MAANEET FF JAANE TU YA JAANE NA #6 link #7 pg135 - Page 57

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Posted: 12 years ago
maan apni geet k pass kb pahuchega...
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oops bhul gai...happy raksha bandhan di..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
congrets ... and jane to ya janne na 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Maan is determined to get back geet 😛


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Posted: 12 years ago
Hello friends

I am sorry for not giving regular updates but my health as well as my work is making me mad anyways just wanted to ask you'll what would u like me to update today Mere Humsafar or Jaane Tu?

Tell me fast so that I can start writing

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Posted: 12 years ago
JTYJN plzz i cant wait to see Maan in action to get back his lady love :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for your love and support dear friends.Here is the next update I hope each one of u will enjoy reading it. Since majority of u told me to update Jaane Tu I decided to go with it.
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PART 39

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The tears that Geet had controlled for so long crossed the boundaries of her eyes as soon as she heard this message. The promo ended and the press was invited for lunch and all of them started moving towards the hall

Geet was moving slowly it seemed she was sure that he is going to come and once again her eyes had started to weave a dream but this time along with her heart her dreams had to take the permission of her mind before going ahead.

The TV screen blurred but there was determination in Maan's eyes, Geet's one glimpse had given him a new hope and this time he was all set to convert this hope into reality which was more magical than a paradise

Maan contacts his secretary and orders him to book the tickets of Los Angeles

He completed his shoot and rushed to his Mansion and started packing his bag

He got a call from his secretary Dev

Maan: Haan Dev ticket book ho gaye na? [I hope the ticket has been booked Dev?]

Dev: Ji Sir 2 din ke baad aapki flight hai [Yes Sir your flight is after 2 days]

Maan: Kya? 2 din? Nahi mujhe aaj ka ticket chahiye 2 din mein naajane kya ho jaaye maine pehle hi kafi waqt barbaad kar diya hai ab ek lamhe ki deri bhi main hone nahi dunga [What? 2 days? No I need a ticket today I have already wasted a lot of time before but now I can't afford to waste a single minute I want the ticket today at any cost]

Dev: Par Maan Sir aaj ka ticket maine issliye nahi liya kyunki weather forecast department ke mutabik aaj ka mausam thik nahi hai mujhe lagta hai aapko 2 din ke baad hi jaana chahiye aur waise bhi shayad hi aaj aapko ticket mile [But Maan Sir according to the weather forecasting department today's weather is not fit for travelling that's one of the reasons why I avoided taking today's ticket besides this I am not sure if at all any ticket is available for today's flight]

Maan: Mujhe mausum ki koi parwah nahi Dev kuch bhi karo mujhe aaj ke flight ki ticket chahiye agar VIP ticket nahi mili tab bhi chalega par ticket mujhe aaj hi chahiye. It's a humble request [I don't care about weather Dev do anything but get me a ticket today if u don't get one in the VIP quota that's also fine with me but I want a ticket today at any cost. It's a humble request Dev]

Dev: Sir aap request kyun kar rahe ho? Aaapke liye toh jaan bhi haazir hai ab chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye main puri koshish karunga ke aapki khwahish ko pura kar saku aap bus khuda se dua kijiye ke main apni koshish mein kamiyaabi haasil kar saku [Why are u requesting me Sir? I can sacrifice my life with your one hint. I will try my level best to fulfill your wish U just pray to God so that I will be successful in my mission]

Maan: Thanks Dev

The call ends

Maan recollects the warning that Dev had given about the weather

A strange smile made way to his face.

He picked up Geet's photograph and caressed it with utmost love

Maan:

"Patchad ka mausum guzarne ko hai

Tumhari ek muskurahat se baharo ka chaman jhilmilane ko hai

Khaufnak andhero ke pal beet chuke

Ab toh muskurahato ki kaliyaan mehekne ko hai"

[The climate of autumn is going to fade away

With one smile of yours the paradise of spring is shining brightly on its way

The moments of dark terror have been washed away

Now its time for the buds of smile to fragrant in a special way]

He placed a loving kiss on her lips and held her photo vey close to his heart as if promising her that he will ensure to give life to the words that he had just spoken

He removed all his old clothes that he had with him before he become the great MSK

Many of these outfits were gifted to him by Geet

He wanted to win her back as her Maan and not as Maan Singh Khurana.

He knew Geet was always in love with the simple and ordinary friend of hers who had big dreams; she was never interested in the rich and famous MSK

His heart started bleeding as he remembered another shameful sin of his

He had accused and insulted her true love by calling it a trap to gain money and publicity

Oh he was so wrong but he faced a tougher challenge as now he had absolutely no idea how was he supposed to make Geet realize the depth of his love

He was clueless; his brain was not working and he somewhere deep down he knew if he wanted to get back his Geet he had to open his heart in front of her by showering her with his unconditional love

Yes his love is the only medicine which can heal her wounds.

He had to meet her at any cost but before taking any further step he decided to take the blessings of the Almighty.

PLS LISTEN TO THIS SONG

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yoj-4iL5kBw


Neemat khuda kar zara ek dafa

Dil dene ka keh zara falsafa

He went to the temple that he had built in name of Geet in his Mansion

He never believed in the existence of the Almighty but he was a changed man now; Geet's love had changed him

Ye naacheez ek cheez uski maange hai tujhse

Musafir ye dehleez uski maange hai tujhse

In this entire phase of 3 months he had lived his life in a way through which he could fulfill every small and big wish of his Geet

He removed his RING and placed it in front of the Almighty and bowed down his head in shame as well as with a request to grant him the divine blessing which will help him to meet his Geet

Khudaya tu bata kaha uska pata pata kar

Main uske bina bepata hoon bepata bepata bepata hoon

He lighted a diya and worshipped the special RING first by placing the diya on his palm and by moving it in a circular manner around the ring

His palm was getting a burning sensation due to the heat that was coming out from the diya but he continued to worship the epitome which marked the sacredness of their relationship without making his pain evident

Khudaya tu bata kaha uska pata pata kar

Main uske bina bepata hoon bepata bepata bepata hoon

Without removing the diya from his hand he took a small bowl of milk and washed the SPECIAL RING with it; he knew he had committed a sin by destroying and insulting the essence of their relationship but now he had realized that this RING was one of the strong threads that will help him in uniting with his Geet

It seemed God was with Maan or maybe God wanted to decorate his road with thorns whatever the reason Dev was successful in getting a ticket for Maan on the very same day giving him a temporary relief

Maan completed his packing by placing the photographs and the belongings of Geet in it and also the traces of all the small and big memories that both of them had shared with each other. He kept the sindoor box carefully and kissed his RING with determination and left for the airport

He boarded his flight and waited patiently for the plane to fly

Meanwhile, Brad and Geet were promoting their movie in a brilliant way

Prem had suggested an idea of carrying out a musical tour at important places in Hollywood in order to promote their musical movie

Brad and Geet were going to perform live in these functions and it was decided that the money which would be collected during their stage shows would be donated in charity

Their movie was creating waves in the industry right from the very first day

Great promos and teasers were successful in generating the seeds of anxiety among the audience

Geet was an Indian actress and hence Sanju put forth a suggestion of promoting this movie among the Indian masses that reside in Los Angeles

Brad was super impressed with this idea and for a change Prem also appreciated Sanju's vision

Basically all 5 of them were coming up with unique ideas to promote their movie

Infact Brad decided to start their musical tour from today itself

He finalized a location and ordered his men to publicise this news immediately

Brad, Geet, Prem, Sanju and Adi started doing the preparations for their first destination

Brad got to know about the bad weather hence he decided to go by road instead of taking a flight

Bezikr Befikr mann ke dhundhalke mein yun aaye

Lamho ke iss bheed mein

Mujhko pal de fursat ke

Madmast kambakt fikrein dhikaye

Oh itraye

Meanwhile,

Maan's problems were touching its heights as the bad weather had forced the flight to land at some other place

He was getting restless as his heart was giving him signals that Geet was going out of his reach and if he doesn't reach on time then it would become more difficult for him to find her

He was making a fool of himself by asking the officials again and again about the flight

He held his RING close to his heart and tried to find peace for few moments

Brad and his group of friends comprising of Geet, Prem, Sanju and Adi had left for their destination

All of them were very happy but Geet was getting a strange sensation which was giving her signals that her Maan was very close to her

Her mind did not allow her to get weak this time and forced her to concentrate on the discussion related with the movie promotion

They were going to go in a different city to promote their first movie and it was almost an 8 hour ride for them

As soon as they entered the city Geet's heartbeats started to pace rapidly

She held her BRACELET tightly and closed her eyes

The route that they had selected allowed them to cross the airport of that city and this was the same city where Maan's flight had landed

Bus ek khayal uska hai din ki fitrat badal de

Dil dene ka ye zara falsafa

Hai chaha usse shidattose yun tuth karke

Maan felt breathless for a second as he could feel Geet's fragrance in the breeze

He started walking towards the road; some of the officials tried to stop him but right now he could only understand the language of Geet's love

He pushed one of the officials and ran like a maniac on the road shouting on top of his voice

Maan: Geet… Geet

But alas Maan missed Geet just by a fraction of a second

Geet did not dare to open her eyes as she was too scared to weave a dream again

She pretended to stay asleep although her heart had successfully heard the voice of her soul, her Maan

Wo kyun na mila mudato se yun ruth kar ke

Maan went on his knees as his eyes did not appreciate his feelings

He was sure that his Geet was very close to him and now his job had become more difficult

Khudaya tu bata kaha uska pata pata kar

Main uske bina bepata hoon bepata bepata bepata hoon

He decided to walk on the road in an attempt to locate her but a strong hand on his shoulder prevented him to move ahead

One of the official informed Maan that the weather was better now and very soon the flight would be resumed

Khudaya tu bata kaha uska pata pata kar

Main uske bina bepata hoon bepata bepata bepata hoon

Maan had no choice; he started walking with the official but his eyes were fixed on the road till the time he entered the premises of the airport

He boarded his flight with a heavy heart as the breeze was giving him signals that U deserve the pain that u going through

U will meet her but not so soon

U need to convince Destiny that u deserve an Angel like Geet or else be ready to lead a lonely life and try to find peace in her memories

PRECAP: Adi: "Maan yaha kya kar raha hai? Zarur isne TV pe Geet ko dekh liya hoga nahi main iska saaya bhi apni behen pe padne nahi dunga mujhe kuch karna hi hoga" [What is Maan doing here? I guess he must have seen Geet's footage on one of the channels; I need to do something this time I won't let Maan's shadow to ruin my sister's life]

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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely Update...
Dev s very loyal to maan...loved his character even if he was there only for a short tym...
Poem was so touching...
His determination was well shown in these lines...
Geet s fully aware of maan's presence but she dont want to believe it fearing it would again b her dream..
Maan noes ds tym he has to try hard to find his geet..and he got the first proof of that..
So beautiful one...first obstacle was weather...
next obstacle seems to b Adi...
Edited by Remya_Pillai - 12 years ago

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