MAANEET FF JAANE TU YA JAANE NA #6 link #7 pg135 - Page 11

Created

Last reply

Replies

633

Views

81.6k

Users

168

Likes

2.2k

Frequent Posters

minnie_tweetie thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
rocking update piya
what do i say..
maan actually deserved the pain...finally he realized a bit, the pain he gave to geet
m actually looking forward,,,,but maan in hospital??

loved prem and geet's bonding yar
how sweetly he answered brad's answers
u rocking
keep it up


Atiffa thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago

awesome
loved it
Prem loved her but above all he respected and care about her feelings
Maan deserve this
this is only the beginning
Cont soon
Luv
TC
Atiffa

jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
I felt sad abt Prem's silent luv.Prem geet conversation was so emotional.Maan gor dejected by NT.He regrets hurting Geet.God change in him
cherieLover thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
dii where are you?
waiting 4 update na
please update soon
_Maaneet_ thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
waiting for the next part...
update soon
princes939 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
Waiting
Plz Update soon!!!!



_______________
MG ss
piya- thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for your love and support dear friends.Here is the next update I hope each one of u will enjoy reading it. I would be introducing some new twists in the story very soon so be prepared for it😉
love-Piya
PART 34


PLS LISTEN TO THIS SONG

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RUQck2-DCjc

Music

Maan's feet automatically moved towards the broken glass pieces as he could see Geet's face in it

Her face was looking so pale so tired and completely shattered exactly like the broken pieces of glass

It seemed that he was not alone Geet's soul was still there with him to share his grief and to lend him a shoulder where he could cry

She was crying because she could feel his pain atleast this was what his heart believed

His heart started dominating him and requested him not to allow her to go away from him this time

Jab jab tere paas main aaya ek sukoon mila

Jise main tha bhooltha aaya wo wajood mila

He tried to touch her face but before his thoughts could cross this barrier the doors of his imagination were closed and blood started oozing out from his fingers which were a proof that he was all alone

Jab aaye mausam gum ke tujhe yaad kiya

O'Jab sehme tanhapan se tujhe yaad kiya

Knowingly or unknowingly the true words of his heart made way to his mouth

Maan: Geet'.Geet'

Dil'samal ja zara

Hollywood, Late night

Brad had planned to shoot a late night scene for the movie and Geet was all ready to give her best shot when all of a sudden she started feeling restless

Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu

There was a strange uneasiness in the air which was forcing her heart to skip a beat

Dil yahi rukh ja zara

She placed her hand on her bracelet and for unknown reasons a shiver ran down her spine

Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu

Brad called the shot but Geet was lost in her own world, she was drowned in someone's thoughts' a person whose name was imprinted on her soul

Music

Maan picked up the box of sindoor from the floor as slowly realization struck him

He was so happy till the time Geet was with him, but today he was a body without soul

Was his biggest gamble his greatest loss?

Aisa kyun gar hua

Jaanu na main jaanu na

All of a sudden he could sense Geet's fragrance in the air

He could hear the beats of her anklets in his room

Her angelic smile, her innocent face, her cute naughty antics started haunting his mind and heart

He wanted her back maybe not to gain something but because he had realized that he had lost a gem'

Dil'samal ja zara

Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu

This was the first time that he, the great MSK was rejected by someone

By tasting his own medicine he got to know the silent cries of Geet which she covered through the mask of her beautiful smile whenever he gave her pain

Dil yahi rukh ja zara

Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu

He was shattered as Naintara ignored him and showed him the true place that he possessed in her life through her actions but'Geet was great as she always supported him in every decision of his and showered him with love and contentment but instead of loving her back he pushed her in an ocean of remorse

Oh'why was he realizing his mistake? Why was he feeling ashamed of his actions? Why was he remembering Geet?

Music

Brad was repeating his words "Action" but his words had no effect on Geet as she was paralyzed for few seconds

She removed her trembling hand from her bracelet and started observing the bracelet intently

Tears threatened to flood her cheeks as she realized he was remembering her

Yes'he had taken her name but his voice sounded so painful?

Her breaths became uneven as an unknown fear passed through her senses

"Was he fine?"

Jis raah pe hai ghar tera aksar waha se haan main hoon guzra

He entered his room and tried to find answers behind his guilt by understanding the words of his soul

The sunbeams were giving him a prickling sensation and were trying to remind him of the tortures that he gifted Geet

He was burining in guilt as he recollected every cruel act of his which added to his sin'a sin of crushing the feelings of an innocent soul'of his Geet

Shayad yahi dil mein raha tu mujhko mil jaaye kya pata

Oh'it sounded perfect his Geet'yes Maan's Geet for a second his heart was at peace but this did not last long as, the wind started moving dramatically forcing the the curtains of his window to dance to an angry beat which showed him the mirror of his cheap nature

Once again he was ashamed as he heard an echo of some cruel and disgusting words "Mrs. Geet Maan Singh Khurana sounds so funny"

He wanted to kill himself for stooping so low'he realized he is selfish but for the first time he was not able to meet his gaze

He only knew he wanted her back'he was missing her but what was the reason behind this sudden realization?

Kya hai ye silsila

jaanu na main jaanu na

He was confused but, he knew he was wrong

He had commited a sin'yes a sin of destroying someone who loved him unconditionally

He started hating himself and without thinking twice he banged his head on the wall non stop in an attempt to reduce his guilt to some extent but the burden kept on increasing as now he knew he had disrespected a divine relationship by naming it as a GAME

Blood started oozing out from his head but he failed to find solace

His guilt reached its peak and he smashed his head on the glass of a nearby mirror in an attempt to punish himself

Dil'samal ja zara

Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu

Geet felt as if someone had stabbed her heart with a sharp knife

She placed her hand on her chest as she could feel the pain

She knew her Maan was in some danger without thinking twice she started running outside as if trying to reach Maan before he lands in some trouble

Dil yahi rukh ja zara

Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu

Brad and Sanju were totally confused with Geet's behaviour.

Sanjana tried to stop Geet but her eyes could see only one man her Maan'she had to find him yes she had to find him'

She could feel his pain and she had to do something to soothe him

Music

Blood was dripping from Maan's head and was giving signals that he might be approaching to a dreadful end but this realization gave him some peace as he knew death was also a small punishment for his unforgivable sin

How could he insult the light of his life in his ignorance?

He believed a witch (NT) and killed the love of his angel (Geet) by accusing her and questioning her love?

But today he knew he was wrong his feelings were shaky'She had submitted herself completely'she wrote her dignity to his name and gave him the most divine moment of his life but he destroyed it's essence and purity by terming it as a weak moment

He crushed a glass in between his hands and punished himself by allowing the glass pieces to penetrate his palm


Kuch bhi nahi jab darmiyaan phir kyun hai dil tere hi khwab bunta

He tried to open a shelf wherein he had seen a bottle of Honey few days back..Naintara had bought this bottle for herself and by mistake she had left it in Maan's house

Maan was finding it difficult to stand but he had to punish himself he emptied the entire content of the honey bottle in a jar and took out some sleeping pills from the adjoining shelf

He introduced all the sleeping pills in the honey and was just about to drink it when he felt a strange force that was requesting him to go ahead

He could see Geet in front of him with a glass of almond milk


Chaha ke de tujhko bhula par ye bhi mumkin ho na saka

Her eyes were depicting love, Maan wanted to hug her but he did not find the strength to go ahead as all his confusions vanished

He knew he loves her but today he won't be selfish as, he was aware he was a devil and he did not deserve the love of an angel

His Geet deserved all the happiness of this world but his sins were not allowing this right

Yes he knew what he wanted to do

He had to die as he did not deserve Geet but before dying he wanted to confess one thing

Kya hai ye mamla

Maan: I love u Geet'I love u

There was no deceit, no hidden element, no fraud in this confession of Maan

This time he understood the depth of these sacred words but alas the owner of his heart was not there in front of him

He deserved this 'yes he deserved this

He closed his eyes and picturized Geet's face for one last time and invited death to take him in its folds by drinking the honey and sleeping pill mixture in one go

Jaanu na main jaanu na

After some time, Nakul saw Maan lying in a pool of blood'some traces of honey and the undissolved parts of the sleeping pills were also lying in this blood pool

The sight was horrible but Nakul somehow managed to act quickly and with the help of the other servants he took Maan to the hospital

Dil'samal ja zara

Geet felt as if someone had snatched her breath away'she could see the messenger of death knocking the doors of her heart

No, this can't happen, she won't allow this to occur but what was she supposed to do?

It seemed God cleared her confusion as she saw a church

Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu

She entered the church and with all sincerity and honesty she bowed down in front of the Almighty

She joined her hands and closed her eyes

There was only one prayer that her heart voiced

Geet: Unka khayal rakhna Babaji [Pls take care of him O Almighty]


Dil yahi rukh ja zara

Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu

It was strange she was praying for the safety of a person whom she hated the most'but was this the truth?

Does she really hate him or was she trying to hide her love behind the curtains of hatred?

Dil'samal ja zara

Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu

Destiny had once again started playing a game with Maaneet's life

Geet was pretending of forgetting him but the truth was her heart was still affected by his name or else how was it possible for her to understand his pains when they were miles apart'

Maan had finally realized his love for Geet but the main question is will Destiny give him another chance to get back his soul, his Geet or would he lead his life like a living dead?

Only time can answer this question but there is another truth that acts as a silver lining in this situation'the one and only truth

"TRUE LOVE ALWAYS FINDS A WAY"

PRECAP: Will Maan survive?Will God answer Geet's prayers?😕😭

PLS PRESS D LIKE BUTTON N DO COMMENT

ALL THOSE WHO WANT A PM ADD ME TO UR BUDDY LIST

Love-Piya


Part 35: Page 40

Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
tanvi04 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
mindblowing eagerly waiting for next part
namita25 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
awww that's awesome part...
so Maan finally realised that he loved Geet...but I guess it's too late now...n Geet though far from Maan could sense that he is in troulble...well that's the power of love...

Remya_Pillai thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful update...
So maan s realizing wat he had done to an angel!!!
Geet still feels his pain even though she s far away...
This is the start of msk's doom..or can say selfish man's doom..

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: dellzcreationz

2 months ago

Aradhana & Reyaansh SS : Na Jaane Kyun (last chp + epilogue pg 3)

COVER BY AISHWARYA (Mystic_Muse) SUMMARY Suzanne Miller , an Indian Origin Canadian Citizen adopted by the Miller family, who goes on a quest to...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".