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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: --Siva--

Res!!

Edit - Tomo! Too sleepy!


--Edited--

I'm very late, Ain't I?? I'm sorry! Was busy yesterday.!

Do u consider that one was vulgar? It was of emotions - Tease and love! Perfect portrayal of re-finding their love based on trust!

I was foolishly grinning thru out the update. I loved this cat and mice play!! Damaged goods! Ha ha!

I really enjoyed reading everything!!

Good work.

Thanks for the pm



ahhaah! aww thank you so much! <3 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Not VulGar at all! :)

You're an amazing writer!
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing!
sweet and sensuous!
i liked it!
i m finally catching up with all the update son this ff...brilliant work dear!



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Posted: 13 years ago
i just read your entire FF today and i must say, i LOVE IT! :D

continue soon! and i hope khushi and arnav share EVERYTHING about their past to each other! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
This FF is so good I read all the chapters in one go! :D

I really like the concept of it and I hope you continue soon!:)
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Posted: 13 years ago

I'm feeling quite low lately, diving, driving and art is quite literally driving my up a non-existant wall.



But here we go *sigh*



Chapter 20: Volatile




"So what were you saying about damaged goods?" He teased.




She blushed, redder than any red he had ever seen, it was slowly travelling down to the rest of her body where he followed it with his lips, rousing her further, effectively ending the conversation between them.




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Some may assume that Payal was horrible by nature? Others may assume that she was made this evil and then there were others, the ones whom could see past it all and see the lost child between the rifts of adulthood.




Child.




That's exactly what Payal was, a horrible child, who was told that she had to grow up, a child who was told that she was not allowed her ice cream that night.




A rather volatile child.




She grew up as an only child, a girl who was given everything within a bat of an eyelash, a girl who some may consider to be spoilt, to be rude, embarrassing and selfish but all had changed when Khushi had hopped into their lives. Her father decided to help her out regardless of her past, her father loved her, adored her and her had mother done the same up until that fateful day.




That day was probably the best day of Payals life, she had run in saying Khushi had stolen ice-cream from the local vendor, but really it was her and what followed was a thrashing of the worst kind, her ear would have been torn off if her father had not come in and stopped the tirade. Her mother beat her till she was yellowing from the fresh bruises and from then on anything that Payal wanted Khushi stole or took just because she was Khushi, be it her fathers love, or her school crush Khushi took it all and it was this that Payal used to set Garima alit, she would use khushi's past as a reminder of what kind of cheap daughter she was, use her cut hair, or acne marks to get her hit. She would use anything and everything and it would work.




But her father the saviour would come in and save her.




Up until that day.




That relished day she prided herself on.




A sinister smile crept up onto her face and she sighed in contentment resting against a fluffy pillow.




_ _




They were now half-lying half sitting on the sofa whilst they watched 'Kabhi Khushi Kabhi Gum', if anyone saw Arnav now they would assume him to be a clone dressed in the casuals he bought with him and resting against his wife's collar he looked too lazy too relaxed to be the shrewd manipulative business man, especially when he was watching a Bollywood movie, something only people could dream he would do.




He sighed against her skin when something caught his eye.




The forgotten brownies.




He rose in an abrupt movement causing his wife to moan out in protest.





"Where are you going Arnav?"





"Erm, I dropped something I'm just going to get it" He said, looking rather sheepish.





Her eyes followed him as he bent down to retrieve the pack of iced brownies he stood and extended the parcel towards her.





"What is it?"





"Open it and see!" He challenged.





She fingered the parcel with curiosity as her husband came and sat next to her, she caught a whiff of the fragrance and tore it open.





'He didn't' she kept saying to herself.





But he did, as her eyes took them in she kept on looking between her husband and the variously shaped brownies and then she leapt into her arms feathering kisses onto his face.




"You made" Kiss "Them" Kiss "For" Kiss "Me" She asked, her various kisses melting Arnav's firm control.




"Yes" He said laughing.




And that was when she kissed him on the lips making him laugh all the more, his laugh vibrating through her as his fingers met her hair, tangling between their softness.




Their soft pressed kisses were stopped as they felt something warm and sticky between them, Khushi was the first to feel it as all she was wearing was another one of Arnav's shirts which was quite low buttoned.




"Uh-oh" She said.




He laughed again, laughed out loud and said.




"No worries we can lick it off" He said an evil glint to his eye.




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There we go guys *shrugg* personally I'm not a big fan of this one but hey here we go. Do let me know what you think


-Aashifa

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Posted: 13 years ago
Res

*Edited

Didnt you say you make good brownies...so is this a way of connecting with Arnav, hain? ;) :D

I loved the brownie scene...sheepish Arnav is sooo cute! <3

Anyway, I liked this update a lot...in the sense that the comfortable sweet nature of ArHi was contrasted against that devil *dark look*

And Payal is demented, officially. Great. :p

But ArHi can handle demented. They are both slightly mad...and fully mad for each other! Lol!

Great job! :)
Edited by AngelTeen - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Res

--Edited--

Thanks to Rae, saw her last commented person in this thread.. So I knew either update or spamming and was ready for both! And it turned out to be an update! Thanks Rae!

Awww..! Arnav and Kushi! Damaged good is put up to proper use! Nice!!

Payal! OMG.. She was twisted like this from childhood. I thought it was unbalanced pampering between the sisters by their parents made her like this. But she made this condition to come! Attention attractor!!

Brownies! It was a romantic gesture.. So much!
Edited by --Siva-- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
a bit confused about the Payal part

Her mother beat her till she was yellowing from the fresh bruises and from then on anything that Payal wanted Khushi stole or took just because she was Khushi, be it her fathers love, or her school crush Khushi took it all and it was this that Payal used to set Garima alit, she would use khushi's past as a reminder of what kind of cheap daughter she was, use her cut hair, or acne marks to get her hit. She would use anything and everything and it would work.


Not sure who stole what. where does the beating by Garima fit in and Shashi to the rescue
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww tht was nice...
finally Arnav gave her the brownies n we have come to knw abt y payal hates khushi sooo much...
continue soon

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