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koi nahi hai chalo mai hi spam kar leti hun..
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hi meow task cumpltd.. thanx ..😊
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hey neeti...🤗
i am here for you..😉
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sorry di...
voh power cut ho gaya tha and then mai so gae thi!
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plzz read!!

Hey so sorry sabko bahut wait karane ke liye..

Par u know electric cutoff going on in my town so cudnt write as I have jst PC now wid me..

Well wanna thanx all of u 4 d congo wishes u gave me 4 d new thread.thank u 4m d core of my heart.

& also thanx 4 d long cutee comnts givn by evry1. Almost all of u comntd so long jst as u did in party sequence…I thot of replying to evry's comnt but cudnt soory 4 dat ye electric prblm nahi hoti toh sure I wud have replied..

Dats y thanking all of u all2gethr 4 d sweet long comnts..

Love u loads..

Aur sabko wait karane ke compensation mein I m giving lamba wala update 2day..

Hope u'll like it…

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Happy Kriyaansh friendzz

Chapter-32
*Swamaira's house*


Sw's room.
Sw took bath & is infront of d mirror, combing his hairs(zulfien).

Sw(shouting): Rr wake up!! We'll get late 4 d clg.
Rr's room
Rr(4m hr bed shouting back):Sw bas 2 minute.
(plzz c ,hey dis is d link of hr room i dont y but its not getting uploaded)
http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_C4L8XftIrHU/S7gmOzDdYMI/AAAEyo/qZSLi_bdV1Q/s1600/Girls-Bedroom-and-Living-room-3.jpg )


decoratd wid d following teddy racks & teddy collections.



Sw:No Rr , uth jao warna yaad hai na kal maine kya kiya tha..
Rr:Achha baba uth rahein hai, plzz kal ki tarah chillanna mat.
Sw:Dats like a gud gal .
He smiles.
Sw:ok get ready soon , I m waiting here 4 u.
Rr: yaa..
She cums out of d blanket , streches hr arms wide wid a cute smile & all of a sudden notices sumthing which multiplies d length of hr smile'
Rr(jumping out of joy): Jia'
Jia who was sitting on hr room's window flew to Rr on hearing hr cute-shrill voice.
Rr caressd Jia's soft feathrs.
Rr:Jia aap yaha kaise aayi??
In response Jia droppd a small card on Rr's lap which Jia had grippd in its beak.
Rr(picking up d card):ye kay???

She oppend it.
D chit read: Evrything in dis universe whom u love , care & need will never remain away 4m u'Dats my promise to u princess.. Have a happy tym wid Jia'
Rr twinkled hr eyez wid a blush, joy & smile on reading d note'
*on d way 2 clg*
Sw: thanx Rr.
Rr:4 what Sw??
Sw: 4 .. umm..(extending his ryt hand) Friends!!
Rr(wid surprise): we r living 2gethr 4m many days & 2day u r doing friendship wid me, anything special??
Sw:yaa.. d joy we had yesterday as friends..
Rr:Ruinig ur noodles!!
Sw:No sharing my icecream.
Rr smild , & shaking hands wid Sw.. ya friends Mr.philosophical.
Sw: yaa Miss.Attitude.
Both smild & entrd d clg.
*Classroom*
All d Loiusians sitting on dier seat coupld accept Sharon & rey.
Swamaira & Taani entrd.
Sw walkd & sat nxt to Sharon.
Taani walking rapidly to catch up seat nxt to rey & den suddenly bubble taani appeard.
Buble taani:Taani dheere chal, nahi toh roz ki tarah gir jayegi kal hi nayi sandal li hair oz-2 kitni nayi sandal legi.
Taani nods & reduces hr speed.
B4 taani cud reach rey Rr sttepd to rey, she didn't know y is she trying to ovrtake taani & get seat nxt to rey but it was jst hr heart said & she did widout evn realizing y is she yearning to do dis.
Taani:ye lo isne fir se baazi mar li.. par Krishna ji net oh kaha tha ki rey sirf kriya ke hain, fir humesha aisa kyu ho jata hai ki rey & Rr paas a jate hai..
Rey(leaning to Rr's ear):So princess sitting bside me, actually tried hard to get dis seat(naughty smile).
Rr(trying lame excuse): wo.. jst coz dis seat was vacant!! & nothing else. No trials to get d seat.
Rey:Rili??
Rr: yaa & also coz , I hav to say u sumthing.
Rey(in a romantic whisper):I m always ready to listen.
Rr tunred hr face 2wards rey, wid hr eyez wide open glittering as stars , wid white shine of moonlite & spark of sun beams more dan enuf of 4 rey to fall in love wid hr dis beautiful eyez again .
Rey slowly sinking in hr eyez was brought aback to dis world by hr sweet-shrill voice saying:Thank you.
Rey(blinking his eyez):What?? Thank you??
Rr:yaa Thank you..
Rey:4 what??
Rr: 4 promising me to give everything I love in dis universe..
Rey:Oh so u likd my gift.
Rr:NO!!
Rey:U didn't like it stil u said thanx.
Rr (hitting him sliglty on his head):Stupid I jst loved it , I was missing hr like hell & u brought it jst..(cut off by rey)
Rey:jst 2 c dis dazzling smile & shinig eyezz..
LLHH was jst to begin but unfortunately professer entrd saying:Assignment cumpltd students!!
Most of dem:Yes sir!!
Pr:ok den submit it 1 by 1 & I'll chek it here itslf.
Niky bro as usual havnt cumpltd startd praying t God 4 sum miracle.
God heard dier prayer & jst b4 dier turn bell rang, niky took breath of relief!!
*Coridor*
Loiusans walking.
Viky:y's dere crowd near notice board.
Rey:coz holidays ka notice laga hai.
Nil:wow dude holidays kitne din ki??
Shr:holidays par kyun??
Rey(facing nil): for 1 week ( & den facing to Sharon) qki maine petition file file kit hi dat we r tird of so many wrks & assignments so we need break & petition is answrd!!
Bharat: Ab 1 hafte tak ache se araam karunga aur garage jaunga.
Nil:Mai toh clubs jaonga..
Vilky:Mai toh apni diwaani ke sath..
Rey:hey stop day dreaming guyzz pehle puri new toh suno..
All :kaho.
Rey:Aftr d hlidays we have surprise test in which any qsn 4m any subject will b askd 4m d chapters which we have studied in in dis month.
Viky:Lo de di na bad news.
Vish:U mean holidays nahi study leave'
All:hmm'(making sad baby faces)
*Swamaira's house*
Evening 5:00 pm
*Drawing room*

Rr: New friend!!
Sw(cuming out of his room): yaa new friend!!
Rr:I m missing sumthing??
Sw:What , u have brought all most ur entire palace to dis house & now what r u missing??
Rr:A swing inside d house.



jst d swing is inside d house

Sw(wid a questiong face) :SWING inside d house.
Rr:yaa c dis , u have jst fix it here in dis corner.
Sw:tum na Rr ho 22 yrs ki par behave 2 yr ke kid ki tarah karti ho.
Rr:haan aur aap 22 yrs ke hokar 220 yrs ke saints ki tarah batien karte ho, common Sw its fun to b like yaar, chalo ab jaldi se ye jhula yaha hang kardo, I m bringing hammer & nails 4 d task.
Sw adjusts d stool , stands ovr it.
Rr:Daro mat , I m holding d stool tightly , aap nahi giroge.
Sw smiles & Rr hands ovr him d nail , hammer , d curvd iron bar requird 4 d task.
Sw:jhula do !!
Rr lifts d swing up wid a lot of effort & both hlping each othr hang it 4m d celing of d room.
Sw (stepping down 4m d stool):Done!! Anything else princess!!
Rr smiling: No, ab hum jhula jhulenge..
She happily sits ovr d swing & wid Sw's hlp starts swinging.
Rr:Aap bhi ayie na Sw sath mein jhulenge.
Sw: kitna chota sa jhula hai..
Rr:O ho, toh aap aur hum bhi toh itne lean & thin hai araam se jhulenge (saying dis she pulls Sw & makes him sit nxt to hr).
Both start swinging & enjoying.
Ting tong
Rr: job hi hai andar ajayiye , door is unlokd.
Loiusans(entering):Surprise!!
Sw:guyzz tum sab 1 sath all of a sudden!!
Viky:Dude surprise all of a sudden hi diya jata hai..
Sw:yaa , cum sit.
Rr:Sharon!! Plzz don't stare us like dis, wo humne aaj hi swinh fix kiya na isliye we were swinging 2gethr & me & Sw have jst bcum friends recently dats 2day morning itslf.
Swamaira stud up 4m d swing.
Sw:guyz please sit.All of dem get seatd in d sofa.
Rey:hey what was dat dude, small board outside d house labled "SwaMaira's place".
Sw:Nothing jst Swayam + Ramaira =SwaMaira, new friends!!
Nil:Oh so princi made a new friend.
Rr:yaa..
Shr:Rr, Sw y is d entire hostel so calm ??
Sw:Aaj se holidays ahi isliye sare hostlrs outing par gaye hai,& surprisingly is tym pure St.Louis campus mein humare alawa aur koi nahi hai , infact Principal sir & teachrs who reside hear r also in outing.
Viky:wow dats fantastic , pure clg campus mein sirf haum log hai ab kuch dhammal karte hai??
All of a sudden dey heard a loud sound which terrified evry1 excpt Rr.
Bharat:ye kaisi awaaz thi.
Rr: guyzz all of u plzz sit here , don't step outdoor I m cuming within few minutes, lagat hai unhe bhi pata chal gaya ki hostel campus aaj koi nahi hai..
She rushes to hr room & is back within 7 minutes but now she's cumpltly dressd up in black (trouser + skinfitting top) wid a bullet proof jacket , hanging a balck stiff bag @ hr back .
All of dem stared @ hr 4m toe to tip of hr head wid a big shock .
Again d same sound echoed in d hostel campus.
Rr:guyzz plzz stay inside, let me handle it.. plzz no1 will cum out of d house!!

rey:Rr but it sounds like bullet firing, how can we let u face it all alone.

Rr(wid disgust): plzz rey try & undrstand, i'll hnadle it, pitaaji told u all na dat im well traind 4 all dis, if u'll cum out it will create more complications so plzz stay inside & lemme go!!

Nil & Sw:but Rr we cant let u..

Rr:Trust me guyzz nothing will happen , i warn u all once more no1 will come out.

Sw: Rr is u have revolver (pointing to d revolvr fixd in hr waist belt).
Rr:relax Sw, licensed hai ,hum sirf ise self defnce ke liye use karte hai.. ok I m going & plzz no1 will step out.
Saying dis she steps out & locks d door 4m outside.
She lowrs down d bag she's hanging , takes out a electric machine , ordrs two gaurds to wrap d entire outr walls of d house wid wires attachd to d electric machine, dey do d job quikly , she switches on d machine.
Rr:Dekhiye is wire karan ghar ke pure diwaron par electric current hai , isliye plzz aap mein se koi walls ko mat chhuna .
Rr(to gaurds @ d door): suno aap dono , door par hi rahenge aur ye dhyaan rakhenge ki anadar jitney bhi log hai unmein se koi bahar na aye.
jo log anadar hai unhe inform kar dijiye current ke bare mein , hum unki life ke sath koi risk nahi le sakte.
Gaurds: par raajkumaari ji agar aapko humari zaroorat padi toh bhi hum..
Rr:toh bhi aap dono yaha se nahi hilenge, agar humari jaan bhi chali jaye fir bhi nahi.. aap log yahi khade ho kar humre frenzz ko guard karenge.
Gards:Raajkumaari ji..
Rr:ye humare ordrs hai..
Dey nod.
Rr calld the 20 gaurds of d day shift thru cell to cum here urgently, while she had now 20 gaurds wid hr of day nyt shift.
Rr took a deep breath & diald a no.
Rr(thru hr cell): Where have dey reachd.
Guard(on d cell phone):raajkumari ji , wo log abhi hostel campus enter kar rahe hai..hum koshish kar rahe hai unhe rokne ki par wo..(cutoff by Rr).
Rr:Aane dijiye unhe humne tayyari kar li hai apni suraksha ki.
All d while Loiusans who have arranged demselves d two window panes were staring @ Rr , glaring hr actions , wid shok & horror.
Dey arrivd & d fight began, all d gaurds trying to protect Rr 4m d gang of killers. 1 among dem reachd Rr & tried to give hr a punch but b4 dat Rr caught hold of his fist , twisted his wrist , & turning him round made him fall on d floor , beagan hitting him wid kicks , by dat tym another 1 came & tried to hit Rr's head wid a iron rod, Rr cud smell d danger 4m behind, she moved aside & d fellow fell upon d already fallen 1 hitting him wid d rod. Rr left dem & movd ahead to handle othr rouges.
All d while She fought Loisans kept staring @ hr widout evn blinking dier eyez, shock, terror was prevailing inside d hose & fyt , bloodshed, bullet fire was prevailing ioutside d house.
All d gaurds & Rr wore bullet proof jacket so no1 was hurt thru bullets.
Aftr a long run many of d killer gang & sum gaurds were injurd, othrs were still fighting.
1 among dem trapped Rr, holding a knife (dat murder knife in his hand).
Rr (pointing revolvr towards him):Age mat badhna warna hum..
Gang man(GM): kya karengi raajkumaari ji , itni nazuk kalayi se goli chalayengi..
He steppd ahead.
Rr(wid a anger ):humne kaha age mat badho !! warna tumhare liye bilkul sahi nahi hoga.
GM:Himmat hai goli chalane kit oh chaliye.. hum bhi dekhe 1 raajkumaari goli chlate kaisi lagti hai.
Rr*slftalk* : himmat toh itni hai, ki revolvr ki puri 6 goliyon tumhare sar par utar dun, par hum ye nahi chte ki humare hatho kisi ka murder ho. Hey nature mom ,plzz hlp kya karein if I don't shoot him , he'll stab me.. eithr I have to die or he have to .. koi toh rasta hoga jisse hum ise mare bina hi khud ko bacha lein..
*inside d house*
Rey:kitne hlpless hai hum wahan Rr ki life danger main hai aur hum yahan sirf use chup-chap khade hokar dekh rahein hai..
Nil:yaa dude 1st tym in life im feeling so hlpless.
Sw:par kar bhi kya sakte hai, samne do gaurds kahde hai hume rokne ke liye, aur agar window panes ya door ko tod kar bahar jana chahe toh wo bhi nahi kar sakte sabme electric current hai..
Back to Rr.
D gangman steppd ahead ,Rr steepd back, he again steppd ahead .
Rr taking a sep back again: hum akhri baar keh reh age mat badho..
D GM wid evil smile steppd ahead & Rr wid hlplessness steppd back.
He tepd ahead, she steppd back & den he's jst about to stab hr'
To be continued soon'.
I know aise cliffhanger mein hang karne ke liye aap sabko mujhe shoot karne ka man kar raha hoga.. but chill guyzz I'll continue soon'
plzz comnt i m waiting anxiously 4 ur precious comnts...dey rili mean a lot to me...😊

p.s.plzz read my below post also.. plzz plzz read it..

Edited by hARSHA_Neeti - 13 years ago
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Awesome Update..


Swayam n Rr friends...


Their friendship is too adorable..


Rey is sweet he brought Jia for her..


Rr sat beside Rey...


Their scenes were amazing..


Loved it totally.


Loved d swing too...hope i had one in my house.

Edited by snigdha_arsha - 13 years ago
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my nxt post..
plzz read..

Hey frenzz , I hav sum prblm , hey choti se prblm hai tension mat lo…

Well prblm is , now sumtyms I wish to read sum of d previous chapters of dis but I don't know in which chaptr which scene is written & searching 1 scene takes a lot of tym..

So dere's only 1 prblm of d soln, i.e. giving titles to d chapters as sum of d writrs do.

But d actual prblm is , it takes me much tym to think a gud title 4 a chaptr so I m thinking to give dis wrk to u guyzzz(evil smile). Will u hlp me out wid dis plz??

Plzz , plzz do it 4 me..

What u have to do is dat aftr updating evry chaptr I'll name 1 among d regular readr's of d FF to give appropriate title to d chaptr jst read & dat person have to give a tiltle to d chaptr along wid dier comnts. This is what I have thot..

I hope u'll cooprate(baby face).

So d responsibility to name dis chaptr & last chaptr i.e. 31 & 32 goes to my CuteeShaitaan aka Kinjal.

Next tym othr friend whose name I'll tell wid nxt update.

Edited by hARSHA_Neeti - 13 years ago
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Happy kriyansh neeti...
i am loving the bonding b/w swayam and Rr...
omg jia is there with that cute letter...😍
and rey send that letter...😃
and finally swamaira become friends...😃

Taani:ye lo isne fir se baazi mar li.. par Krishna ji net oh kaha tha ki rey sirf kriya ke hain, fir humesha aisa kyu ho jata hai ki rey & Rr paas a jate hai..
krishna ji ko bolo taani ko ye bhi bataenge ki Rr and kriya are same...🤣

swamaira sath me jhula lagate hai...love thet scene...

Viky:Dude surprise all of a sudden hi diya jata hai..🤣

and board written SwaMaira place..love it..
love the fight sequence...
Rr is such a strong girl...
jaldi se next update kar dena...
waiting eagerly for the next part...


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Happy kriyaansh neeti di!!! 🤗🤗🤗

Swamaira finally friends yippie!!!!!!!!!

Aww such a cute gift by rey 😳

Haha taani again lost d opportunity to b with rey woho!!!!!! i luved it! 😆

Ramyaansh sitting together and ramaira saying thanx to rey was soo good!

Rey:jst 2 c dis dazzling smile & shinig eyezz..

I luved this dialogue a lot! 😍

Hehe bach gaye nicky bro warna mar jaate sach mein 😆

Are waah! kya holidays hain! holidays mein bhi baithke padho waah-2 waah-2!!

*phew* truely swayam theek kehta hai ki ramaira 22 yrs ke hone ke baavjood bhi 2 yrs ki bacchi ki tarah beave karti hai! 😆

Sharon staring at swamaira! lolzz... jealous 😆

Oh god d fight sequence was really very nyc!

Di ab aap bhi cliffy pe chodne lagi unwaah! ye sabko kya nayi bemaari lagi hai cliffy pe chodne ki 😭

Aur aap toh koi demand bhi nahi rakhti jo hum use pura karke aapse update karva len unwaah! 😭

Overall awsm update di!

Ok about d small note.

Its ok but mujhse mat puchna i really suck at it

Finally finished with d comment *phew* tiring

Ab batana achha hai ya nahi?
Edited by abhiyakreya - 13 years ago

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