ArShi:Destiny With TRAILER Thread I - Page 47

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Posted: 13 years ago
hey dear wonderful update and do pm me more of ur pms
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Posted: 13 years ago
I like the plot buildup in this story! Keep writing
Edited by trpbabe - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
ok first of all, thanks a ton for the LOOONG update dear!! That was so awesome yaar! ❤️

The whole chapter was a pleasure to read, you interspersed it with so many memorable moments of the show that I had a silly and huge grin on my face while reading it 😃 Right from the beginning to the end every incident was beautifully and realistically portrayed...

Khushi's reluctance to look at him after what happened last night, Arnav's determination to apologise, Payal's emotional blackmail, the dance scenes... All of it simply brilliant.. Loved the dance scenes esp, they cracked me up! 😆 what an attempt that was man!!!

You should have put up a pic of Khushi's dress yaar, went mad trying to imagine our doll in something like that! was drooling for a while then 😳 God I tell you Arhi make me go crazy 🤣The whole club scene was nice.. Loved the fact that she herself is beginning to think of him in a different light and has on a subconscious level thought that her world is toppling over again. This reminds me of what she said in her discussion about love, that the day she fell in love with someone the world would turn over or something of that sort... So cupid is taking aim, eh??!! 😉

My oh my, Arnav has acknowledged to himself that he lusts for her, that in itself is a huge thing re.. M very curious to know what he does about this situation now!! thnx a ton for the pm dear! Do update soon.. take care
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow fabulous update

"That is it… I have never seen worse buffoons trying to "dance" than you two. So go far away from my sight before I literally combust into flames!"🤣🤣

"Maybe the heat has finally seeped through your bald head before it was just blindingly hitting the top and blinding our eyes," Arnav snapped at the instructor, clearly hitting a nerve and rounded himself to help Khushi.

Payal knew Arnav would have the guy's head roasting on the barbecue.😃

However, Arnav was red only for a different matter. He glared at the dance instructor at the abrupt way he ended their dance or whatever they were doing. He was so damn close to apologizing to her, and then he had gone ahead and dropped her!🤣🤣🤣


It was funny, intense & finally Arnav is lusting for Kushi😍

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Posted: 13 years ago
Just read ur note on page 64 can't believe the cheek of some readers writing to the writer & pointing out the story is not moving forward 🤣

Well, let me tell you the story is moving forward, in each chapter it has moved forward

Thank God I read the note cause i was confused with the name changing

U write beautifully & each chapter has been better than the previous one

Kushi anger is totally justified

Arnav curiosity is also at good pace, his not pushed his limits with her, in chapter 12 his finally admitted his lust, his growing fond of her, love ur pace with the updates the only complain i have is I would love to have more updates may be 2 in a week cause i am enjoying this FF 😍
Edited by undercoverhappy - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Two days going on three.. and still waiting for the next posting.
Update sooon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Preview because i am still writing the next part and i wanted to see more people commenting😛
Take Care,
😉


For the rest of the day, nothing disastrous struck and Arnav carefully managed to have some late lunch all the while avoiding his relatives who were hovering everywhere like bees. Part of the reason why he had locked himself in the room was because the stupid old aunties were constantly pulling his cheeks and asking whether he wanted a 'gori chitti' girl to bear his children. "What the f**k. You aren't serious," he had mumbled while shaking his head. By dinner time, his cheeks were bruised and red clearly the old aunties so idiotically had mistaken his skin for elastic. He could barely eat his food, and his wine was out as well. He had simply stuck to soup, like a sick patient and made angry faces at everyone throughout the entire evening. All this time, however, he noticed the crazy girl sitting quietly, avoiding his stare, and no glares were shooting out of her mysterious eyes. It should have relaxed him, but he was more on edge than he could ever remember. Just mere five days, and this so called creature had completely beguiled his senses and his mind. Add a crazy wedding house, all the more retarded extended family, and a demanding and blackmailing bride, a completely swooned brother, and a rather nosy family and the recipe for disaster was ready, simmering on high heat, ready to blow up.

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Posted: 13 years ago
resvd
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lolz...chanduuu!!!!
awsome precap...cracked me up at the poor state of Arnav...
awwiieee...he sounds too cute while being irritated...
n old ladies pulling out his cheek...
i can perfectly imagine his bewildered expression and red cheek...
waiting for the update now...

~~~ sam
Edited by sparklystarstud - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
can't wait for the parts.. i so enjoy reading all your chapters..

arnav's cheeks bruised due to aunties assault.. aunties are fulfilling their suppressed desires.. hehehehe

update soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hm..have I sprouted some psychic abilities then?

Major LOL at old ladies pinching our 'hotwa's' cheeks, bechara.. 😛
Gori chitti..That's just plain funny 😆

Waiting for the full thing!

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