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Posted: 13 years ago
#21

Wow...fabulous start...Loved it a lot!!


Thanks 4 mentioning my name n also sorry for d late comment.


Little busy right now..


But I loved ur work.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
i read all ur chapters till
now
i must say its awesome storyline
loved it
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
Wonderful Update.
Loved it.
Plz ipdate soon and thanks for thev p0ms.


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Posted: 13 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: aditi061

my condition after reading ur update
i wish aisi mistakes hoti hi rahe...
dono ek dusre ko kisi aur naam se jaante hai ya fir original naam se bhi jaante hain

thanks for commenting vll try to give the best story
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: asmaju

Wonderful Update.

Loved it.
Plz ipdate soon and thanks for thev p0ms.


thanks for commenting vl try to write best updates next🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: crazysky

i read all ur chapters till
now
i must say its awesome storyline
loved it
update soon

thanks🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Welcome🤗🤗

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loved the update... pls update soon...and pm me...
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Originally posted by: rhu90

loved the update... pls update soon...and pm me...

thanks and update is on the way🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART4:

TA BEACH...
Rey:so chale beach mein ghoomna hogai hey to😊
Kriya: ha chalo par ab hum kaha jaa rahi hai😊
Rey:meinne kaha tha na beach ke baad hum bandra-worli chalenge tho chale😊
Kriya:ho kk chale😛
WHILE DRIVING
Rey:are you enjoying did you feel comfortable in mumbai
Kriya:enjoyyy and i loved the place and ha bahut acha lag rahi hai mujhe koi uncomfort nahi feel ho rahi hai😉
Rey:so cool acha agai hum deko tho sahi bandra-worli nazara kaisi hai😉
Kriya :wow a tho bahut achi lag rahi hai😍
Rey:you known a raat par aur jyada beautiful lagti hai yaha ki nazara and surroundings
Kriya:hooo
AT EVENING...
Kriya:so next where
Rey:wait and watch
Kriya:hmm koi suprise place hey kya 😳
Rey:just like that its superb place to hang out😉
Kriya :ok kkk😊
Rey immediatly drved to the place
Kriya is in confussion state where she is going and y this driver is telling her to her its a suprise 😕
after so many confusions of kriya they reached a place where the crowd is there
Kriya:hey a kaise jagah hai😲
Rey:a mumbai ki famous club you can enjoy a lot in this club
Kriya(self):club...😕
Kriya:aisa kya hai is club mein itni crowd hai😕
Rey:wait and watch😉
THEY BOTH ENTERED IN CLUB...
after watching club inside kriya dont have any words to say almost she is in a shock 😲
because all around the club she can only watch the people who are dancing 😲
Rey:hey are you alright how is the place did you like it😳
Kriya(dreaming mode):wow 😍aisi club tho meine canada me deki thi par a cub tho mujhe aur jyada achi lag rahi hai aur apnapan bhi😊
Rey(self):hm kyu nahi lagegi meri favourite place jo hai😊
Rey:tho chalo us mask pehenlo😊
Kriya:kyu😕
Rey:kyuki iss club mein har din ek theme hoti hai is liye so chalo lets have the mask😉
Kriya:intresting...⭐️
Rey(self):intresting tho hai tum😍
in club all are dancing and enjoying a lot some are flirting with each other some are enjoying the music
all are tapping their feets to the beats of the music🥳 in club
DJ:so so guys lets start the bang of enjoy with dance guys you known very well aaj ki theme kya hai the mask dance and
but is mein hum kuch naya aur tadka lagane wale hai guys
all are wondered to hear what the suprise to come
DJ:guys guys dont be panic there is a mask dance battle in which you will get a spot light and you will dance for the music
did you all are in it
DJ:so boys and girls lets rock the dance floor
all are curiosly waiting for spot light while kriya thinking herself
Kriya(self):kya kare universe jii ab dance karu ya na karu iss club mein tho mein
kisiko nayi janti hu tho mein aaj ke liye sab ko dekti hu a sab kaise dance karte hai and uski styles kya hai
DJ:guys lets have the spot light to decide who will start the dance first here the spot light is coming to you guys
all are shouting to get spot light on them but the spot light spots on our one and only super cool dude REYANSHA SINGHANIA
DJ:so its the time to rock it man...
then Rey started his dance and all boys included he did an awesome hip hop and jazz steps
on which all others jaws drop including our kriya
Kriya(self):kriya a ladka dance bhi karta hai seriously how awesome dance he is doing universe jii
and dance dekke aise lag rahi hai ki koi proffesional dancer hai a
(guys you can imagine his dance on club with boys)
he stopped the dance as the music is completed
and aplauded by all in middle of the floor👏
Kriya(self):chalo kriya uske pass jakar usse appreciate karte hai appretiation to banta hai na itna acha dance jo kiya usne😳
while going to him the club lights went off and the spot light comes on KRIYA
DJ:hey gorgious its your time to rock the floor so come on ...
Kriya(self):a kya hai ab mujhe dance karna padega 😲
one unknown random boy
B:hey guys lagta hai dance nahi ati usse darr gayi hogi spot light dekkar😆
then she glares a angry look on that boy😡😡
B:hooo attitude ha dance ki D be nahi aati hai phir bi attitude dika rahi hai dekho😆
rey tries to interrupt but all in vain she cant tolerate that boy and gives an attitude to that boy 😈and moves towards the dance floor
while throwing her mask
and Rey catches her mask
Kriya:music...
she did an applausefull performance she did some hip hop steps and some twirls and did cart wheels
(you can see her performance in this below video my favourite song guys so i given link of it)
Rey(self):WOW awesome a ladki dance kar sakti hai 😲isne tho uski hobbies mein nahi pataya ki usko dance aati hai 😕
she ended her dance infront of rey in which their eyes meet starts their LLHH session 😍😍
their LLHH breaked by the people in the club giving hootings to both of them👏👏
and she went to that boy with full on attitude
Kriya: Dude Ab pata chala kisko dance ki D ati hai ya kisko nahi 👎🏼so dont dare to give challenge to anyone without knowing about them got it😉
B:sorry... 😔
and she reaches to rey
DJ:guys give heartful applause to this performance isnt awesome😛
then all lights went off and dj plays an slow and romantic number
Rey extends his hands to her in which she gives her hands with a cute smile for dance they did some mesmerizing steps by looking into both of their eyes withou breaking😍😍
for which all the other persons stood silently and watched their dance and the song ends all of the people in club appreciated both of them get seperated by the crowd in awkwardly😕
DJ:guys todays party is rocking you both rocked it man and aaj ki party ki KING and QUEEN ban gayi hai tum dono
Rey(self):wow KING and QUEEN in dreaming mode
and kriya gives a smile to rey😳
THEY BOTH CAME OUT FROM CLUB IN SILENCE
after silence on the way to parking lot
both in unison🤣
Kriya:you are an awesome dancer😍
Rey:you are an awesome dancer😍
again in unison🤣
Kriya:thanks😍
Rey:thanks😍
both laugh at each other 🤣🤣
Rey looks at her innocent laugh in dreaming mode😍
Kriya:hey tho chale😊
Rey:ha ha ya lets go😊
and at parking lot
Rey watches his car tyre is in flat position😲
Rey:damn ...
Kriya:kya hua😕
Rey:tyre flat karke bait gayi aur extra tyre bi nahi hai ghadi mein
Kriya:ooo 😲ab kya kare
Rey:ab hume paidal hi jana padega chalo chelte heydekte hai koi taxi milegi ki ya nahi😕
Kriya:ok chalte hai😕
WHILE WALKING
Rey:so tumne bataya nahi ki tumhari hobbies list mein dance bhi added hai 😊
Kriya:danceee😊
Kriya:dance meri hobby nahi a meri life hai kuch bhi karunga mein dance ke liye dance meri jonoon hai
Kriya:dance ki kasam(specially my favourite line guys)
Rey:dance ki kasam awesome 😍
Rey(self):isko dekh kar mujhe aise kyu feel ho rahi hai jaise ki me apni kareeb aur jaan pehchan si insan ke saath hu 😍
dude😲 wakeup aise soch na bhi math isko tum life mein pehli baar dekh rahi hu aur iska naam bhi pehli baar sun rahi hu apni lefe mein
she is MAYA MAYA vicky ki friend hai a and focus dude focus 😕
AFTER REACHING SINGHANIYA HOUSE
Kriya(self):ho god mein tho Granny ko call karna hi bhul hi gaya chall 😔
kriya call kar varna tum kal ko khaan barke dhaant sunani padegi Granny se
but her mobile is in switch off
Kriya(self):offo a battery bhi katam hogayi hai kya karu chalo landline se call karte hai😉
and she dails the number
in other hand rey checks his mobile and shocks😲 because he he got 40 miss calls from only one person none other than VICKY
Rey:rey a vicky ko kya hua mujhe itni miss calls diya chalo rey isse dail karte hai😕
tring tring🤣
Vicky:saala ab phone kiya tumne chalo tumko dekta hu mein
and he lifts call😡😡
Rey:hey dude wass up itni saare miss calls ha😊
Vicky:baath hi math karna mujhse tumko meine ek hi tho kaam kaha vo bhi tumne nahi kiya 😡
Rey:dude are you ok meine ab kya nahi kiya😕
in other hand kriya
Kriya:hello Granny😊
Granny:pari tum kaha ho tum teek to he na aur tumne apni mobile kyu switch off kiya aur ab baat bhi kyu nahi kar rahi ho tum😔
Kriya:aap mujhe baath karne dethi na tab😆 mein kuch kahu
Granny:acha batayiye aap kaha hai hamari driver aapko lekar itna pareshan hai aap usse kyu nahi milli usne abi bi mujhe
phone kiya ki aap aap abi tak usse nahi milli aur nahi aap ghar bhi pahuchi😭
Vicky:tumne kya kiya exactly dude tumne kuch bhi nahi kiya.😡 tumko meine kaha ki mera friend
MAYE ko receive karne ke liye par tumne nahi kiya aur usse airport mein hi intezar karvaya tumne😡 thanks to nilesh usne jakar 🤗
MAYE ko receive karke apna ghar le gaya varna aaj kya hoga
Kriya&Rey:what😲😲
Kriya:a kya bol rahi ho aap Granny mein hamari ghar mein hi hu😲
Rey:dude MAYA mera saath hi hai aur mein usko tumhare liye aaj itna ghumaaya ab aya hum dono ghar😲
Vicky:ghumayo to tumne kisi aur ko par MAYA to nil ki ghar par hai mein usse baath bi ki 😡
and he cuts the call
Granny:nahi beta lagta hai aap kisi galat admi ko apna driver samja beta aap😕
AT HALL ...
both unison😲
Kriya :iska matlab aap mera driver nahi hai aur a mera ghar nahi hai😕
Rey:iska matlab tum MAYA nahi hu aur tum koi aur hu😕
Rey(self):i have to go to nil's place and i have to clear all the confussions😕
Kriya:mujhe aur ek baar grannu ko call karke ab is baar kamse kamm us driver ki number lekar ghar pahuch na chahiye😕
Rey without telling anything to hurriedly drives his bike to nil's place
meanwhile kriya calls her granny
Kriya:hello granny aap jaldi apna driver ki number diji ye mein usko call karke apni ghar jaati hu😳
Granny :teek hai beta 😊
and kriya calls to her driver and tells him where she is
and drver reaches the place to her shock driver came by walk and she asks him
Kriya:aap humari driver hi hai na mujhe check karne do mujhe dubhara mistake nahi karni chahiye🤣
to isliye mein tumhe call karti hu bayya agar aapka number lag gaya na to aap meri driver hi hu🤣
and calls him
Kriya :lo number lag gaya👍🏼 to aap hi ho humara driver to chale wait a kya hai bayya ghadi kaha hai 😲
Driver:madam ji vo kya hai na hume car ki jaroorat nahi hai ab😊
Kriya:jaroorat nahi hai matlab ghar jana hai😲
Driver :kyun ki ghar tho aapki samne hi hai vo raha hamara ghar dekiya😊
and he shows the opposite mansion of singhaniya's mansion
GHAI'S MANSION
Kriya:kya a humara ghar hai 😲iska matlab mein iss stranger ki ghar ki samne hi rahne wali hu aaj se universe jiii😲
(guys ab hum kya kare universe jii ne pure plan ke saath kriya aur rey donno ki mansions amne samne hi bana diya tho)
Driver: to chaliye madam😊
Kriya still in shock😲
Kriya:ha chalo😕



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Edited by CHOCOLATEKRIYA - 13 years ago

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