ArShi:Destiny With TRAILER Thread I

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Johny S Raj

@Johny.S.Raj

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

Nice one thanks for the pm

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Siona

@.m.a.r.y.s.i.o.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

amazing work yaar...btw are u staying in us?ur giving every detail of ther so clearly...amazing job

Edited by Sio_AngeL - 13 years ago

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...Penknife...

@...Penknife...

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#73

love this arnav

anjie lil sis huh??? gr8 plot

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FairyLiquidSoap

@FairyLiquidSoap

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#74

quite interesting will wait a while before commenting want to see how you are going to carry the story forward and thank you for the PM much appreciated

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Suhana

@Summer_Rain

Sparkler

+ 11

Posted: 13 years ago

#75

awesome one..😊
thanks alot for the PM...

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landrin

@landrin

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#76

Hey your updates are awesome
You seem to be too good in literature, vocabulary, and business...
Loving the story already..

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Joti

@winnie7500

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#77

Black satin sheets..Oh lord..

Does that ever paint a picture or what?!

I absolutely LOVED this line: "He pranced towards his office like a panther, robbing every one of their ease."

And Rita Skeeter as the interviewer..Wow. Hah. I suppose every story needs its bit of Harry Potter input :)

By far this is the best update so far. Of course the reason for this is simple: Arnav.

We've gotten Khushi. And now Arnav. What types of chemical explosions shall occur when these two finally meet..

Also, I actually prefer the length of the updates as it is right now. I don't find it to be too long. Perhaps a few cliffhanger precaps or something of that sorts could spruce it up, but as for the length, I find it to be perfect.

WIth that said, update sooonn! '

Ps- Only 2 typos this time :p

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TheAphrodite

@TheAphrodite

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#78

I love it !! Thanks for pm ing me I loved itt!! Ur amaziinnnggg !! :D update soon :)

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ekiholo

@ekiholo

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#79

hey just read it all ta once!it was nice!!but when arnab n khushi will meet??thanx 4 pm!

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Rehanna aka Parri

@Black_Paradize

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#80

hey thanks alot for the pm yaar...love this FF alot...love little khushi in this FF love shashi garmian and khushi;s bonding... love the concept ... like it alot...do update soon and when r u bringing up khushi and Arnav's encounter yaar... eagerly waiting for tht...