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Originally posted by: pkriyaansh

and plzzz give me link of ur ff betrayed d end of love 2nd thread plzzz

k here it is

Chapter 2 :)

Both shouted : NO NO ! we will come out..

And then they sighed..

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KYA ! All shouted.. as this wasn't a small news…

A girl died because of him.. he loved that girl ! whats all this??

Everyone was confused so rey just soothe him for sometime till he stopped crying and then asked him about that girl..

Tell me what happened bro?? kon thi wo?? And u loved him?? U means really l-o-v-e??

He asked calmly but stretched the word Love..

Swayam looked at him feels good by looking at the soothing face… his calm voice was very friendly.. " She was my best friend.. we loved each other like hell.. but she died in an car accident .." he paused and those dreadful memories start flowing infront of his eyes like a movie… he gulped hard..

Rey feels the tension in the air and then rubbed his back.. " Its Ok ! " he smiled at swayam " But how this accident is related to u? and u mean that love? " rey pointed at sharon.. swayam continued the story " no ! more than that ! " all went to a big shock !... more than that?? God ! how much more??

" Actually we were in a relationship for 2 years ! you all are asking y is her death related to me?? Actually that day we fought and I said I will leave her and that moment she was in her car" he told them but all were confused ..

"We didn't got you ! tell us in detail !" Vicky demanded.. " Emmm guyz ! I think we should leave for the club.. don't u think u guyz are wasting this precious time for my Blah Blah ?" he said while trying hard not to look in their eyes… his pain was not bearable!

"SHUT UP" rey shouted… " What The Hell you think of urself? Han? U will alone bear all the pain?? Dimmit we are here for u !" he remonstrate against the pain he is going alone through…

"Ok I will tell it in full detail but we are going to the club too??? And that's my last word" he said.. emmm actually ordered !.. "Oh that's feckless!" rey giggled while all were just quietly listening to their conversation..

"What so ever ! lets go… I will tell you the whole story in car ! no buts !" he again ordered and rushed to change his clothes… and then all started their own words..

Girls as always rushed to their makeup and cosmetics accessories… and boys .. just to have a look on their selves.. they just look into the mirror to see that their clothes are appropriate on them or not.. and just to have a look on their messy hairs.. nothing else.. but girls see mirrors to.. emmm… u guyz know better ! (P.S – don't kill me .. I know m too a girl but its just a bad not so called reality :P )

The trio of them had their dinner… and they rushed to the club as it was one day for new year party and they have to perform on both days..

"Kritz ! MIND IT ! don't call me granny there… I HATE IT !" simmi eyed her and said like she was kriya's last living hope..

"K granny ! I willnt call u granny there" kriya shouted and banged the door hard and dashed towards the changing room..

"This girl Is totally insane.." she said with some sweet giggles.. "OH GOD ! I forgot to change because of this girl !" she rushed to her room to change…

After sometime they were done with their makeup, looks and all…

They were already late.. it was 10:00 and they just have 2 hours to spend here and after that as always they will disappear to an unkown place..

They reached at the club !

They heard shouting… The club was so obstreperous..ofcorse it was the manager shouting at a poor soul for some random mistake..and random music playing as the DJ was just checking tracks..

The trio were just giggling looking at the condition of the manager…

In the car , the girls were non stop talking and boys were just making some weird faces and taking glances at the girls as if they were hearing some blasts from them… in all this swayam was just smiling looking out of the window..

"You know what ! garrulity is in the blood of GIRLS !" rey commented while swyaam grinned wide at this.. " You know what ! kriya is so talkative.. har waqt meri baat kat tit hi.. she was the most lively girl I have ever met!! Meri baat bilkul nhi sunti thi ! and" swyaam was saying it in a go but rey interrupted him.. " Woahh dude ! tu kabse itna talkative ho gaya?? Hum to soch rahe the girls talkative hoti hen like ur kriya.. but here u go.. u r too so talkative.."

"HEY ! m nt talkative.. wo actually jab kriya ki baat ati he na to me thora super fast ho jata hun" he said smiling .. while all were listening to him with their jaws dropped… " Hahahaha ! I feel sorry for u dude ! to bikul pagal ho gaya he !" nil commented..

"Wo to me hun hi !" Swayam grinned widely while Sharon make disgusting faces… as she wasn't liking this so called kriya talk.. "whats in her which is not in me??" She thought..

Phewww m done with it..

I knw this isn't my way.. I tried of writing in a new way..

Hope u will like it.. temme if I should change it in my previous way of writing..
and guyz don't sue me cuz of kriyam.. this is just a beginning.. don't throw juttas and chappals on me til few more updates :P..

Then its on u :)

And yeah.. I want biggg comments as subah se likhne pe bethi hun.. and agar comment nhi kiay to next update nhi milega.. and mind it… bara wla acomments..

With lots of love..

-Ur Devil :)

res

Originally posted by: awesomeabshu

awesum update devil..

kya comment diya he.. !

Res

awesome updateee...

Good one..! thnxx for the update and the pm and update soon!