also vry rapid(jst coz of running) wiping d sweat on dier face dey turnd .

SwMiara 2gethr screamd: Tum!!

Rr: I mean aap!!

Sw nodded & both burst into laughter.

Sw stud up laughing aloud extended hands to Rr , she placd hr hands ovr his & stud up.

Both of dem lukd all around widout blinking dier eyezz .

Rr:Ab kya??

Sw: O god aaj 1 hi din kit oh chutti mili thi aur usmein bhi poore ghar ki condition ye hogayi hai..

Rr: realy, we have spoild almost everything!!

Both making cute sad baby faces lukd @ each-othr.

Rr:par maza bhi toh bahut aya.

Sw:yaa , sach maza toh bahut aya.. (luking @ d messd up house) par ab ye saza ka kya??

Humare maids aur servants bhi itna sabkuch clean karte-2 thak jayenge..

Rr:hey y to worry wen princess Rr is dere??

Sw:u mean u'll hlp us in cleaning.

Rr:ofcorse not!! How can I do all dis, I m jst calling sum srvants 4m palace dey'll get entire house including ur room cleand up in few hours!!

Sw:ok den , lets go & fresh-up, aaj toh Sunday hai..no clg complete relaxmnt!!

Both of dem go 4 dere rooms.

1 hour latr. D entire house is cleand by now.

Sw aftr taking bath cums 2 d drawing room to switch on Tv.

*Dawing room*

Sw(angrily)Tum yahan?? Tumhe gaurds ne anadar kaise aane diya??

Shiv:hey jst chill dude!! Guards princess ke safety ke liye appointd hai tumhare liye nahi , aur mai toh Rr ka naya friend hun..

Sw:Dare not shivam to do friendship wid Rr!!

Shiv:kyun who's she in ur life, neither she's ur gal-friend –sharon, nor sistr-Taani , nor friend Kria, who r u to decide hr friend circle.

Sw: I know dat I dat Rr r not evn friendz still, but she's my house mate & b4 entring in dis house I have promisd hr dad dat nothing will harm his daughter till I m dere.

Shiv:So u think I m harmful to such beautiful princess(evil smile).

Sw( out of his mind):Jst go out of d house shivam, I don't wanna spoil my mood talking to u.

Shiv:I wont go till I don't meet d gorgeous prin(cut-off by Sw).

Sw:Get lost I said !! (pointing his fingrs towards d exit door) & dare not to evn cum near Rr , otherwise..

Shiv:Abhi toh mai ja raha hun.. par kab tak roko ge mujhe Sw, Rr ke paas aane se, tum 24 hrs use protect toh nahi kar sakte na..

Sw:Agar tujh jaise cheap se Rr ko save karna hona toh mai 24 hrs kya,mai har 1 momnt Rr ke sath uski shadow ki tarah rahunga par tum jaise ka***ne ka saya us par kabhi bhi padne nahi dunga!!

Shivam leaves..

Sw sits down on d sofa, takes deap breath.

Sw:ye kya ho gaya tha mujhe itna protective toh mai sirf Sharon,tanni aur kriya ke liye hi reh ho sakta hun.. but 4 Rr ?? y can't I c hr in trouble,wats dat which is pulling me 2wards hr(hey friendship wala pull haan)??

His thot of clouds is distrbd by a cute voice(which Sw calls irritating).

Rr:Sw, koi aaya tha kya??

Sw:nahi koi nahi aaya tha, wo mai bas phone mein baat kar raha tha.

Rr:Baat kar rahe the ya kisiko dant rahe the(she smirks), ok leave dat , finally talent contest is done & we have a Sunday, no work jst holiday!!

Sw:yaa..

Soon dey recive a sms 4m GS of d clg.

Rr:rey ka msg.

Sw:haan mere cell par bhi..

Both read.

*sms*

All Louisans r informd dat , dey have no pleasure of rest & relaxmnt in dier life, now aftr being tird of talent contest if u r planning to rest den plzz avoid it, coz u have to submit by 2moro d assingnment of Buisness Studies !! thank u. have gud hardworking day!!

SwaMaira gave a helpless smile , & began 2 work.

Dey wrkd till 7:00 pm evning & finally cumpltd dier task, now both were so much tird dat dey slpt on sofa itslf, of corse on opposite sides.

Time: 11:30 pm.

Dey woke up.

Sw:O god we slpt 4 long tym!!

Rr luking 4 d food packets 4 dinner.

Rr:Sw , food 4 2nyt has not been yet delivrd.

Sw:What?? But its so late now , atmost by 10pm dey drop d food here.lemme jst call dem & chek it out!!

Sw calls @ d restraunt 4m where dey order food , d managr informs dat due to sum reason d food cudnt be delivrd!!

Rr:Ab kya karein?? Humein bahut bhook lagi hai..

Sw:lets c wat can we cook(he moves to kitchen Rr follows him)

*kitchen*

Sw(opening d fridge): nothing's dere coz u have thrown almost all d vege's on me in mrng.

Rr ( cute baby face): so now??

Sw:humm.. yaa.. noodles!! I' ll cook coz I know in palace no1 wud have taught u cooking ryt??

Rr nods.

Sw starts cooking noodles wid d lil vege's leftover(dis was d last food dey had 2nyt).

His phone rings, shaorn @ d call.

Sw:Aa..Rr..

Rr;Sharon !! hum pyaar ke dushman kyu bane , jaiye aap apne room mein aaram se Sharon se private talk kijiye.

Sw smiles .

Rr keeps on luking @ noodles as she's vry hungry ryt now.

Aftr sumtym Sw rushes to kitchen & luks @ what??

Fumes cuming out of d cooking dish, wid burning smell prevailing all ovr.

He screams:Rr..

She rushes inside d kitchen & luks @ d petty condition of noodles!!

Sw:but how can dis happen, I kept d flame vry low.

Rr:wo.. wo .. I was quiet hungry so , I thot if I increase d flame of stove noodles will cook quickly!!

Sw: y did u use ur brain @ d work which u don't know how to do??

Rr:don't shout so much Sw, I was jst trying 2 hlp!!

Sw:So dis is d way u have hlpd!! Dis was d last trace of food we had 2nyt & by now clg's main entrance wud have also closd so we cant evn go out & have sumthing, hostels mess closes by 11:00 pm. So now??

Rr( making baby face): umm..

Sw: wanna say sorry!!

Rr nods.

Sw:ok let it be , u didn't do it intentionally!!

Rr*slf talk* how did he undrstud dat I wana say sorry?? How can he read my mind??

Sw: (peeping inside d fridge 1's more)hey we have still got sumthing!!

Rr:what??

Sw(smilingly)icecream powder & milk!!

Rr: So icecream!!

Sw:yaa & I'll prepare widout ur kind hlp.

Rr: hey but 1^st lets switch off our cell-phones as dey r also d half reason 4 our fuming noodles.

Sw:yaa..

*dining table*

Rr:Sw how much tym more?? Rats palying hide & seek in my stomach!!

Sw:coming jst 2 minutes princess!!

He cums.

Rr:Only 1 bowl.

Sw:yaa, coz i got only 1 & i m vry hugry ryt now so i dont have strength 2 search 4 othr 1 , if u want we can share othrwise..

Rr:No no its okay wat if 1 bowl , we have 2 spoons wid us dat will do.

Sw:ok den plzz begin.

Rr:u begin..

Sw:table atticates Rr, how can I start 1^st.

Rr: no formalities Sw.. start na..

Both 2gehr: lets begin b4 d icecream melts!!

Dey start eating , enjoying dier supper which is jst an icecream 2day!! But still dey r enjoying it a lot coz it has a spice of Kriyam's everlasting friendship bond & SwaMaira's new begining friendship!!

An update dedicatd 2 kriyam friendship whose i use to be big fan in d3...

precap:

Rr:guyzz plzz stay inside, let me handle it.. plzz no1 will cum out of d house!!

rey:Rr but it sounds like bullet firing, how can we let u face it all alone.

Rr(wid disgust): plzz rey try & undrstand, i'll hnadle it, pitaaji told u all na dat im well traind 4 all dis, if u'll cum out it will create more complications so plzz stay inside & lemme go!!

Nil & Sw:but Rr we cant let u..

Rr:Trust me guyzz nothing will happen , i warn u all once more no1 will come out.

Edited by hARSHA_Neeti - 13 years ago

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Neeti

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Posted: 13 years ago

Happy Kriyaansh friendzz

As i said i m back so soon wid anothr update..

so lets begin now..

Chapter-35

*Swamaira's house*

Rr coming out of hr room aftr shower with wet hairs , gently scrubbing hr hairs with towel in dressed in hr royal nyt gown.

*Drawing room*

Rr(rushing 2 Sw): Sw u r all ryt na??

Sw( sneezing ): Yaa.. I am.. ok.. jst ..( he sneezes again)

Rr:What ok haan.. u r sneezing badly.

Sw:Rr mai(again sneezes).

Rr:Shut up Sw, bolne ki toh himmat nahi hai, aur bas bole ja rahe hai. Cum & sit here(pointing d sofa)

Sw sits.

Rr sits beside him & touches his 4head & neck.

Rr:I said na be quite , I m sure u have fever, ur 4head is so warm, sit here qietly I m cuming.

Sw:yaa I may be having slight fevr.

Lines of worry & concern were being taced on Rr's 4head.She walkd to hr room & retrnd back in few minutes.

Rr:Open ur mouth.

Sw gives a prplxd expression.

Rr:Aise kya dekh rahe hai , I said open ur mouth.

Sw:Par q??

Rr:Uhh..

She pressed Sw's cheek with hr hands so dat his mouth got opend & placed d thermometr below his tongue.

Sw:ummh.. umm..

Rr:Keep queit I said na, don't evn try uttering a word warna measurmnt mein mistake ho jayegi. (she ordrd like a strict scul teachr)

Sw nodded like a gud scul disciple.

Rr sat infront of him in sofa.

Rr:humne aapse kaha tha na ki aapki tabiyat kharaab ho jayegi barish mein par aapne humari baat nai mani ab dekhiye kaya hogaya.

Rr(taking out thermometr 4m Sw's mouth): Its 100 degree Fahrenheit Sw & u say u have slight fevr, I m calling doctor now.

She calls 4 doc.

*Sw's room*

Sw laying on bed & Rr sitting infront of him on his bed.

Rr:Ye sab kuch humari wajah se hua hai humara hi man kar raha tha rain enjoy karne ka aur apne humari khushi ke liye ye risk liya , c now hav got fevr kal exam hai aur aaj apki tabiyaat, hey nature mom plzz get Sw well soon.

Doctr arrives & checks Sw using stethoscope & touching his nerves @ wrist.

Rr:Dr. Sw kab tak theek ho jayenge?

Dr : Don't worry , its jst viral fevr,he'll get well by 2moro evening (handing ovr d prescription) dese r d medicines, give him aftr dinner.

Rr nods .

She directs Dr. outway.

Rr:Dr. is dere any way Sw can get perfectly well by 2moro morning itslf coz we have test 2moro, aur is condition mein Sw test kaise denge.

Dr.:waise toh patient kio kamse kam 1 din lagega cumpltly recovr hone ke liye par agar unki achhi tarike se care ki jaye tohho sakta hai wok al subah hi thik ho jayein.

Rr:yaa I'll do aap bas ye bataiye humein karna kya hoga??

Dr. tells hr all d nursing measures.

Rr:ok thank u dr.

Dr:ok den miss.raajvansh I m leaving.

He leaves.

Rr:mohan.( 1 of hr servant)

Mohan: ji raajkumari ji.

Rr:Aap chemist ke paas jakar ye medicines le ayiye(handling him d slip)

Mohan:ji.

Rr goes to kitchen prepares hrslf khhichdi 4 Sw(as patients usually eat such boild food only).

She entrs his room.

Rr:chaliye Sw , khhicdi kha lijiye.

Sw:tumne ye banaya aur wo bhi apne hantho se.

Rr:Haan qki pairon se toh bana nahi sakte the.

Sw:yaa ryt, but khhicdi, I mean its simply bolid 1 , I wont eat.

Rr:Sw sick condition mein yehi food milta hai ab bachhon ki tarah zid karna band kijiye aur chup-chap god boy ki tarah kha lijiye (handling him d bowl of dish)

Sw starts eating slowly.

Rr watches hr still he cumpltes d entire food.

Rr:Vry gud!!(taking out tablets out of raper) now take ur medicines & sleep peacefully.

She handles him d tablets & glass of water.

Sw takes medicines & lays down on bed like an obedient guy.

Rr covrs him wid blanket & starts applying wet cotton cloth piece ovr his 4head (remiving his hairs 4m dere).

She keeps on changing d cloth piece till nyt 10:00 pm until his body temperature cums down.

2day Kriya was totally dominating princess Rr, she 4got everything hr princess status, hr way-outs, everything what was jst imp 4 hr now was getting Sw well soon coz she cant let him miss his test.

Aftrall kria is kria evn d disguise of Rr cant stop hr conrns & worries 4 hr friendz as she has always placed "Dosti" in hr life b4 anything else.

Sw*slf talk* :Rr mera itna khayaal rakh rahi hai, jaise ki wo Rr nahi kriya ho d way she's concrnd abt me is d same kriya used to b conrnd abt we weaklings, she cookd 4 me, mera dhyaan rakhne ke liye khud dinner bhi nahi kiya & now she's constantly changing wet cloth.

Den he remebrd all d tym he had spend Rr 4 past 1 month dier fyts, conrn , hlp 4 each-othr d way she's helping evry1 in clg ryt 4m d day she has entrd it jst as kria was evr ready to hlp hr freindz..

Sw*slf talk*: Nahi mere liye itna kuch sirf meri bst kriya h I kar sakti hai,Rey sahi tha Rr hi kriya hai, bas maine he apni bst friend ko nahi pehchana, but all those ID proofs?? Plzz god hlp me to know whats d truth??

Rr: Sw , aap ab tak soye nahi , humne aapse kaha na ankh band karke so jayiye, agar propr rest lenge tab hi toh jaldi theek honge na, otherwise u'll miss 2moro's test jst coz of me.

Sw:No Rr, its nothing ur fault, mai khud apni marzi se bahar gaya tha.. so plzz stop blaming urslf.

Rr:ok but plzz sleep.

Sw:How will I sleep , mujhe neend hi nahi aa rahi.

Rr:Toh hum aisa kya karien jisse aapko neend ajaye.

Sw:Well my mom use to tell me stories when I was young to induce sleep in me.

Rr:Stories, ok which type of stories?

Sw:When I was kid, mom mujhe prince. Princess , king , queens ki story sunati thi.

Rr:Humein koi prince-princess ki story nahi aati.

Sw*slf talk* Dis is d bst chance dude by which u can know abt Rr's past.

Sw:So what?? u urslf r a princess tum apni hi story suna do.

Rr:hmm.. dats gud idea.

She got seatd ovr Sw's bed & placed a pillow ovr hr lap & upon d pillw placed Sw's head.

Rr(slightly patting Sw's head so dat he cud sleep):Chaliye aaj hum apko Jaipur ke Raajvansh riyasat par le chalte hai.

She beagan d story…

Rr:bahut salon baad , bahut se medical treatments aur raajgharone ke puja ke baad badi mushkil se Maharaaj Arya Singh ki 1 raajkumaari huyi.. pure palace mien unke janm se khushiyaan bikhar gayi..Aur us nanhi pari ka naam rakha gaya Raajkumaari Ramaira Raajvansh.Sab bahut khush the ye sonchkar ki finally Raajvansh riyasat ko unki heiress mil gayi, maharaja aur maharani toh khushi se jaise pagal ho rahe the..

but as dier r villains in evry-story so here 2.maharaaj ke rivals unke hi cosins the , dey got furiated by d news as of princess birth qki agar Mahraaj ki koi bacche nahi hote toh riyasat ki sari property unhe mil jati, wo property & shares jo humare ancestors ke hai aur wo bhi jo Mahraaj ne khud apni mehnat se earn kiya hai.Dey got making sum evil plans against princess .

Sw:toh kya us din ke goons ko tumhare uncle, I mean ur das's cousins ne send kiya tha.

Rr:yaa, dey only send dem par ab toh humein in sare attacks , kidnapps ki aadat ho chuki hai, dey have tried it 87 tyms since my birth.

Sw:87 OMG a big count!! So didn't Maharaaj plan anything 4 princess security.

Rr:Raat din mahraaj wahi toh sonchte the & finally he decided to send hr to London away 4m Jaipur (India ) where she was kept 4 20 years under vry vry high protection & security.there she met Samraat a prince of Rajasaviya empire, dey bcame friendzz infact bst friendz did dier scul, clg al2gethr till BBA

Sw:So was princess taught all fighting skills ryt 4m hr childhood.

Rr:No since childhood she was brought up like buds of flower, vry protective life placed under cocoon as butterfly keeps it baby. She was vry gentle as gentle as rose petals knew nothing abt fyt & all. All these she was taught jst 1 year back aftr she met with an accident

Sw:What ?? princess met with an accident!! How & why??

Sw*slf talk* I m sure sumthing has happnd in dis accident only which turnd kria to Rr.

Rr:How , why I don't remebr it all yaar evn pitaaji nevr told me abt it, he jst said dat it was an attack by our rivals .

Sw:u don't remebr ?? I mean accident happnd with jst 1 & half year back & u don't remebr it.

Rr:So I remebr nothing !! jo story humne tumhe batayi wo humein 1 & year pehle sunayi gayi thi ,qki us incident ke baad toh humein kuch bhi yaad nahi, I lost my memory & my mom 2.(hr eyez got wet remebring hr mom)

Sw was stunned hearing d last line.

Sw*slf talk* : iska matlab kriya ka accident hua 1 & years back & Mahraaj Arya singh wud have found hr aftr accident , he wud have adoptd kriya gave hr new name, & told hr sum random story.Iska matalb Rr hi kriya hai.. haan Sw Rr hi kriya hai..

To be continued soon….

Ok so finally sumthing revald to Sw.

I know its not dat adorable part, but I have to move on d story too so dis was necessary.

Ok guyzz good or bad or worst plzz comnt..All sorts of cpmplents or criticism r heartly welcum & it's a rqst to silent readrs plzz cum up with ur comnts too if u busy den plzz atleast give short comntz , I wud like interatcting with u as well, aur jo lambe comnts dete hai unhe strict;y warn kiya jata hai ki small comnts den eke bare sonchna bhi mat..😛

(lolz mai bi dhamki dene lagi.. kiska effect hai ye mujpe??)😕

precap:

Sw: rey dekh ke road par concentrate kar dude warna hum hostel nahi hospital pahunchege..

He smirks.

p.s. tiltle giving responsibility-cherry(luv_Arsha)

Edited by hARSHA_Neeti - 13 years ago

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Neeti

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Posted: 13 years ago

Happy Kriyaansh friendzz

thanx 2 all those who wished 4 my gud health aftr reading dat note.. thanx a lot.

2day i m feeling a lil bettr so updating(actually i was bored of taking rest)

so dis is a long update as compensation of keeping u await 4 long..

lets begin now..

Chapter-33

*Swamaira's house outer view*

its nyt tym now..

Ok now let me explain d location of evry1.

All d Loiusans have adjustd themslvs in two window panes visible in d above pic of d house , while Rr & d goon r jst in d corner jst beside d door of d house.

Rr taking a step back again: hum akhari baar keh reh age mat badho..

D Goon wid evil smile steppd ahead & Rr wid hlplessness steppd back.

He stepd ahead, she steppd back & den he's jst about to stab hr…

All d gals inside d house closed dier eyez wid terror, rey screamd: Ramaira!!

Evry1 trund away dier face no1 had d strength to face dis bloodshed.

Wen d gals opnd dier eyez & boys turnd dier face back to Rr, dey saw d goon stuck wid d wall of d house which had running electric currnt over it.

It happened as he was jst to stab Rr, she was vry close to d wall of d house, she bent all of a sudden & his knife stabbd d wall as d knife was made up of iron (a electric conducting material) wid poor non-conducting holder so d current flew to his body traveling thru iron knife.

D goon shivering , tremoring wid current & d princess standing nxt to him.

Rr(wid evil smile):tumhe kya laga hum dar gaye tumse aur dar ke karan apne kadam peeche rakh rahe hain, humare piche hat te kadam to sirf tumko wall ke paas lane ke liye the… Raajvansh riyasat ki raajkumari hai hum, humare har 1 kadam ki kimat hoti hai..

Saying dis she movd ahead to handle othr rouges. She continued hr fyt. Suddenly 1 of d goon caught up a iron rod & moved ahead to hit it ovr Rr's head , he was lil far 4m hr when a strong arms ,grabbd d rod 4m d othr edge ,turnd d goon round & pinnig him to d nearby tree trunk wid hlp of rod wwhich he placed ovr d goon's neck turnd him half dead.

He turnd around & 1 of d goon used knife ovr him , but d guy was safe d knife cud jst tear his ovr coat & shirt, which he removd & continued d fyt.

Till now Rr hasn't seen him all d while dey fought wid d goons back to back.

Aftr a while she saw another troupe (infact a very big troupe) of gaurds nearing d house, who stoppd hr & said we'll manage dem.

Rr:ye sab kaun hai?? Humare gaurds toh nahi hai, inke toh uniform bhi alag hai, wait a sec princi, u have seen such uniformd gaurds sumwhere , but where??

A voice 4m back: in my palace princess.

She turnd around 2 c d man.

Rr:Kunwar aap yahan?? (she's cumpltly stunnd 2 c him) kahi hum dream toh nahi dekh rahe??

He (cuming closr to hr):Achha toh humari princi dreams mein bhi itne bravely fyt karti hai..

Rr(wid a lil attitude):waise hum ye akele manage kar lete.

He:I know dat u can handle everything vry well. Hum toh yaha sirf aapse milne aye the , par jab ye sab dekha toh laga q na hum bhi thodi heroism dikha le.

Rr:Do u evn need show dat ?? (cuming closr to him & slightly hitting his chest)dere's no doubt u r hero, d charmer of evry gal's heart in Oxford London!!

He:yaa, par bas 1 aap hi hai princes jis par humara charm chalta hi nahi..

Rr:Well dat may b coz I m seeing ur dis charming face ryt 4m childhood as u say we r childhood friendzz.

He:Or coz ur eyez have been already charmed by sum1 else.

Rr:Aap bhi na kuch bhi kehte hai..

Coming closer,Both smild & huggd each othr.

Breaking d hug dey look all around dem , all d goons have lost dier strength to fyt by now & d police cums wid siren, & takes d goons wid dem.

Rr smilingly: chaliye sammy hum apko apna naya ghar dikhate hain.

She plugs off d electric machine's switch, & d current ends in d walls.

Dey entrd house.

*inside d house*

All d Loiusans staring hard to Rr wid wide open eyez.

Reyam standing nxt to each-othr

Sw*slf talk*:kya ye wahi ladki hai jo kuch der pehle mere sath jhula jhul rahi thi 2 saal ki bachhi ki tarah.Aur ab..

Rey*slftalk*: kya ye wahi hai jisne mujhse mango tree par climb karne ke liye zid ki thi aur water pipe se bachhon ki tarah khel rahi thi..& 2day wat I saw jst now..

Both den face each-othr & nod saying in mind :haan ye wahi ladki hai…

Rr:chill guyzz hum sab bilkul safe hain.

Still Loiusans r unable to cum out of d terrified world dey jst witnessd.

Rr:guyzz calm down & plz sit yaar.

Rr: Guyzz meet him Prince Samraat Rajasviya ,(moving close to him) my childhood friend.

Rr:& Samraat dey all r my new friends in St.Loius.

Gals chit-chat.

Simmy:he's qiuet hot & handsome!!

Rinny: true yaar, c his choclaty brown eyez luks as if it has power to charm all d gals of dis world.

Vish:yaa dude , he's quiet hot & smart!!

Taani:haan.. hai toh handsome par rey se jada nahi..

Simmy:Par rey se kam bhi toh nahi.

Sharon:Yaa luks gud!! But 4 me my Sw is only d darling.

Boys chit-chat

Viky:Dude gals ko dekho kaise us prince ko dekh rahi ha .

Nil:don't worry dude teri diwaani humesha teri hi diwaani ban ke rahegi.

Sw:kya Sharon bhi use dekh rahi hai..

Rey(in low voice wid sad baby face):aur Rr toh uske paas hi khadi hai,bahut paas.

All:kuch kaha rey.

Rey:no jst I was saying its gud of him dat he brought his troupe on tym othrwise Rr ko aur fyt karni padti.

Jst den a knock @ d door.

Rr:cum in.

Rr's gaurds entrd .

Rr (wid conrn):Aap sab theek toh hai na , kisi ko jada chot toh nahi ayi.

G1:Aap ke hote hue hume kuch ho sakta hai.hum sab bilkul theek hai.

She smiles.

G2:ji raajkumari ji isse pehle bhi humne kuch raajkumar aur raajkumariyon ko guard kiya hai, par jo khushi aapko guard karne mein hai wo kahin aur nahi hai.

Rr:Aisa q??

G3:qki aap khud jo itni bahuddur hai, jis tarike se aap sab kuch sambhalti hai , humne aaj tak kisi raajkumaar tak ko ye karte nahi dekha. Hume garv hai ki hum sab appke gaurds hai.

Dey owe hr respect by slightly bending.

Rr smiles in response.

Rr:kya karein karna padta hai qki humari jaan bahut important hai, humse bhi jada pitaaji ke liye, ma ke jane ka baad 1 hum hi toh hai jo pitaaji ki duniyan hai, aur hum unki duniya ko khatam hote kaise dekh sakte hai.(tear drops 4m hr eyez).

Samraat:ok princi now don't get dat emotional warna yaha flood ajayega , aur tumhe toh swimming aati bhi nahi.

Rr:jst shut up ok sam. (luking to gurds)Ab aap log humein yaha akela chod kar apni chot par dawayi lagne hospital toh jayenge nahi, aftrall Maharaj Arya singh Raajvansh ka aadesh jo hai , ki unki raajkumari ko 1 sec ke liye bhi akele na choda jaye, isliye humne nursing home se medical-van bulva li hai, aap sab apne injuries par dawa lagva lijiyega.

All gaurds nod in response & dey leave.

Vish: princi tum toh theek hona.

Rr:relax vish dekhiye hum bilkul theek hai, well sorry guyzz aap sab yaha efun & masti ke liya aye the aur aap sabko humari wajah se ye sab witness karna pada.

Rey:don't b sorry Rr, its okay, BTW who were dey & y dey attackd u??

Rr:No1 jst d rivals of pitaaji. Now I m d only heiress of Raajvansh empire, so killing me will let dem have d entire property . Leave all dis guyzz lets have sum fun!!

Sw:Fun now!!

Rr:So wen ?? wen evry1 will b back to dier home?? & 2day my childhood friend is also dere wid us .

Nil:Whats ur plan princi ??

Rr:Swimming pool.

Sw: if u remember, humare ghar mein koi swimming pool nahi hai Rr .

Rr:yaa I remember Sw, par principal sir ke ghar mein toh hai!!

Viky:u mean hum sir ke ghar??

Rr:haan , sir toh campus mein hai nahi, hum unke ghar ki boundary climb karke jayenge.

Sw:Tumhe normal rehne mein kya prblm hai??

Rr:prblm toh nahi hai, par abnormal rehne mein masti zaroor hai , common guyzz lets go!!

Dey all enter d Swimming pool complex climbing d principal's house boundary.

Sharon:Now what??

Rr:nothing jst craziness guyzz. Umm..amm.. yaa lets dip our legs inside d pool & sit around it.

Nil:princi par??

Rr:nilesh pehle baityiye toh arey bahut maza ayega, in dis moonlight all d frenzz sitting around d pool wid chit-chat , it'll be a fun.

All of dem sit as per Rr's instruction in couples as usual, Rr was thinking to sit nxt 2 rey but stalker taani dis tym grabbd d opportunity, So she sat nxt to Samraat.

Ramyaansh tiltd 45 degree to steal glances @ each-othr & smiled.

Rr startd pedaling hr legs inside d pool, seeing hr evry1 tried dis & enjoyed wid giggles.

All d cuples enjoying each-othr's company as wid short eyelocks as well as enjoying d fun wid all d frenzz.

Rr:guyzz u know (holding Samraat's hand) hum aur Samraat London mein sath hi the , 1 hi school , 1 hi clg, waise Sam hum puchna toh bhool hi gaye aap achanak yaha??

Sam:ya , had sum work of Rajsaviya empire , uske liye aye the , ab India aakar hum apni bst friend se mile bina chale jate it wudn't be fare na..

Rr:yaa.. (luking @ Loiuns) guyzz u know what, in London Sam used to be d rockstar of our clg.Clg ki sari gals inki 1 nazar par ghayal ho jati thi..

Rinny-simmy(drooling him): yaa wo toh huni hai..

Sam:Aur clg ke sare boyz Rr ke 1 nazar ke liye taras jaate the bichare, par humari princi hai, jo humesha "I hate Love "ke slogan ke sath ghumti thi.

Rr:haan to kya karte aapki tarah har kisi ke sath flirt karte.

Sam:hey 1 correction I don't flirt wid gals, gals cum to flirt wid me , I jst respond dem.

Rr:yaa d biggest flirty of d world is my bst friend!!

Sam:Dats my personality!! Well leave abt me, 4m d tym I have cum I m seeing sum changes in u?? Got a true love India or still d same slogan??

Rr:its not dat "I hate love" sam, its jst dat I don't wanna fall in love , u'll not understand.

Guyz jst execuse me 4 a while.

She goes to d corner most pillar of d place.

She looks @ d moon & stars.

Rr*slf talk*: I don't hate love , its jst I fear to fall in love again coz I know true love rarely meets. (she looks @ swaron & viha sitting 2gethr & enjoying) Evry1 is not lucky like u guyzz , who meet wid dier love,kuch log humari tarah bhi hote hai , jinhe aapne pyaar k ehsaas toh hai, par apna pyaar yaad hi nahi….

Hr eyes bcum wet.

I know 1 year back b4 my accident I 2 lovd sum1 coz his love 4 me still resides deep in my heart , it was my memory which got vanished leaving behind his unknown love in my heart. Aur hume ye bhi pata hai, ki hume humare pyaar se alag hona pada, isliye aaj jab humein kuch bhi yaad nahi fir bhi humare dil mein us pyaar ka dard zinda hai..

tears start rolling down hr cheeks.

(luking @ dark sky she says):kyun nature mom q hum apne pyaar se alag hogaye aur aaj toh humein wo yaad bhi nahii.. kya humara pyaar sachha nahi tha jo humein wo mila hi nahi.. akhir kya hua hoga 1 saal pehle humein toh kuch bhi yaad nahi.. bas kuch sath hai toh us pyaar ka ehsaas jo hume kisi aur se pyaar karne se rokta hai.. kya hua ki humein humara pyaar yaad nahi par, but I'll be always loyal to my love, will nevr love any1 else dan HIM.. whom I don't evn remembr…

Den shee starts realizing hr unknown special feeling arousing 4 rey in hr heart, she remebrs all special tym she has spend wid rey..

Rr:No Rr u cant!! U cant feel 4 rey like dis.. u have to be loyal to ur love.. u cant love sum1 else.. u cant…

Rey kept on looking Rr talking to sky, he wanted to wipe hr tears.. but den he took aback his hands, wid hlplessness..

Rey*slf talk*: I know kriya tum mujhe yaad kar rahi ho.. humare pyaar ko yaad kar rahi ho.. jise tum kahi bhul gayi ho.. but c how true is our love dat it brought u back 4m London to India, although as Rr but i know dis innocent eyez filled wid love belongs jst to my Baatcutter. & I m sure d strength of our true love will surely bring back kriya 4m Rr. Ab bus mujhe ye janna hai ki tum kriya se Rr bani kaise?? Par ye kaam mai akele kaise karunga aaj tak toh humare love ke sare prblms maine aur Sw sath milkar solve kiye hai..(luking up to d sky) hey univrseji ab aap hi koi rasta dikhaiye meri tarah Sw ko bhi ye feel karva dijiye ki Rr hi kriya so dat hum dono milkar sab kuch theek kar sakein..

Rr cums back to d pool side, rey to follows her.

Rr:ok guyzz so lets go now, it s already late nyt!!

All of dem leave d place bodding gud-bye to Swamaira.

Rr:hey sam aap kaha ja rahe hai?? Aaj raat aap yahi rukenge humre sath humare ghar par, aur apaka luggage humne hotel se yaha mngava liya hai.

Sam:par Rr..

Rr:No execuse sam, we r meeting aftr so many dayzz so 2day nyt u'll stay wid us & dats it!!

Sam:As u say princess!!

The 3 had dinner @ swamaira's place.

Rr:Sam aap, is room mein so jayiye(pointing to d room where Rr's extra things r kept which do not get accomdatd in hr own room).

Rr:if u'll need something call me or Sw.

Sam nods & gets seatd on his bed.

He opens his bag & takes out a box, opens it & takes out sum photographs & lettrs out of it, caresses dem wid lot of essence in his eyes.

Rr sees passes by d room & witnesses sam caressing sum lettrs, she entrs his room.

Seeing Rr cuming Sam suddenly places d lettrs & othr things inside d pillow & hides d box.

Rr cums & sits nxt to him.

Rr:hmm.. to ab aap hmse cheeze bhi chhupane lage hai sam.

Sam:no princi aisa kuch bhi nahi hai..

Rr:Hum 1 saal se itne ache frenz hai sam aur aap toh kehte hai ki hum bachpan se dost hai toh kya hum aapko ithna bhi nahi pehchante ki aapki ankhen read kar sakein.. I know u were hiding love lettrs..

Sam:its nothing like dat Princi.

Rr:O common sam, now tell who's d lucky gal & y haven't u propsed hr yet??

Sam:princi , will u plzz stop??

Rr:No, I wont stop. I know u r in love ur eyez says so, common dude jst say hr wats in ur heart, koi ladki pagal hi hogi jo prince Samraat ko mana karagii.. & I m sure ki koi ladki aisa pagalpan nahi karegii, hr reply will be obviously yes..

Sam:Princi, will u let me sleep now otherwise I m leaving.

Rr:ok baba sorry I m going..

She moves out & den turns back again& says:Par apne dil ki baat usse zaroor keh dena,b4 it gets too late. Okay.. gyd nyt..

Sam:gud nyt.

She leaves.

Sam closes d door of his room & gets seatd back to his bed.

He takes out d lettrs hidden below pillow, caresses dem again & gently places dem inside d box & closes d box which has banner labled" LOVE = RAMAIRA"…

FINALLY DONE!!

plz spend few secs, & make a wish 4 my dear friend kinjal & me dat both of us get well soon as we both r suffering 4m fever dese days.

If 45-50 gud souls will wish den I m sure we'll be alryt soon..

Thank u guyzz..

Waiting 4 ur precious coments anxiously….

Oh ya precap remaing.

Precap:

Reyam & krisha inside a muddy ditch.

Rr:galti aapki thi Sw.

Sw:meri kya galti thi??

Shr:yaa , Sw admit it it was ur mistake.

Rey:hey , gals stop blaming Sw ok, waise bhi mistakes usually gals ki hi hoti hai.

p.s. todays chaptr's tiltle giving responsibility goes to Asma.

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@hARSHA_Neeti

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Posted: 13 years ago

my nxt post..

plzz read..

Hey frenzz , I hav sum prblm , hey choti se prblm hai tension mat lo…

Well prblm is , now sumtyms I wish to read sum of d previous chapters of dis but I don't know in which chaptr which scene is written & searching 1 scene takes a lot of tym..

So dere's only 1 prblm of d soln, i.e. giving titles to d chapters as sum of d writrs do.

But d actual prblm is , it takes me much tym to think a gud title 4 a chaptr so I m thinking to give dis wrk to u guyzzz(evil smile). Will u hlp me out wid dis plz??

Plzz , plzz do it 4 me..

What u have to do is dat aftr updating evry chaptr I'll name 1 among d regular readr's of d FF to give appropriate title to d chaptr jst read & dat person have to give a tiltle to d chaptr along wid dier comnts. This is what I have thot..

I hope u'll cooprate(baby face).

So d responsibility to name dis chaptr & last chaptr i.e. 31 & 32 goes to my CuteeShaitaan aka Kinjal.

Next tym othr friend whose name I'll tell wid nxt update.

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Neeti

@hARSHA_Neeti

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

plzz read!!

Hey so sorry sabko bahut wait karane ke liye..

Par u know electric cutoff going on in my town so cudnt write as I have jst PC now wid me..

Well wanna thanx all of u 4 d congo wishes u gave me 4 d new thread.thank u 4m d core of my heart.

& also thanx 4 d long cutee comnts givn by evry1. Almost all of u comntd so long jst as u did in party sequence…I thot of replying to evry's comnt but cudnt soory 4 dat ye electric prblm nahi hoti toh sure I wud have replied..

Dats y thanking all of u all2gethr 4 d sweet long comnts..

Love u loads..

Aur sabko wait karane ke compensation mein I m giving lamba wala update 2day..

Hope u'll like it…

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Neeti

@hARSHA_Neeti

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#10

😊congartulations to all of us...😊

"We hate but still love" has hit d century again dat too 4 third tym..

So hetric of centuries..

wowee.. i m so happy 2day i nevr dreamt dat i'll write any thing & when i'll write i'll get so much of sucess its jst like no dream evr seeni yet sumthing vry special cuming true..

& all d credit 4 dis success obviously goes to all of u, who loved is FF so much dat its celebrating its third century..

thanx to u all 4 ur long-long cutely decorated comnts who inspire me, motivate me to write more & more...

thank u soo much 2 each & evry readr 4m d core of my heart...

& ofcrse special thanx to spamming queens who have great credit in getting dis score 2day..

Love u all..

thank u soo much 4 supporting me in IF & making me feel so special abt myslf & my FF..

i'll try my bst to entertain u more thru cuming chappy's..

❤️wid Love❤️

Neeti

p.s. title giving responsibility 4 below chaptr is of -Yogini

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