D3 SS- LIFE, DESTINY AND DEATH - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice one..update soon nd thank u for PM 😊
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Wow,it was awesome!! Just loved it!! 👏
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awesome update...
thanx for the pm...
love to read such familiar place names..raipur,durg...😆
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Twas a nice descriptive update to set things rolling...waiting for the next part already😊
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Amazing update:):)

Luvd it very much:):)
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Nice part 😊...
ViHa scene was cute 😳...
They reached to thier destination...
Now waiting for the others to come soon 😊...
Update soon...
N thanks for the pm 😊.
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Nice starting...loved the Vicky and Nil part and Thank God, SwaRon went to the place together and are no separated like ViHa !!!
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nice start...nicky part was really cute...wow they reached their destination...now i am waiting for the next update...its good that swaron r together...will be waiting to read about them...update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guys back with the update..sry ff ke update ko leke v were busy. Here's chapter 2 😃 thank you everyone for all those likes and comments , it really feels osam to see that !!🤗.beleve it or not v hv read all d cmmnts abt umm..dun noe , so many times that we dun evn remember!..😳

Here's chapter 2

Enjoy !!😃

CHAPTER 2

Welcome!!!

And they both gave a bone crushing hug to Sharon ( poor sharon sabse aage khadi thi 😆)

Sharon: guys..i vl die!!

Nilisha: oops, missed you shar

Sharon: ughh!!...i swear u do it next next tym and m not meeting u guys ever again!!

They both looked at each and smiled sheepishly

Now they went to the others who were d next targets and gave all d same tight hug

simmi: ughh I hate u guyzz ?

swayum: maar hi dalo!!

Vishakha: ab chale??.. ya yhe aantim sanshkar krna hai..( aantim sanshkar : the death ritual in Hindu religion )

They both giggled and let d others enter in.

The house was neatly painted in white. Wall hangings, portraits, and all sorts of decorative things was perfectly there. They walked around d whole house .The house looked even more beautiful from inside; they had to admit.

Simmi: osam place!!

Bharat: sahi mei, ghar mast dikh rha hai

Nilisha: akhir sajaya kisne hai

Suchit (softly, only boys cud hear him): shaadi se phele hi duba degi

All d boys started laughing and gals givng them a look that says " are u people high??..or u have seriously lost it ".

Suchit: okay..okay guys tum log ke rooms clean ho chuke hai, u can choose vch one

Sharon: umm..actually I was thinking ki hm sab sath rhe

Vishakha: so we 3 gals in one room n they all in other, we will take ground floor one*pointing towards a room*

Simmi: hmm

Vicky: cool we vl take d 1st floor one in left.

Nilisha: okay then, tumhare luggage vanha phuch jayenge

Vicky:kay and they all left for their rooms

The rest of the day went off peacefully

Rey had later called them to inquire if they reached safely.

Also the laila-majnuz separated talked with each other n then d frnz :). All the differences were sorted out long ago and now they were now close frnz. They were a group, one group, and one team.

Later dat night they all had their dinner together. And went off to sleep quickly as they were vry tired.

The next morning

In Mumbai

All d six (who din't go) were in RDX's office

RDX: well maine isley tumlog ko bulaya to inform you all dat there is sum chnges in d plan. The board of directors hve dicided to cut off d last part of d event so..almost everything has been done now n u all don't have to do anything more.

All: umm..okay sir

RDX; guyzz really sorry for bothering u guys in d semester holidays

Rey: aare..no sir,it's okay. We are always ready to help *smiles*

Kriya: yess sir

RDX: okay then, u guys can leave now. Enjoy Your holidays

Neha: okay sir

Rey: umm.. sir do u want us to again go through d whole planning n data once

RDX: it's not really required. Yesterday I had checked the introduction ceremony n it was reaaly well planned and I have seen u guys wrk,I noe u all hv handled everything very well * smiles*

Kriya: okay sir n thank you

Rey: okay sir we vl leave

Outside RDX'S office

Nilesh: kamm khatam toh ab hm sab bhi durg ke liye nikal skte hai

Neha: neha excited meeting babu *wide smile *

Rey: guyzz.. toh mai aisa karte h unhe infrm kr dete h kihm kl aa rhe h, okay??

All: hai

Rey calls dwayum and tells him everything

Rey returnd aftr a while

Rey: kay guyz everthing's done ..Suchit ne apne hamare liye new tickets bhi kara diya, evn though I insisted not too but sunta kaha hai..

Amar: sb ho gaya tb hm kal niklenge

Rinni : I wonder what will I wear for engagement

Neha: me too thinking

Kriya: maine bhi nhi socha hai

And all d three gals walked away discussing abt the dresses, makeup n ol

Amar: ye lalkiya toh aise bol rhe hai daithe inke engagement ho ..huhh( ye ladkiya toh aise bol rhe hai jaise inke engagement ho )

All the three look at each other

All: girls !! n break into laughter

DEHRADUN

All had their breakfast and were sitting in d living in room catching up vth each other.

The engagement was scheduled after 1 week.

It's then dat Suchit informed dat d engagement had to be postponed as his parents were abroad and their flights got cancelled, he got d news few minutes before; he added.

The lousins were left with no work. As Suchit and Nilisha had insisted ,they all had cum here 1 week before but here they were and they were not allowed to even do a slight work.

Day was just passing by doing nothing at all but talking. Suchit, Nilisha and lousins knew each other from a long time.

It was about 4 in evening.

They were all bored

Nilisha suggested that they shud roam around in d city as they were new there and all had cum there for the frst time

After many attempts from both, they were finally successful in convincing that everything is under control and they shud explore the city

All sighed in unison, u can never argue vth sum ppl n that first counted these two ,they thought.

After about half an hour , they were ready for the small tour. After swayum insistence Suchit was convinced that they don't need a driver and they probably wouldn't get lost !

Suchit: guys..tumlog driver toh nhi le jaa rhe ho.. n i noe it useless trying convincing u guys. Jst be careful okay.

Simmi: yaa Such!!..v vl fine

Lousins: byee

Suchit and Nilisha :byee

Swayum drove.

They were in no mood for site seeing so they decided to roam around aimlessly. As the house was in outskirts of city they decided that they wud be in outskirts only.

They were in a ghat sort of area. The roads went in circular round those small hills. They were enjoying themselves to d fullest. The nature's beauty was magical. In between the mad rush in Mumbai they all were addicted to, this was so new to them, the calmness, the peace, they simply loved it and wished for something like this back in Mumbai .

It was about 6 o' clock now and it was past dusk .it was getting dark now and Nilisha and Suchit would probably worry for them so they decided to head back. Swayum took a U turn and they started their way back.

After about 15 minutes Swayum suddenly stopped the car with a jerk.

Sharon: what happened??

Bharat: kya hua be??

Swayum pointed towards the road..guyss!!

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Do leave ur reviews 😊

Do hit the like button and comment 😳

All the parts are pre-planned so sry if it was a boring 1 😔

Criticzm /suggestion welcomed 😊...but do tell us what u think 😊


- Kanishtha and Shreya


Edited by muzzy_sk - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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superb keep it up
update soon

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